




Date: April 04 2025 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
You will never hear me complain that a story is focused on.. the plot of the story. I love how these characters play off of each other! I'm not sure if I'm wanting Amy and Steve to stick together at the end or not. Reading the very real feeling arguements and both of their internal thoughts makes it feel so real.
On the note of a new site; I've set up an account on SizeFiction and it's pretty decent! It's missing a couple features and the mobile site isn't great but I'm happy to have it. I would recommend trying it out at least





Date: April 03 2025 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Confession Under Oath
Finally got around to reading this story a little while ago, it's good! Like the variety of themes you have in here, even though I'm not a foot enjoyer, its done well and is fun to read. Its funny how Steve keeps ending up going down the backs of their pants, he might be a little bit cursed for that to happen so many times lol, he has such bad luck I'm not sure Amy will believe him after all this. You have a funny cast of characters in this, they all feel well written and have nice interactions with each-other.
The unaware and 'unaware' parts are great, the chapters with Alison and Emily were my favorites, with Emily panicking and inadvertantly putting Steve into a more dangerous situation, and Alison casually playing sports with him in her underwear. Also, Becky pretending not to notice him and toying with him right infront of Amy is nice, haven't seen something like that on this site before. Hope to see more of her schemes to 'unknowingly' use him lol; bonus points if she puts him in a situation too embarrassing for her to 'admit' he's there and get him out herself, only to slowly realize that she may have gone further than she should have as the day/night goes on.
I'm indifferent about other sites - if you want to post on others, I'm personally fine with it as long as you keep posting here too. I've not had any real issues with this site, its fine at what it does.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for leaving a review!! I like that scenario you depicted for good old depraved nerd Becky. I'll see if I can work it in somewhere.
And to be clear, I really didn't have any intentions of moving somewhere else, absent someone providing a compelling reason for doing so. I'm not privy to what the outrage is about, but I have seen a number of pretty prolific, high-profile authors on the site move elsewhere unexpectedly.
Date: March 13 2025 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Gross Negligence
Really great to see this chapter after the wait! I greatly appreciate your distinct tone and writing style. It's not easy to find work so well fleshed out and realistic. It's impressive to me that you think about how his situation would differ from the fantasies we've all read so many times in the past, and it makes your story stand out, and feel much more immersive to the reader. I really loved the fart section, and would love to see more of that in the future, but I am always glad to see this story get another addition
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm glad somebody picked up on the attempts to draw a contrast between the fantasy we all imagine and the cold reality of it. I've seen other stories on here use to great effect, so I can't claim credit for it being a new idea or anything. But I was definitely making the effort, so it's appreciated that it was noticed.





Date: March 11 2025 6:58 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Loving it, the smut is top tier and the characters are all enjoyable. I know you're busy but if you'd ever consider accepting commissions for a chapter I'd be willing to pay
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks so much for the kind words. As I mentioned at the outset of the story, I'm actually kind of determined NOT to charge anything for content. There are two reasons for that:
(1) I miss the old days of this stuff just being available without a paywall. I cast no aspersions and make no judgments about those who have found a way to monetize this. More power to them, as far as I'm concerned. Everyone benefits from more content and nobody's forcing you to pay for stuff. I just feel like asking for money is against my core mission.
(2) I'm not a writer or a content creator. I'm a lawyer for my day job and just do this for fun and to give back a little to the community. It would disingenuous to charge like I'm a professional, especially since I can't give any guarantees of reasonable production timeframes with life getting in the way so often.
That said, my middle ground is trying to incorporate suggestions and requests where the story allows. For instance, I had no intentions of having our hero shrink further, but a lot of people asked for it, so I shoehorned it in. Feel free to make a request as a review on another chapter (I don't think this site has a direct message system?), or shoot me an email to doctor.weird017@gmail.com.
Thanks again!!





Date: February 04 2025 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
Thanks for your efforts, really good one!





Date: January 31 2025 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
I'm so happy to see you back and congratulations on the new house! I just always assumed you were cooking AND I WAS RIGHT!
I love the characterization and arguments this chapter. I personally care more about the characters than the smut at this point
Author's Response:
Thank you!! It's a lot work (who knew that water softeners need salt refills and lawns don't mow themselves?), but happy to finally have equity in something in my 40s.
Glad to hear that about characters vs. smut. That means I'm doing something right. You're supposed to give a shit about them, which enhances the rest of the stuff.





Date: January 30 2025 11:13 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Absolutely love this story! Any chance you could do a side one-off about Emma and Becky’s propeller first time? Those two make a great couple and you’re fantastic at writing sex scenes.
Also, any chance I could contact you about a story request? The contact feature on the site is broken, so if you have email or Discord I could reach you at let me know.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for the kind words. I'm not planning on letting us miss their first full time together, don't worry.
As to requests, as I mentioned at the opening of the last chapter, I'm just a dude doing this for fun when he has spare time. And that spare time is rather limited what with actually being a lawyer and having bought a house. Currently, I have no plans to do anything other than this one story. The good news is that this one will go on for a while first.
Date: January 29 2025 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
Glad to see you back! I was starting to lose all hope! Another amazing chapter, I love the direction you are going with this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! You've been nice enough to leave several reviews. You're one of the readers I had in mind when I said thank you for sticking with it.
Date: January 29 2025 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mens Rea
Glad to see you back! I was starting to lose all hope! Another amazing chapter, I love the direction you are going with this.
Date: January 26 2025 8:56 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Hope you return!
Author's Response:
Hello! Thanks for reaching out. I didn't forget about this story!! I mentioned this in my response to someone else's review, but my laptop keyboard broke. Then I bought a house, then Christmas happened, and I FINALLY squirreled away enough money to buy a new laptop.
Now that it's here, I'm making good progress. I'd say the next chapter is like 75% done. I was going to put out a chapter that just explained the above, but then I thought people would be disappointed to see the story was updated but then not seeing any actual content.





Date: November 20 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis
I'm excited for the big reveal! I'm really happy Emma was able to make up with Becky. I love how long each chapter has been and can't wait for more!





Date: November 20 2024 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis
I'm excited for the big reveal! I'm really happy Emma was able to make up with Becky. I love how long each chapter has been and can't wait for more!





Date: November 13 2024 4:02 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Been wanting to leave a review for a while now, so I finally made an account. I really hope you keep adding on because you started a really in depth, detailed story with some very well written characters. Your commitment to detailing this universe pays off in each new chapter. Even though I'm not the biggest fan of a lot of the content involved, I love seeing people create new works, especially when they take so much time and effort to bring them to life. Please keep writing, and as a fan of odor content and all things in that realm, I am incredibly intrigued for gross negligence to come out, whenever that may be. WIshing you the best!
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you so much for making an account just to leave a review! I've done that myself in the past, when I enjoyed something enough that I had to let the author know. Like I said, I'm a longtime lurker. I think I've had an account over at Giantess City for almost 20 years and I've maybe posted a dozen times, and that was only to let people know when something was too good for me to keep quiet.
Anyway, you can rest assured that I have NOT abandoned this story. As I mentioned in my response to another review someone left, I was having some keyboard issues which I've since resolved. I also had to take two impromptu sick days and, in the world of lawyering, that's a recipe for getting buried, so I haven't had a ton of free time.
BUT...the next chapter is already well underway! Stay tuned!





Date: November 01 2024 11:01 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Great story so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!! Glad you're enjoying it!





Date: October 28 2024 5:31 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
This latest chapter is the best one yet! I cant wait to see what you do with this new discovery that allows him to shrink even more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!





Date: October 28 2024 2:59 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
I hated the wait but it's a good chapter. I like how you incorporated the further shrinking and I can't wait to see more. I'm sure Amy is going to be upset and make him pay. I'll be checking in often!
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry about the wait. Another unfortunate update on that front: the G on my laptop popped off and, like an idiot, I tried to glue it back on...which resulted in it being glued down. Then I popped it off and it took the button underneath with it.
I'm gonna see if I can still get by typing by just copying a G and doing CTRL+V when I need one, but a new laptop may be on the horizon.
Thank you for the review!!
Date: October 27 2024 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis
Great chapter, excited to see how much he reveals to Amy, and how she takes it.
Kinda wishing this makes her upset enough to cheat on him.
Date: October 27 2024 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 9 - De Minimis
Absolutely amazing and worth the wait. Micro body exploration on hot lesbians? *Chefs kiss*
If you're still looking for suggestions, sounds like Emma needs to go bra shopping. If only there was a big shot lawyer who could afford to pay for her industrial sized bras.
Author's Response:
Love it!! Great idea. And thanks for the review. Yes, she desperately needs a wardrobe update.
Date: October 23 2024 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Admissible Evidence
Amazing story so far! Love the dark side of Amy, hopefully she embraces her dark side!
Kind of reminds me of My Marriage to a Giantess, if youve ever read that.





Date: October 17 2024 7:57 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
So, there are many good stories on this site. Yours has become the current #1. The writing is great and you're updating regularly, which is greatly appreciated! I'd love to see more unaware content. Maybe a friend or family member comes over and he is mistaken for a bug by them? Keep it up
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you!! That's high praise because there are some seriously well-written stories on here. And the reason I'm updating regularly is because of comments like these. Every review that tells me people are enjoying it is motivation to keep churning out content.
As for the unaware content, I really think you're going to like the next installment, which I'm gonna say is about 40% done and will hopefully be uploaded by Monday. There have been quite a few requests for our hero to get smaller, and I finally came up with a way to do it that I think makes sense in the context of the story. Soooooo....stay tuned. Let's just say I hope you're a fan of Emma so far.