Reviewer: BB9909 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2024 12:34 PM Title: BLAST OFF

That was a good story, I enjoyed reeding it so much. I liked how you mad Sara shrink down and waste her life for something as stupid as her mother just wanted bigger tits to have a better sex life. I also like the idea of that she was under her kids brothers mercy.

my feedback would be that, for me it would be so much interesting if Sara had one brother and one sister instead of 2 brothers. it would be fun to see her serving a small purpose of being locked in a cage for her won protection and under her little sister`s supervision in her room all day maybe next to her hamster pet for example. never allowed to get out and wondering around the house cuz its too dangerous foe her. and every one in a thousand times she is out with the family her little sister decide when and how long  it will be. it would be fun to see Sara getting angry and protest but can`t do anything. 

also I think it would have been more fun if the mother would have moved on quicker than that, like in a couple of days, and then going back to normal parting and living her life. 

I also thought that it would be so hot if Sara was older than that like she is 30 or 29 and have a successful career and some girly party friends too. it would be so fun to see how it would look like when her parents let her kind and sweetheart little 9 or 10 years old look after her cuz she a princess and get everything she wants. to see Sara`s lil sis speaks with so much honor respect to her friend but she speak with overprotective mom tone with her while Sara is watching her friends speak with her new Guardian like they have allows spoken to her before like a kid that she really is. 

maybe also if Sara has a teen cousin that she use to babysit coming over and see the new treatment she will get from her too.

I like to mention that Im personally a fan of normal Giantesses and giants, meaning by that, I dont  really like the super mean and evil giantesses where they threat and purposely torture with laughter and all. I think the real torture for a shrunken person is to see everyone normal is living there life partying, dancing ,having sex Infront of them as if nothing weird going on as if its has always been normal for the tiny person to be tiny. they move on fast and so casually change their treatment. torture is to be forced to touch them when they hold you their sweat and smell get all over you never take what ever you say seriously, to be kicked out of grownups world being left to kids to look after you to teach them responsibility and innocently use your life to make mistake and learn  , seeing their real unperfections that the normal size wont see so up and close like their boogers and leftover food on the teeth the toe jam....etc. and to make it worse all this is happening because you have a bad luck that is all life just decided that you should have a hard life while seeing your friend and neighbors and family giants free and happy. 

Have you seen the movie four Christmases 2008. i remember when Kate was chasing her little niece into the jumping house and then the kids where just innocently playing with her but she actually being tortured by these lil kids while at the same time her mother and sister are having a real grownups time. she was calling for their help but her sister just thought its cute she is playing with her 7 y old daughter and they just waved to her while she was crying to be saved from the kids amusement . imagen she shrunk down and her mother even though she loves her but she let her live in a cage in her sister`s daughter`s room. that would be a great story.

love your style and loved the story just want to share my thoughts.

Author's Response:

il definetly keep these ideas in mind for future storys thanks!, i like your ideas of things just being normal for normal people and having tiny people interacting witht he world, people oblivious to just how dangerous it is for them really, 

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2024 1:20 PM Title: One...

This story has been interesting 

Author's Response:

Thank you ^^ , I aim to please ^^