[Report This]Date: June 11 2024 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Assumption of Risk
Great Chapter, next I definitely think she should tease him about the fact he's too small to have sex. Especially if she's physically showing off her body.
Also excited about him getting much smaller.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2024 5:13 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
I'm loving the story so far and this is easily one of my favorite niches. I've never heard the name unwilling pred but I'm familiar familiar the concept and couldn't put a word to it. Your ability to write and describe people is way better than mine and inspirational. I'll definitely be keeping a close eye on this story.
A personal request is some inshoe and odor. Maybe she's very apprehensive because she knows that her feet smell or sweat a lot and she's embarrassed. Maybe she's worried that she'll hurt him too? It would be nice for her gentle shoeplaying to nearly crush him or break his arm or something despite her efforts. Alternatively, some sort of scheme where he cuts out a small body shaped hole in the shoes she wears to work most often. Maybe he's only able to convince her to let him stay taped to the toe section of the shoe because it's safest. After she gets to the office and starts fidgeting around he sneaks to the hole that he cut around where her heel rests. Could introduce some unaware aspects and near death scenes as he underestimates just how much her heel would push down on the insole. It could protect him just enough to meek him alive while lightly crushing him or breaking a bone or two. Maybe she's even putting some extra weight on her heels to avoid hurting him at her toes, where he's supposed to be at. If possible I'd love a bit of dry feet or callouses too, maybe he could ask her to not take care of herself for a week or something?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words!! And those ideas you pitched are right up my alley. Another reviewer requested some in-shoe interaction, so that's definitely going to be what I work on next!
Stay tuned, hoping to have a new chapter up by the end of the week (like sometime on Sunday probably).
Date: June 06 2024 7:18 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
A reluctant pred story is a dream come true. Love the direction of the story so far. Would love to see some reluctant pussy/ass interaction.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the feedback! If you wouldn't mind leaving a star rating, it would be much appreciated!
Re: reluctant pred - I know, right??!! Criminally underrepresented subsection of this community.
As for the pussy/ass, worry not my friend: we're getting there. Amy's shy, we gotta give her a minute lol. Like I said, I'm gonna try to scratch ALL itches with this one. I'm primarily an ass guy myself, so you'd better believe I'm gonna be prioritizing these two requests. ;-)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2024 10:45 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Good start to the story, as far as requests, unaware feet interactions, inshoe. Would love to see the remote used to make him much smaller
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! Unaware in-shoe was probably what was coming next anyway, so that's perfect!
As for getting him a little smaller, I'll see what I can do. The suit is out of commission at the moment, but it'll make a comeback and then some size shenanigans can ensue once more.