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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2025 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Blast from the Past

Good chapter. Neo was gonna have some fun but unfortunately for her got it cut short. Happy that Jack is back with Blake. It seems that this episode has clarified the feelings Blake has for Jack in her own mind, as well as the shock of the situation just making her more willing to be more forward.

I wonder if Yang and Blake have anything between them here like they do in canon. Yang has been somewhat interested in Jack herself, so if they do maybe some sort of three-way develops?



Author's Response:

They have a canon relationship? Huh. Well, I’m still cooking 

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2025 9:57 AM Title: Liberated from darkness

Following up on your reply, how do I contact you? The message system on this site is broken. Can do Discord if need be!



Author's Response:

Mrpc601


people ask me for the 4 digit code but that doesn't seem to exist anymore

Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2024 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Into Vale

Love the story! Makes me want to watch RWBY, which I've never seen before. Unfortunately, looks like that series is currently in limbo and is streaming nowhere? But back to your story, I like the group dynamics a lot, with Blake being superprotective, the others being a little jealous, and Yang being mischievous towards the situation. And in general the story falls into my favorite tropes as well, with a giantess protecting a tiny and needing to deal with all the complications that come from their power dynamic (especially liked early in the story when she was trying to give him the medicine and had to chide herself for making it seem like she wasn't giving him a choice). I'll be watching this story going forward! Let's hope Jack isn't too lost!



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully I won't disappoint

Reviewer: iambeowulf Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2024 10:29 AM Title: Liberated from darkness

Solid story so far! Do you take story requests?

Author's Response:

Sure?

Reviewer: Puddin Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2024 5:05 AM Title: Liberated from darkness

Well this is new. Usually I come across stories with torture from the main larger character. Not finding a tortured tiny to care for. Not a fan of torture in general but curious on how this goes 



Author's Response:

Feel the same honestly. Hope you enjoy the story

Reviewer: Wrarlomas Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 15 2024 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A new hand touches the tiny


Good story. I'm waiting for Jack to start talking.



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"......."

Reviewer: Sjelenkain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2024 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 5 - A new hand touches the tiny

Neat to see that the research he suffered for didn't result in no results. Cardin got what he deserved. Love seeing more girls introduced, especially Pyrrha! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Trying to add some variety to the story

Reviewer: Jsmith20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2024 1:25 AM Title: Liberated from darkness

An excellent story, and an even better RWBY story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your feedback. Hope I don't ruin it with future chapters

Reviewer: Defiad Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2024 6:24 AM Title: Liberated from darkness

Don't misunderstand! The story is fantastic. Slow burn just means that it develops slowly, rather than IMMEDIATELY ramping up. I mean it in a  good way, not a bad way. It means that the story is developing, not immediately going into smut or action just for the sake of doing it. You're doing a great job, it makes for a much better story, I agree!

Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 21 2024 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Cozy Morning

Another wonderful chapter, though much more on the wholesome side! Its funny that as he starts to feel better, Jack's starting to get a bit more desire while Blake is like "nah, he doesn't feel that way." about it. Curious to see if we get any girl on girl much later in the story since this feels quite slow burn (not complaining, its awesome). You're doing great, man!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your input. Taking a wild guess that slow burn means slow to get good, but I just feel a steady buildup is better than sudden action. 

Reviewer: Defiad Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2024 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Cleaning up

Fantastic story so far! Extremely believable behavior all around from every character so far. Very nice to see some spiciness this chapter. You're doing great!



Author's Response:

Great to hear. Felt like I was rushing the story at some points. 

Reviewer: Shozkyia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2024 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Pampering

Hey just wanted to say I really enjoy your writing style. The first chapter is engaging and captures the reader attention. Have to say I was looking forward to chapter 2 and you delivered! Love the interactions with Blake and tiny so far. Can't wait to read and unravel the many mysteries in the upcomingchapters. Thank you! 

Author's Response:

I appreciate your input on my story. But please do not spam reviews

Reviewer: storylover543 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2024 1:39 PM Title: Liberated from darkness

Hm, I need your four digits for the discord rather thwn just username. Ah well. I’ll just wait for the next update. Hope it comes soon.

Reviewer: storylover543 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2024 3:09 PM Title: Liberated from darkness

Hm, do you have a Discord? I'd love to discuss RWBY giantess fics with you :)



Author's Response:

I do, but rarely use it. Mrpc601. 

Reviewer: storylover543 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2024 9:24 AM Title: Liberated from darkness

Ooh, a RWBY story! These are sadly rare around these parts. And a Blake focused one too. Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I’m just as surprised by the lack of RWBY on this site. Thanks for enjoying my idea. 



Author's Response:

I’m just as surprised by the lack of RWBY on this site. Thanks for enjoying my work

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