[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 10:21 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
This is maybe the most well written story I've read on this site. I can't wait to see where it goes.
I also miss the days of 2005 before paywall culture. It was good times when people were creating for the sake of creating.
Author's Response:
Wow...that means a lot, because I think I've read everything on this site that appeals to me and there's a LOT of it. Thank you so much!!
And, I know right? It felt like we were on the cusp of something awesome. Mainstream adaptation, better SFX and CGI stuff, etc. And then it just sort of...petered out. Everyone scattered to their various locations and now everything's just piecemeal. No real GTS hub anymore.
Date: October 08 2024 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Negligent Entrustment
Loved this chapter! Definitely the best so far. Was the fact that Emma bra being so small on her a fashion choice or showing how fast her breasts are still growing? I love the idea of her outgrowing her bras so quickly.
And I saw your responses to others saying you werent sure how he can communicate if he shrinks more, but what if you do some multi-size to help with that?
Amy gets a machine that she thinks will reverse it, but it malfunctions and shrinks her while holding Steve.
Emma and others have to now care for both, and Steve has to communicate through Amy.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked this chapter, especially since it's like a self-contained novel. I appreciate you sticking with it. I'm also happy with the way it came out.
You nailed it with the breasts growing quickly. That's why I mentioned she had been goaded into purchasing it over the summer, and it's January and it already is basically like a string. Caught her off guard.
I like the multisize shenanigans idea and was thinking about going that route (if they can't cure Steve, Amy might decide to just join him to be together ultimately), but I hadn't considered it as a means of relaying information.
But, people seem to be very interested in a much smaller experience, so since we've already established that inorganic tech can be shrunken with ease in this universe, I think we're gonna see about getting him a phone, and that phone will reduce with him. For me, the communication is absolutely necessary unless you're writing an unaware scenario, which has its time and its place. It adds so much more for them to be able to talk about it in real time, IMO.
Date: October 04 2024 3:19 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Yeah, I like the development so far. Looks like it's shaping up to be a excellent-quality long story.
Sorry, idk how to offer constructive feedback. 1) I like that you already foreshadowed at future characters, which is what I'm anticipating. Looking forward to Emma; there's a lot of ways you could take her character, but it looks like you already have some ideas in mind. 2) Pre-existing age/height gap with power reversal is nice. 3) Will say that I'm a fan of unaware (esp with further shrinking), as well as a possible ending w/ him being a part of jewelry.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the positive feedback!! It truly means a lot.
Like I mentioned to someone else (and like I mentioned in the beginning of this story when I said it would "culminate in wholly foreseeable tragedy"), the original intent was for a tragic ending. But as I started writing these characters and their dialogue, I'm starting to question that decision. I will probably just do a series of alternate endings, including ones that could be read after earlier chapters. Like a death by vore scenario for the chapter I just wrote.
I will definitely keep the jewelry idea in mind! That's a unique one and I like it. We talking like an ankle bracelet, necklace, any of these?
I'll see what I can do about making him smaller, you're not the first person to suggest that. My concern is that it's already a stretch that everyone can hear him speaking just fine at one inch tall. It would be a serious stretch if he went micro and could continue having unabated dialogue. But maybe with the shrinking tech already established in the story we can see about getting him a tiny phone...
Date: October 01 2024 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Attractive Nuisance
Really enjoying the story, hope everything works out for them in the end and it doesn’t end with a cliche death by giantess wife
Author's Response:
Thank you!! The story synopsis says it all, at least for my initial version before I started to actually like the dynamic these two have. Irreconcilable decline, etc.
The story was intended to have a dark ending, just not involving Amy. But I might write multiple endings since I kinda like these two now.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2024 8:52 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Also glad to see you back! Good stories start and then die. Don't let this die, it's great! Hoping for more unaware interaction, especially with someone who isn't in on it. Love feet so can't ever get enough.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!! That kind of feedback is pure word-fuel. I always intended to return to it, and should get back to a reasonable production time on future installments. One a week was a tad too ambitious. Now that the day job stuff is normalizing though, I've been allotting some time each day for bits and pieces.
Date: October 01 2024 12:53 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Glad to see this back, definitely one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Ask anyone who writes stuff: feedback like this is practically like putting ink in the pen. Or...keys on the keyboard. Fingers on the keys? You get the metaphor.
Date: October 01 2024 9:39 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Great story so far!
As for suggestions, I wouldn't mind seeing some more breast interactions, especially with the bustier members of the cast like Allison. Or maybe Emma if she's a big titty goth girl.
Author's Response:
Ask and you shall receive ;-). Emma is, indeed, rather well-endowed. Spoiler alert: she's the next one to make an appearance. Allison's a bit of a gossip so she's gotta be handled delicately. Emma's a smart, responsible young woman. Most of the time. Panics under pressure, as you'll come to find out.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2024 11:34 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Loving it so far
Author's Response:
Thank you!! The feedback is motivation to keep writing!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2024 1:32 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
The last chapter was excellent. I love just how sweaty and foul her foot got and how close he was to death. I'd love to see some more foot action in the future
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! Worked in some foot action into the latest chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2024 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Assumption of Risk
Great Chapter, next I definitely think she should tease him about the fact he's too small to have sex. Especially if she's physically showing off her body.
Also excited about him getting much smaller.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2024 5:13 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
I'm loving the story so far and this is easily one of my favorite niches. I've never heard the name unwilling pred but I'm familiar familiar the concept and couldn't put a word to it. Your ability to write and describe people is way better than mine and inspirational. I'll definitely be keeping a close eye on this story.
A personal request is some inshoe and odor. Maybe she's very apprehensive because she knows that her feet smell or sweat a lot and she's embarrassed. Maybe she's worried that she'll hurt him too? It would be nice for her gentle shoeplaying to nearly crush him or break his arm or something despite her efforts. Alternatively, some sort of scheme where he cuts out a small body shaped hole in the shoes she wears to work most often. Maybe he's only able to convince her to let him stay taped to the toe section of the shoe because it's safest. After she gets to the office and starts fidgeting around he sneaks to the hole that he cut around where her heel rests. Could introduce some unaware aspects and near death scenes as he underestimates just how much her heel would push down on the insole. It could protect him just enough to meek him alive while lightly crushing him or breaking a bone or two. Maybe she's even putting some extra weight on her heels to avoid hurting him at her toes, where he's supposed to be at. If possible I'd love a bit of dry feet or callouses too, maybe he could ask her to not take care of herself for a week or something?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words!! And those ideas you pitched are right up my alley. Another reviewer requested some in-shoe interaction, so that's definitely going to be what I work on next!
Stay tuned, hoping to have a new chapter up by the end of the week (like sometime on Sunday probably).
Date: June 06 2024 7:18 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
A reluctant pred story is a dream come true. Love the direction of the story so far. Would love to see some reluctant pussy/ass interaction.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the feedback! If you wouldn't mind leaving a star rating, it would be much appreciated!
Re: reluctant pred - I know, right??!! Criminally underrepresented subsection of this community.
As for the pussy/ass, worry not my friend: we're getting there. Amy's shy, we gotta give her a minute lol. Like I said, I'm gonna try to scratch ALL itches with this one. I'm primarily an ass guy myself, so you'd better believe I'm gonna be prioritizing these two requests. ;-)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2024 10:45 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Good start to the story, as far as requests, unaware feet interactions, inshoe. Would love to see the remote used to make him much smaller
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! Unaware in-shoe was probably what was coming next anyway, so that's perfect!
As for getting him a little smaller, I'll see what I can do. The suit is out of commission at the moment, but it'll make a comeback and then some size shenanigans can ensue once more.