[Report This]Date: May 23 2025 9:04 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Another excellent chapter, everytime you post i know it's gonna be a banger. Suggestions include more of Amy's feet, would love some unaware nanobot shrinkage with her
Author's Response:
Oh we're getting there, trust me!
Thanks for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: May 22 2025 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part II)
Definitely didn’t disappoint with part 2. Just under 29k words! The POV change was great, enjoyed seeing how it played out from both sides.
Looking forward to the morning after, hope the alcohol and hangover doesn’t leave her too forgetful of the previous fun ;) she might be liable to forget about something while in a rush to get to work. Especially if he’s not moving around much, could be mistaken as something more mundane.
Feel like their relationship will be a ‘little’ strained after he gets out of his current predicament, alcohol can only be blamed so much lol. Would like to Emma make a reappearance, she’s probably the kindest of the cast (at-least, Steve might think so, after this chapter), so she’d be his best bet for getting away from Amy for a day or two without as much danger.
She’d get the opportunity to cheer him up, earn some points with him… and also push some boundaries with her one-sided crush. Would love to see some accidental/reluctant panty entrapment, that’s probably my favorite, especially if the pleasure/thrill of it makes them not remove the tiny at the first opportunity… or the second, to their guilt.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter! You definitely cooked with this one, definitely my favorite in the story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!! Funny you mention that. We're about to get back to Emma since we've had a break for a few chapters. She's got some stuff to figure out with Ashley, Becky, graduation, a prudish "traditional family values" mom...
That scenario sounds great. Definitely something I'd be into exploring.
Date: May 22 2025 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part II)
Loved it! And in regards to your response to my last review, youve basically hinted that anything I might have requested is already on its way! You keep knocking it out of the park and then hinting even better stuff is on the way.
But I am looking forward to the return of Emma, Im a boob guy, and I am hoping she continues to outgrow her bras!
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for the review. Yup, hard at work on prior requests...
Date: May 09 2025 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part I)
Amazing new chapter (or start of a new chapter) loved the teasing and the hints of what is to come. Really looking forward to the rest of this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for always taking the time to leave a review. It hasn't gone unnoticed. I'd be happy to work in a specific request as a thank you.
I've definitely worked a few requests into Chapter 13, so let me know if you see something you like! I think it'll be worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2025 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part I)
Good start for the chapter! The wait isn't that bad, considering how large each of the chapters you post are lol, haven't seen too many authors upload with the level of consistency and quality that you have. Didn't notice any typos or anything, but the the formatting seems to have got butchered when you moved it onto here.
I'd recommend breaking the chapter into two if instead of just updating chapter 13: I don't think it would bring this story back onto 'most recent' if you did the latter, and chapter 13 ends in a good enough spot to break them.
Honestly I have no idea what your favorite gts genre is lol, by frequency in this story, I'd guess some form of entrapment? Since she is drinking, maybe she is more rough then usual in the next part? There was a story on here called 'Kevin and Lucy', that did that pretty well, but it died the very next chapter :( Or maybe it will be something else entirely, looking forward to what you're cooking up for us!
Author's Response:
That is an EXCELLENT point about the "Most Recent" thing. I will take your advice and split it into two. Thank you for the positive review!
Date: May 07 2025 4:06 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Very Very nice sotry. Hope you still go on writing :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm plugging away lol. Just takes a while. Thank you for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: April 05 2025 2:06 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Always enjoy this story. Plot development is always needed. Hopefully it is setup for the next chapter. I hope that we get more nanobot fun. Maybe he learns more about the risks involved from an unaware wife at that size? I'd love some kind of bathroom scenario, not everyone's cup of tea though. Keep the good stuff coming!
Author's Response:
Realized I never responded to this but I think you're gonna like the beginning of Chapter 14.
Thanks for the review!
Date: April 04 2025 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
Love the development. Always a fan of plot chapters. I liked how Amy is starting to think about breaking up with him. Would love to see her end up cheating on him.
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for taking the time to leave a review!! Still not sure where our main couple will ultimately end up. We'll see where the story takes me.
[Report This]Date: April 04 2025 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
You will never hear me complain that a story is focused on.. the plot of the story. I love how these characters play off of each other! I'm not sure if I'm wanting Amy and Steve to stick together at the end or not. Reading the very real feeling arguements and both of their internal thoughts makes it feel so real.
On the note of a new site; I've set up an account on SizeFiction and it's pretty decent! It's missing a couple features and the mobile site isn't great but I'm happy to have it. I would recommend trying it out at least
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review!! Glad you liked it. Yeah, my experience with sizefiction.net has been limited to mobile so far, and I found it confusing.
The whole reason I stopped posting this story on Giantess City was because I had to reformat all the italics and spacing every time. This site lets me copy and paste from Word and it just works. If sizefiction.net has a similar setup, I might give it a go.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2025 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
Finally got around to reading this story a little while ago, it's good! Like the variety of themes you have in here, even though I'm not a foot enjoyer, its done well and is fun to read. Its funny how Steve keeps ending up going down the backs of their pants, he might be a little bit cursed for that to happen so many times lol, he has such bad luck I'm not sure Amy will believe him after all this. You have a funny cast of characters in this, they all feel well written and have nice interactions with each-other.
The unaware and 'unaware' parts are great, the chapters with Alison and Emily were my favorites, with Emily panicking and inadvertantly putting Steve into a more dangerous situation, and Alison casually playing sports with him in her underwear. Also, Becky pretending not to notice him and toying with him right infront of Amy is nice, haven't seen something like that on this site before. Hope to see more of her schemes to 'unknowingly' use him lol; bonus points if she puts him in a situation too embarrassing for her to 'admit' he's there and get him out herself, only to slowly realize that she may have gone further than she should have as the day/night goes on.
I'm indifferent about other sites - if you want to post on others, I'm personally fine with it as long as you keep posting here too. I've not had any real issues with this site, its fine at what it does.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for leaving a review!! I like that scenario you depicted for good old depraved nerd Becky. I'll see if I can work it in somewhere.
And to be clear, I really didn't have any intentions of moving somewhere else, absent someone providing a compelling reason for doing so. I'm not privy to what the outrage is about, but I have seen a number of pretty prolific, high-profile authors on the site move elsewhere unexpectedly.
Date: March 13 2025 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Gross Negligence
Really great to see this chapter after the wait! I greatly appreciate your distinct tone and writing style. It's not easy to find work so well fleshed out and realistic. It's impressive to me that you think about how his situation would differ from the fantasies we've all read so many times in the past, and it makes your story stand out, and feel much more immersive to the reader. I really loved the fart section, and would love to see more of that in the future, but I am always glad to see this story get another addition
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm glad somebody picked up on the attempts to draw a contrast between the fantasy we all imagine and the cold reality of it. I've seen other stories on here use to great effect, so I can't claim credit for it being a new idea or anything. But I was definitely making the effort, so it's appreciated that it was noticed.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2025 6:58 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Loving it, the smut is top tier and the characters are all enjoyable. I know you're busy but if you'd ever consider accepting commissions for a chapter I'd be willing to pay
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks so much for the kind words. As I mentioned at the outset of the story, I'm actually kind of determined NOT to charge anything for content. There are two reasons for that:
(1) I miss the old days of this stuff just being available without a paywall. I cast no aspersions and make no judgments about those who have found a way to monetize this. More power to them, as far as I'm concerned. Everyone benefits from more content and nobody's forcing you to pay for stuff. I just feel like asking for money is against my core mission.
(2) I'm not a writer or a content creator. I'm a lawyer for my day job and just do this for fun and to give back a little to the community. It would disingenuous to charge like I'm a professional, especially since I can't give any guarantees of reasonable production timeframes with life getting in the way so often.
That said, my middle ground is trying to incorporate suggestions and requests where the story allows. For instance, I had no intentions of having our hero shrink further, but a lot of people asked for it, so I shoehorned it in. Feel free to make a request as a review on another chapter (I don't think this site has a direct message system?), or shoot me an email to doctor.weird017@gmail.com.
Thanks again!!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2025 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
Thanks for your efforts, really good one!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
I'm so happy to see you back and congratulations on the new house! I just always assumed you were cooking AND I WAS RIGHT!
I love the characterization and arguments this chapter. I personally care more about the characters than the smut at this point
Author's Response:
Thank you!! It's a lot work (who knew that water softeners need salt refills and lawns don't mow themselves?), but happy to finally have equity in something in my 40s.
Glad to hear that about characters vs. smut. That means I'm doing something right. You're supposed to give a shit about them, which enhances the rest of the stuff.
[Report This]Date: January 30 2025 11:13 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Absolutely love this story! Any chance you could do a side one-off about Emma and Becky’s propeller first time? Those two make a great couple and you’re fantastic at writing sex scenes.
Also, any chance I could contact you about a story request? The contact feature on the site is broken, so if you have email or Discord I could reach you at let me know.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for the kind words. I'm not planning on letting us miss their first full time together, don't worry.
As to requests, as I mentioned at the opening of the last chapter, I'm just a dude doing this for fun when he has spare time. And that spare time is rather limited what with actually being a lawyer and having bought a house. Currently, I have no plans to do anything other than this one story. The good news is that this one will go on for a while first.
Date: January 29 2025 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
Glad to see you back! I was starting to lose all hope! Another amazing chapter, I love the direction you are going with this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! You've been nice enough to leave several reviews. You're one of the readers I had in mind when I said thank you for sticking with it.
Date: January 29 2025 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
Glad to see you back! I was starting to lose all hope! Another amazing chapter, I love the direction you are going with this.
Date: January 26 2025 8:56 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Hope you return!
Author's Response:
Hello! Thanks for reaching out. I didn't forget about this story!! I mentioned this in my response to someone else's review, but my laptop keyboard broke. Then I bought a house, then Christmas happened, and I FINALLY squirreled away enough money to buy a new laptop.
Now that it's here, I'm making good progress. I'd say the next chapter is like 75% done. I was going to put out a chapter that just explained the above, but then I thought people would be disappointed to see the story was updated but then not seeing any actual content.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis
I'm excited for the big reveal! I'm really happy Emma was able to make up with Becky. I love how long each chapter has been and can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis
I'm excited for the big reveal! I'm really happy Emma was able to make up with Becky. I love how long each chapter has been and can't wait for more!