Reviewer: Kell Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis

I'm excited for the big reveal! I'm really happy Emma was able to make up with Becky. I love how long each chapter has been and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Pnwpaddleboarder Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2024 11:01 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict

Great story so far!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!! Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2024 2:59 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict

I hated the wait but it's a good chapter. I like how you incorporated the further shrinking and I can't wait to see more. I'm sure Amy is going to be upset and make him pay. I'll be checking in often! 

Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry about the wait. Another unfortunate update on that front: the G on my laptop popped off and, like an idiot, I tried to glue it back on...which resulted in it being glued down. Then I popped it off and it took the button underneath with it. 

I'm gonna see if I can still get by typing by just copying a G and doing CTRL+V when I need one, but a new laptop may be on the horizon. 

Thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2024 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis

Absolutely amazing and worth the wait. Micro body exploration on hot lesbians? *Chefs kiss* 

If you're still looking for suggestions, sounds like Emma needs to go bra shopping. If only there was a big shot lawyer who could afford to pay for her industrial sized bras. 

Author's Response:

Love it!! Great idea. And thanks for the review. Yes, she desperately needs a wardrobe update. 

Reviewer: Aac101 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2024 7:57 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict

So, there are many good stories on this site. Yours has become the current #1. The writing is great and you're updating regularly, which is greatly appreciated! I'd love to see more unaware content. Maybe a friend or family member comes over and he is mistaken for a bug by them? Keep it up

Author's Response:

Wow...thank you!! That's high praise because there are some seriously well-written stories on here. And the reason I'm updating regularly is because of comments like these. Every review that tells me people are enjoying it is motivation to keep churning out content.

As for the unaware content, I really think you're going to like the next installment, which I'm gonna say is about 40% done and will hopefully be uploaded by Monday. There have been quite a few requests for our hero to get smaller, and I finally came up with a way to do it that I think makes sense in the context of the story. Soooooo....stay tuned. Let's just say I hope you're a fan of Emma so far. 

Reviewer: Riderway Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2024 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Reckless Disregard

I spent about 25 minutes writing a review to press submit and find the site had logged me out and deleted the whole thing! I shall try and summarise what I had written prior about how fantastic this story is as it really deserves to be read by all who enjoy a good shrinking story!

I think that DoctorWeird does a fantastic job at fleshing out his characters and making them feel very real and justified in their actions. Many a story has half soaked, hollow and unthought out characteristical traits that have you questioning the characters and not fully believing in what they're doing or why they're doing it. The characters in this story feel alive and with every addition, more and more like they actually exist and you feel engaged to find out what happens to them and empathetic to what they're feeling which really draws you in and makes you read on. The scene where Mr. C has a moment alone looking at an old photo of him and Amy and the emotions he was relaying, I felt like I was stood there right alongside him. It's a very hard thing to do to make someone care for a character but you do it effortlessly and it's a such a joy to read.

I find myself checking daily to see if you've dropped a surprise chapter for me to devour as I'm so invested in the story and seeing what happens to Mr. C and how they're going to get through these tumultuous times...I'm addicted!! I honestly cannot wait for the next addition to this thrilling and wonderful universe you're creating. My only wish, if you can add it to a later chapter maybe, would be more of the unaware ass and thigh content. Not so much inside the pants like chapter 7, but maybe a back pocket or a side pocket on tight leggings (leggings do sometimes have pockets, I swear). For example, when Mrs. K confronts Emma about what she has in her hand, if Mr. C would have stayed still and been mistaken for a doll, she could have confiscated him and kept him in her back pocket until the end of practise? My favourite piece of writing is called Checkmate by Nostromo (absolute legend) and he has a similar scene where the shrunken character end up inside the front front of his partners tights as he loses a game of chess (hence the name) and it starts as an aware scenario but has moments of unaware with her thighs and I'd really love to see you put your own unique spin on a situation like that with one of the characters maybe? 

Anyway, if my previous statements haven't alluded to how highly I rate this content, I love your style of writing, I love the characters and I love the nitty grittiness of your chapters and how truly real they feel. If ever you need anybody to bounce ideas off of or need help fleshing out a paragraph or section, then please feel free to message me! I've written a few chapters on Writing.com and absolutely loved it! 10/10 - A+++++

Until the next chapter, R. 

Author's Response:

Wow....this is amazing. Thank you so, so much for taking the time to write all that. I'm glad the characters mean something to you and that their depictions are landing as real people. As I've mentioned in my replies to other people who have left reviews, for me personally, having the characters be real people with real problems and real motivations creates stakes and emotional investment, and it's my feeling that stakes and investment make the sexy stuff sexier. 

Make no mistake; we all know what this site is about, and what we're all here for. This is, first and foremost, supposed to be fun and arousing. But IMO, no reason we can't also have a decent story along with it. Yes, it's pure smut at times, but the more we come to care about these characters, the more their interactions, including (and especially) the sexy ones, matter. 

I mentioned this in response to another review someone left that was hoping for a happy ending. And as the synopsis says, the shrinking was supposed to lead to an irreoncilable decline in Steve's relationship with Amy, ultimately culminating in tragedy (I've had the ending written in my head from the moment I drafted the prologue). 

But I'll admit that I got attached to these two lovebirds myself. This is turning into a Stranger Than Fiction thing where I don't wanna see Harold Crick die. I might have to revise my synopsis and change the ending or, like I mentioned, draft multiples in a "choose your own adventure" style. 

Again, thank you so much for the kind words and feedback. This is the kind of stuff that motivates me to keep writing. The Word document is 112 pages already (working on Chapter 7 as we speak), so this could very easily end up being 500 pages before it's done. That's longer than most full-length novels. And the reason I'm doing it is because of responses like these that let me know the story reached someone personally and brightened their day! So, thanks again! 

I read you loud and clear on the clothed butt/thighs interaction. Emma's leggings not having pockets was primarily a plot device, as I'm sure you know. Fret not, I think the forthcoming in-office adventures will be to your liking!!

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2024 1:46 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict

Another great chapter, glad to see you're back. 

Your style of writing is very good. I like that we're getting good story and good action at the same time. I like Emma but I'm definitely more a fan of Amy. I hope they don't break up by the end of the story though, I like the back and forth that they have as a couple, it seems very natural. 

As for things I'd like to see, I was thinking that you could show some crushing by maybe having Amy crush an ant underfoot? Like he's on the floor just watching her as she moves her foot around and fidgets. Maybe he even drags a half dead ant near her foot to watch her smash it accidentally? 

Id still love to see her let him stay inside her flats at work. A good opportunity to show off some other people too, perhaps he falls out of the flats while she's getting really into a discussion or conference call or something. During that time he could end up under someone else's foot at the office, maybe an east asian or indian woman? Something with office footplay in particular that I've always found interesting is that people tend to rub and grind their foot against an object under their desk, would definitely be cool to see him subject to that. I'd love to see him under a bare foot as well since we've mostly been dealing with socks so far. 

You brought up the issue of communication with different sizes. The solution I'd like to offer with that is having the change just be temporary. Like he shrinks even smaller while she tries to fix it, but it's only for one or two chapters. 

Also, do you have a fan discord? 

Author's Response:

Thank you!! I'm glad to hear you like Amy. You're supposed to. If I'm writing her the way I hope I'm writing her, she should be coming across as likeable and sympathetic. 

I'll definitely work in the crush thing. That hadn't even occurred to me and I love the idea. This is why I enjoy comments. 

Funny you mention East Asian/Indian. Some of these characters are based on a job I used to have way back, names obviously changed for privacy. There was a super hot Indian attorney and I was going to work her into an office scenario. 

And no, I don't have a Discord unfortunately. I'm a lawyer in real life (Steve's basically a self-insert in case you can't tell) who's just writing this for fun. I'm glad you're enjoying it though!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2024 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Negligent Entrustment

Loved this chapter! Definitely the best so far. Was the fact that Emma bra being so small on her a fashion choice or showing how fast her breasts are still growing? I love the idea of her outgrowing her bras so quickly. 

And I saw your responses to others saying you werent sure how he can communicate if he shrinks more, but what if you do some multi-size to help with that? 
Amy gets a machine that she thinks will reverse it, but it malfunctions and shrinks her while holding Steve. 
Emma and others have to now care for both, and Steve has to communicate through Amy. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked this chapter, especially since it's like a self-contained novel. I appreciate you sticking with it. I'm also happy with the way it came out. 

You nailed it with the breasts growing quickly. That's why I mentioned she had been goaded into purchasing it over the summer, and it's January and it already is basically like a string. Caught her off guard. 

I like the multisize shenanigans idea and was thinking about going that route (if they can't cure Steve, Amy might decide to just join him to be together ultimately), but I hadn't considered it as a means of relaying information. 

But, people seem to be very interested in a much smaller experience, so since we've already established that inorganic tech can be shrunken with ease in this universe, I think we're gonna see about getting him a phone, and that phone will reduce with him. For me, the communication is absolutely necessary unless you're writing an unaware scenario, which has its time and its place. It adds so much more for them to be able to talk about it in real time, IMO. 

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2024 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Attractive Nuisance

Really enjoying the story, hope everything works out for them in the end and it doesn’t end with a cliche death by giantess wife 

Author's Response:

Thank you!! The story synopsis says it all, at least for my initial version before I started to actually like the dynamic these two have. Irreconcilable decline, etc. 

The story was intended to have a dark ending, just not involving Amy. But I might write multiple endings since I kinda like these two now. 

Reviewer: mattgrecs Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2024 12:53 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict

Glad to see this back, definitely one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!! Ask anyone who writes stuff: feedback like this is practically like putting ink in the pen. Or...keys on the keyboard. Fingers on the keys? You get the metaphor.