Date: June 15 2024 4:31 AM Title: Friend
It's a really good story, if you'd consider shrinking her even more
Date: June 14 2024 5:23 PM Title: Work
It's a shame you locked the size in at a 12th their original height. You could have a lot of fun with some cumflation with a bigger girl or cockvore or even sperm hentai with a much smaller one...
Nice read so far, though!
Author's Response: Yea, I did go with 1/12th as a rule of thumb, but after the initial part with Emily I was thinking about writing scenes with different sizes, but I'll see when I get there!
[Report This]Date: June 14 2024 6:42 AM Title: Work
Thank you for the new chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it too. Especially Courtney getting off to the thought that she may be interacting with Emily's friends/acquaintances while going about her day to day life with her wedged firmly against her anus. I can only imagine Courtney's thrill if Emily's parents eventually came to the store searching for her, a few days too late to save her and totally unaware of their tiny daughter suffering right under their noses.
As for when Courtney finally moves on to a new toy... It would be incredible if she films the disposal process for later enjoyment. I feel like this is something that is often overlooked in the size fetish scene. There's just something so incredibly hot about a woman/futa filming the magical final moments for 'future enjoyment'. Imagine just how many more toe-curlingly satisfying loads Courtney can spurt out over the coming years to a filmed closeup of Emily's final panicked struggles and messy fate. She could even show the footage to naive new toys as a chilling warning of what 'might' happen if they don't do their very best to please.
Anyway another great chapter, I hope you don't mind me rambling on with my ideas. I look forward to whatever cruel and twisted plight you cook up for Emily next.
Author's Response:
There was certainly some foreshadowing with that girl at the store. :)
I like the idea of filming Emily's last moments, I hadn't thought of adding it in this story but now I will.
I don't mind the rambling. Sometimes I get some ideas I can add or play with. Sometimes I have a similar idea but I'm sure if it's worth writing a chapter or scene around it and it can convince me otherwise.
[Report This]Date: June 12 2024 6:07 AM Title: Adoption
This really hit all the right buttons. I hope you find the motivation/inspiration to add more, there simply isn't enough cruel and degrading futa content out there.
Perhaps you could finish it off with her eventually "disposing of her little sex toy in a way which makes her cock feel good"? Even obedient toys get boring after a while, right? Would love to see some cock crush while humping her into the table, or literally drowning her in the namesake of this story. Perhaps slightly mangling her with the former so that she can't tread coom/piss in the latter?
Author's Response: It would definitely be a fitting end. I like the idea of gradually making things worse for Emily, and the final chapters will probably contain some of what you mentioned.
"Even obedient toys get boring after a while, right?"
I agree, I also don't really want the story to be about making Emily obedient. Courtney doesn't want to break Emily's resolve, she just wants to break her, you know?
Date: June 12 2024 2:28 AM Title: Adoption
Wow! That was one of the best chapters I’ve read in a little while! Really hope there’s more someday but even if not, I appreciate you for posting this!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed