[Report This]Date: September 13 2025 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Glad to see you back! This chapter was great :D. 36k words is another giant one for sure haha; was happy when I saw that. If the story had died at the last chapter, it would have actually been a pretty in-theme ending, but it's better to see it continue. :)
It's funny how he keeps getting into situations that are dangerous and have him panicking, then the moment he gets out of them he's like, 'Hey, that wasn't so bad. Wanna try that again?'. Steve has a one-track mind and I respect that.
Entrapment scene was great, the way you made it happen was actually pretty similar to what I was thinking when I recommended the idea. Definitely happy with how it turned out, thanks for writing it! :D
If you want a more vore-related suggestion, having him land in, and get lost in, some shared dish during their date, and having Emma internally panicking as she tries to find him with a spoon/fork and sneakily get him out, while an unaware Becky is just happily enjoying the shared meal would be fun. Emma trying to figure out if he's in every bite before she chews would add some extra time, which means Becky has a higher chance of getting him, so she has to pick up the pace, increasing the chance for accidents. Could also have it be something with some crunch to it, to mess with her some more. Though at this point, I think I am being mean to your characters haha.
Though, feel free to ignore that idea if you don't think it will fit into the story, I don't want to be the cause of any more delays lol.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I worked in the panty entrapment stuff specifically per your request.
And yeah, it's quite unrealistic that he keeps having near death experiences, dusts himself off and is like "well, let's not say NEVER again just yet..."
But then again, none of this is realistic. And, though it is hopefully interwoven with an enjoyable story, let's keep in mind the ultimate goal here. We all know what this site is for lol. So yeah, whatever story device keeps the smut train running.
Date: September 12 2025 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Another amazing chapter! Thank you for the call out!
I knew it was going to be another masterpiece of a chapter with that flashback, "you know im going to eat you alive, right?" Absolutely beautiful.
Loved where you took Emma, giving her more depth and putting her in morally grey situations was a great choice.
Really looking forward to the next chapter and eventually finding out who is driving the Cadillac
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review as always, hope you enjoyed the bra shopping!
Yeah, I was super on the fence about the Emma thing. It's part of why I kept revising this chapter over and over. It just didn't seem like something she would do, and my concern was that I was forcing a square peg into a round hole to accommodate a request.
But I went back and tinkered with the build-up to it. Amy sitting on her husband and saying he loves that stuff and it kind of feels good, the compliments even before they left the house, the pending evening of losing her virginity, etc.
With all the foreshadowing, I decided it made perfect sense for her to end up making a morally questionable call. She's still just a teenager, after all.
Date: September 12 2025 1:18 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
No prob. Again, after this, if you’re open to a story request, contact me privately and I’d be happy to collab with you on something.
Author's Response:
Will do. This was always intended to be a one-and-done just to prove to myself I could do it and to provide some (hopefully enjoyable) free content in an era of paywalls.
But if I decide to jump in again, I will reach out!
[Report This]Date: September 11 2025 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Welcome back! Nice work as always! Yo considering more inside rectum action at some point going forward? Like inside Emma or Becky as they’re doing it?
Author's Response:
So, that's actually my favorite subgenre. It will definitely show up again. I wasn't planning on it with those two but maybe I can find an organic way to work it in. I can think of one instance in the story that's already planned out where it is absolutely happening.
Thanks for the review!
Date: August 29 2025 10:37 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
This story is so good and well done it’s like the only thing I keep an eye out for lately, like everytime I login on a Friday I look for it while singing that song “baby come back”, Hope your doing great really is a great read and paced so well
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the feedback! I just responded to another review. The long story short is the next installment has been ready for quite some time (easily over a month), I just can't stop fiddling with it. I had to do a complete re-write of one of the sections because I didn't like how it came across. And then it started getting SUPER long. So then I wanted to tie up some loose ends, but it's becoming clear to me that the best thing to do is just publish it and kick the stuff over to the next chapter. I should have it up sometime this weekend! Just need to proofread it because for some reason I take typos very seriously even though nothing about this site or this genre is remotely serious.
Date: August 09 2025 12:55 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Hey realized I hadn't seen your story in a while, hope you're still doing ok!
Author's Response:
Hello! Thank you for writing. Truthfully, the next installment has been drafted for probably over a month. I should just release it. The problem is I started second guessing whether this character would behave how they were behaving, and then I wanted to tie up some other loose ends. It's already super long though. I might just give it a once over and make the rest another chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2025 9:04 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Another excellent chapter, everytime you post i know it's gonna be a banger. Suggestions include more of Amy's feet, would love some unaware nanobot shrinkage with her
Author's Response:
Oh we're getting there, trust me!
Thanks for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: May 22 2025 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part II)
Definitely didn’t disappoint with part 2. Just under 29k words! The POV change was great, enjoyed seeing how it played out from both sides.
Looking forward to the morning after, hope the alcohol and hangover doesn’t leave her too forgetful of the previous fun ;) she might be liable to forget about something while in a rush to get to work. Especially if he’s not moving around much, could be mistaken as something more mundane.
Feel like their relationship will be a ‘little’ strained after he gets out of his current predicament, alcohol can only be blamed so much lol. Would like to Emma make a reappearance, she’s probably the kindest of the cast (at-least, Steve might think so, after this chapter), so she’d be his best bet for getting away from Amy for a day or two without as much danger.
She’d get the opportunity to cheer him up, earn some points with him… and also push some boundaries with her one-sided crush. Would love to see some accidental/reluctant panty entrapment, that’s probably my favorite, especially if the pleasure/thrill of it makes them not remove the tiny at the first opportunity… or the second, to their guilt.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter! You definitely cooked with this one, definitely my favorite in the story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!! Funny you mention that. We're about to get back to Emma since we've had a break for a few chapters. She's got some stuff to figure out with Ashley, Becky, graduation, a prudish "traditional family values" mom...
That scenario sounds great. Definitely something I'd be into exploring.
Date: May 22 2025 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part II)
Loved it! And in regards to your response to my last review, youve basically hinted that anything I might have requested is already on its way! You keep knocking it out of the park and then hinting even better stuff is on the way.
But I am looking forward to the return of Emma, Im a boob guy, and I am hoping she continues to outgrow her bras!
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for the review. Yup, hard at work on prior requests...
Date: May 09 2025 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part I)
Amazing new chapter (or start of a new chapter) loved the teasing and the hints of what is to come. Really looking forward to the rest of this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for always taking the time to leave a review. It hasn't gone unnoticed. I'd be happy to work in a specific request as a thank you.
I've definitely worked a few requests into Chapter 13, so let me know if you see something you like! I think it'll be worth the wait.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2025 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part I)
Good start for the chapter! The wait isn't that bad, considering how large each of the chapters you post are lol, haven't seen too many authors upload with the level of consistency and quality that you have. Didn't notice any typos or anything, but the the formatting seems to have got butchered when you moved it onto here.
I'd recommend breaking the chapter into two if instead of just updating chapter 13: I don't think it would bring this story back onto 'most recent' if you did the latter, and chapter 13 ends in a good enough spot to break them.
Honestly I have no idea what your favorite gts genre is lol, by frequency in this story, I'd guess some form of entrapment? Since she is drinking, maybe she is more rough then usual in the next part? There was a story on here called 'Kevin and Lucy', that did that pretty well, but it died the very next chapter :( Or maybe it will be something else entirely, looking forward to what you're cooking up for us!
Author's Response:
That is an EXCELLENT point about the "Most Recent" thing. I will take your advice and split it into two. Thank you for the positive review!
Date: May 07 2025 4:06 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Very Very nice sotry. Hope you still go on writing :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm plugging away lol. Just takes a while. Thank you for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: April 05 2025 2:06 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Always enjoy this story. Plot development is always needed. Hopefully it is setup for the next chapter. I hope that we get more nanobot fun. Maybe he learns more about the risks involved from an unaware wife at that size? I'd love some kind of bathroom scenario, not everyone's cup of tea though. Keep the good stuff coming!
Author's Response:
Realized I never responded to this but I think you're gonna like the beginning of Chapter 14.
Thanks for the review!
Date: April 04 2025 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
Love the development. Always a fan of plot chapters. I liked how Amy is starting to think about breaking up with him. Would love to see her end up cheating on him.
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for taking the time to leave a review!! Still not sure where our main couple will ultimately end up. We'll see where the story takes me.
[Report This]Date: April 04 2025 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
You will never hear me complain that a story is focused on.. the plot of the story. I love how these characters play off of each other! I'm not sure if I'm wanting Amy and Steve to stick together at the end or not. Reading the very real feeling arguements and both of their internal thoughts makes it feel so real.
On the note of a new site; I've set up an account on SizeFiction and it's pretty decent! It's missing a couple features and the mobile site isn't great but I'm happy to have it. I would recommend trying it out at least
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review!! Glad you liked it. Yeah, my experience with sizefiction.net has been limited to mobile so far, and I found it confusing.
The whole reason I stopped posting this story on Giantess City was because I had to reformat all the italics and spacing every time. This site lets me copy and paste from Word and it just works. If sizefiction.net has a similar setup, I might give it a go.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2025 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
Finally got around to reading this story a little while ago, it's good! Like the variety of themes you have in here, even though I'm not a foot enjoyer, its done well and is fun to read. Its funny how Steve keeps ending up going down the backs of their pants, he might be a little bit cursed for that to happen so many times lol, he has such bad luck I'm not sure Amy will believe him after all this. You have a funny cast of characters in this, they all feel well written and have nice interactions with each-other.
The unaware and 'unaware' parts are great, the chapters with Alison and Emily were my favorites, with Emily panicking and inadvertantly putting Steve into a more dangerous situation, and Alison casually playing sports with him in her underwear. Also, Becky pretending not to notice him and toying with him right infront of Amy is nice, haven't seen something like that on this site before. Hope to see more of her schemes to 'unknowingly' use him lol; bonus points if she puts him in a situation too embarrassing for her to 'admit' he's there and get him out herself, only to slowly realize that she may have gone further than she should have as the day/night goes on.
I'm indifferent about other sites - if you want to post on others, I'm personally fine with it as long as you keep posting here too. I've not had any real issues with this site, its fine at what it does.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for leaving a review!! I like that scenario you depicted for good old depraved nerd Becky. I'll see if I can work it in somewhere.
And to be clear, I really didn't have any intentions of moving somewhere else, absent someone providing a compelling reason for doing so. I'm not privy to what the outrage is about, but I have seen a number of pretty prolific, high-profile authors on the site move elsewhere unexpectedly.
Date: March 13 2025 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Gross Negligence
Really great to see this chapter after the wait! I greatly appreciate your distinct tone and writing style. It's not easy to find work so well fleshed out and realistic. It's impressive to me that you think about how his situation would differ from the fantasies we've all read so many times in the past, and it makes your story stand out, and feel much more immersive to the reader. I really loved the fart section, and would love to see more of that in the future, but I am always glad to see this story get another addition
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm glad somebody picked up on the attempts to draw a contrast between the fantasy we all imagine and the cold reality of it. I've seen other stories on here use to great effect, so I can't claim credit for it being a new idea or anything. But I was definitely making the effort, so it's appreciated that it was noticed.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2025 6:58 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Loving it, the smut is top tier and the characters are all enjoyable. I know you're busy but if you'd ever consider accepting commissions for a chapter I'd be willing to pay
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks so much for the kind words. As I mentioned at the outset of the story, I'm actually kind of determined NOT to charge anything for content. There are two reasons for that:
(1) I miss the old days of this stuff just being available without a paywall. I cast no aspersions and make no judgments about those who have found a way to monetize this. More power to them, as far as I'm concerned. Everyone benefits from more content and nobody's forcing you to pay for stuff. I just feel like asking for money is against my core mission.
(2) I'm not a writer or a content creator. I'm a lawyer for my day job and just do this for fun and to give back a little to the community. It would disingenuous to charge like I'm a professional, especially since I can't give any guarantees of reasonable production timeframes with life getting in the way so often.
That said, my middle ground is trying to incorporate suggestions and requests where the story allows. For instance, I had no intentions of having our hero shrink further, but a lot of people asked for it, so I shoehorned it in. Feel free to make a request as a review on another chapter (I don't think this site has a direct message system?), or shoot me an email to doctor.weird017@gmail.com.
Thanks again!!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2025 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
Thanks for your efforts, really good one!
[Report This]Date: January 31 2025 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
I'm so happy to see you back and congratulations on the new house! I just always assumed you were cooking AND I WAS RIGHT!
I love the characterization and arguments this chapter. I personally care more about the characters than the smut at this point
Author's Response:
Thank you!! It's a lot work (who knew that water softeners need salt refills and lawns don't mow themselves?), but happy to finally have equity in something in my 40s.
Glad to hear that about characters vs. smut. That means I'm doing something right. You're supposed to give a shit about them, which enhances the rest of the stuff.