[Report This]Date: September 17 2024 2:38 PM Title: Brittney's New Remote - Prologue
This has absolutely been a golden standard so far. I'm really excited to see what you have in mind.
[Report This]Date: August 20 2024 1:34 AM Title: Isaac's Dilemma
Loving this story so far. Here's to hoping Isaac stumbles onto Brittney's thong he finds on the floor. A perv like him wouldn't be able to resist, just gotta hope she has mercy
[Report This]Date: August 20 2024 1:27 AM Title: Brittney's New Remote - Prologue
Really enjoying the premise, the writing style and character building in this story - I'm starting to sense a slow progression toward enjoying the newfound power she has, even if simply out of pure curiosity.
I do enjoy multiple size variances (Though admittedly I am partial to micro and nano!) along with the "experimental" path it seems to be going down, keep up the good work ^^
[Report This]Date: August 20 2024 1:22 AM Title: Powers Revealed
I welcome Britt's wise and omnipotent rule.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2024 1:09 PM Title: Brittney's New Remote - Prologue
I seriously love your style of slowburn, keeping it intriguing like this ain't easy. Also love Brittney's personality, keep it up!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2024 8:03 PM Title: Lost and Found
Another good chapter. The size is a little small for my taste. I prefer that 1-6 inch range, 3 being ideal. But I see you mention multiple size range so that's good. I like the long chapters as well. Looking forward to seeing what Brittney has in store for Issac.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the feedback! I will say I do share the same interest as 3 inches is my general favorite and certainly to be expected at some point. This story will definitely feature multi-sizes sizes and will admittedly be one of my 'experimental' stories as this is my first time writing about it. I definitely do plan to change things up as I would think micro-sizes may hinder the progress of the story but we'll see how it goes. There's just a lot of possibilities to be added.
I'm pushing myself to start writing more chapters that are longer as my goal is to do 4k minimum for each chapter. The newest chapter was counted to be around 6k words and would love to keep the flow of that. I started to put more detail into descriptions and words I normally wouldn't use to expand my vocabulary with my writings. Overall I do believe it made a difference and will try my best to continue the path for future chapters and stories.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2024 5:59 PM Title: Powers Revealed
Yes!! I am really enjoying this story so far. I like where it's going. Maybe Brittney shrinks her brother or parents too, has a little fun. Feels like she might shrink her friend Stephanie at some point. Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!
I have been gathering ideas for future events, perhaps with her brother specifically. Hopefully Brittney can be strong enough to deal with Stephanie!
[Report This]Date: June 18 2024 6:51 PM Title: Brittney's New Remote - Prologue
Good stuff so far, I am intrigued!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Date: June 18 2024 1:03 PM Title: Brittney's New Remote - Prologue
I love the combination of a a playful and aloof girl with low empathy and a remote that can shrink things to unfathomable sizes! I definitely hope you continue this.
Ideas I would suggest are shrinking someone so small the remote can no longer detect them, shrinking girls in her room for tiktoks or something and they end up lost and forgotten, shrinking a bus only to discover a whole cheerleadering team is inside and so on.
Definitely some micro and nano sizes and aware to unaware/forgotten/uninterested scenarios.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I certainly do expect myself to continue this and work on a chapter in the near future.
I love the idea of someone shrinking too small, it would be a great idea to add at some point. I do plan to add various of size interactions, unaware stuff even. How I have this story setup is having side-stories for those that are left behind and forgotten to tell their own story. Those references will be made the further the story progresses.
But I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
[Report This]Date: June 18 2024 8:18 AM Title: Brittney's New Remote - Prologue
I am immediately intrigued and will be keeping an eye out! Love the username
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, glad you're enjoying the story so far, I love the username as well!