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Reviewer: Ryebread9600 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2025 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 4 (Ending)

Amazing 

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2024 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 4 (Ending)

Great story and yess to a spinoff!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19 2024 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 4 (Ending)

I would like a spin off from chapter one, where when Marcus is almost eaten with the apple he actually is, especially if it includes full tour, and Andrea and Marcus still getting together at the end.

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2024 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow this story was great I loved it especially the ass parts (speaking as an ass fan lol) 

and yeah totally should do a spin off!!

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