Date: August 01 2024 5:05 AM Title: Liberated from darkness
Well this is new. Usually I come across stories with torture from the main larger character. Not finding a tortured tiny to care for. Not a fan of torture in general but curious on how this goes
Author's Response:
Feel the same honestly. Hope you enjoy the story
Date: July 15 2024 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A new hand touches the tiny
Good story. I'm waiting for Jack to start talking.
Author's Response:
"......."
Date: July 10 2024 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A new hand touches the tiny
Neat to see that the research he suffered for didn't result in no results. Cardin got what he deserved. Love seeing more girls introduced, especially Pyrrha!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Trying to add some variety to the story
Date: July 02 2024 1:25 AM Title: Liberated from darkness
An excellent story, and an even better RWBY story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback. Hope I don't ruin it with future chapters
Date: June 21 2024 6:24 AM Title: Liberated from darkness
Don't misunderstand! The story is fantastic. Slow burn just means that it develops slowly, rather than IMMEDIATELY ramping up. I mean it in a good way, not a bad way. It means that the story is developing, not immediately going into smut or action just for the sake of doing it. You're doing a great job, it makes for a much better story, I agree!
Date: June 21 2024 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Cozy Morning
Another wonderful chapter, though much more on the wholesome side! Its funny that as he starts to feel better, Jack's starting to get a bit more desire while Blake is like "nah, he doesn't feel that way." about it. Curious to see if we get any girl on girl much later in the story since this feels quite slow burn (not complaining, its awesome). You're doing great, man!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your input. Taking a wild guess that slow burn means slow to get good, but I just feel a steady buildup is better than sudden action.
Date: June 17 2024 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Cleaning up
Fantastic story so far! Extremely believable behavior all around from every character so far. Very nice to see some spiciness this chapter. You're doing great!
Author's Response:
Great to hear. Felt like I was rushing the story at some points.
Date: June 15 2024 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Pampering
Hey just wanted to say I really enjoy your writing style. The first chapter is engaging and captures the reader attention. Have to say I was looking forward to chapter 2 and you delivered! Love the interactions with Blake and tiny so far. Can't wait to read and unravel the many mysteries in the upcomingchapters. Thank you!
Author's Response:
I appreciate your input on my story. But please do not spam reviews
Date: June 15 2024 1:39 PM Title: Liberated from darkness
Hm, I need your four digits for the discord rather thwn just username. Ah well. I’ll just wait for the next update. Hope it comes soon.
Date: June 14 2024 3:09 PM Title: Liberated from darkness
Hm, do you have a Discord? I'd love to discuss RWBY giantess fics with you :)
Author's Response:
I do, but rarely use it. Mrpc601.
Date: June 14 2024 9:24 AM Title: Liberated from darkness
Ooh, a RWBY story! These are sadly rare around these parts. And a Blake focused one too. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I’m just as surprised by the lack of RWBY on this site. Thanks for enjoying my idea.
Author's Response:
I’m just as surprised by the lack of RWBY on this site. Thanks for enjoying my work