[Report This]Date: October 17 2024 7:57 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
So, there are many good stories on this site. Yours has become the current #1. The writing is great and you're updating regularly, which is greatly appreciated! I'd love to see more unaware content. Maybe a friend or family member comes over and he is mistaken for a bug by them? Keep it up
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you!! That's high praise because there are some seriously well-written stories on here. And the reason I'm updating regularly is because of comments like these. Every review that tells me people are enjoying it is motivation to keep churning out content.
As for the unaware content, I really think you're going to like the next installment, which I'm gonna say is about 40% done and will hopefully be uploaded by Monday. There have been quite a few requests for our hero to get smaller, and I finally came up with a way to do it that I think makes sense in the context of the story. Soooooo....stay tuned. Let's just say I hope you're a fan of Emma so far.
Date: October 15 2024 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Admissible Evidence
Another great chapter, loved how much Amy was teasing him during all this. Wouldnt mind seeing her fall deeper into her sadistic side.
But as a boob guy, I still think Emma is best girl.
Author's Response:
Thank you as always for the feedback!! I'm glad you like Emma. We haven't seen the last of her bazookas.
And yeah, Amy discovering a little darkness was always part of the plan. I'm happy that came across well!!
[Report This]Date: October 12 2024 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Reckless Disregard
I spent about 25 minutes writing a review to press submit and find the site had logged me out and deleted the whole thing! I shall try and summarise what I had written prior about how fantastic this story is as it really deserves to be read by all who enjoy a good shrinking story!
I think that DoctorWeird does a fantastic job at fleshing out his characters and making them feel very real and justified in their actions. Many a story has half soaked, hollow and unthought out characteristical traits that have you questioning the characters and not fully believing in what they're doing or why they're doing it. The characters in this story feel alive and with every addition, more and more like they actually exist and you feel engaged to find out what happens to them and empathetic to what they're feeling which really draws you in and makes you read on. The scene where Mr. C has a moment alone looking at an old photo of him and Amy and the emotions he was relaying, I felt like I was stood there right alongside him. It's a very hard thing to do to make someone care for a character but you do it effortlessly and it's a such a joy to read.
I find myself checking daily to see if you've dropped a surprise chapter for me to devour as I'm so invested in the story and seeing what happens to Mr. C and how they're going to get through these tumultuous times...I'm addicted!! I honestly cannot wait for the next addition to this thrilling and wonderful universe you're creating. My only wish, if you can add it to a later chapter maybe, would be more of the unaware ass and thigh content. Not so much inside the pants like chapter 7, but maybe a back pocket or a side pocket on tight leggings (leggings do sometimes have pockets, I swear). For example, when Mrs. K confronts Emma about what she has in her hand, if Mr. C would have stayed still and been mistaken for a doll, she could have confiscated him and kept him in her back pocket until the end of practise? My favourite piece of writing is called Checkmate by Nostromo (absolute legend) and he has a similar scene where the shrunken character end up inside the front front of his partners tights as he loses a game of chess (hence the name) and it starts as an aware scenario but has moments of unaware with her thighs and I'd really love to see you put your own unique spin on a situation like that with one of the characters maybe?
Anyway, if my previous statements haven't alluded to how highly I rate this content, I love your style of writing, I love the characters and I love the nitty grittiness of your chapters and how truly real they feel. If ever you need anybody to bounce ideas off of or need help fleshing out a paragraph or section, then please feel free to message me! I've written a few chapters on Writing.com and absolutely loved it! 10/10 - A+++++
Until the next chapter, R.
Author's Response:
Wow....this is amazing. Thank you so, so much for taking the time to write all that. I'm glad the characters mean something to you and that their depictions are landing as real people. As I've mentioned in my replies to other people who have left reviews, for me personally, having the characters be real people with real problems and real motivations creates stakes and emotional investment, and it's my feeling that stakes and investment make the sexy stuff sexier.
Make no mistake; we all know what this site is about, and what we're all here for. This is, first and foremost, supposed to be fun and arousing. But IMO, no reason we can't also have a decent story along with it. Yes, it's pure smut at times, but the more we come to care about these characters, the more their interactions, including (and especially) the sexy ones, matter.
I mentioned this in response to another review someone left that was hoping for a happy ending. And as the synopsis says, the shrinking was supposed to lead to an irreoncilable decline in Steve's relationship with Amy, ultimately culminating in tragedy (I've had the ending written in my head from the moment I drafted the prologue).
But I'll admit that I got attached to these two lovebirds myself. This is turning into a Stranger Than Fiction thing where I don't wanna see Harold Crick die. I might have to revise my synopsis and change the ending or, like I mentioned, draft multiples in a "choose your own adventure" style.
Again, thank you so much for the kind words and feedback. This is the kind of stuff that motivates me to keep writing. The Word document is 112 pages already (working on Chapter 7 as we speak), so this could very easily end up being 500 pages before it's done. That's longer than most full-length novels. And the reason I'm doing it is because of responses like these that let me know the story reached someone personally and brightened their day! So, thanks again!
I read you loud and clear on the clothed butt/thighs interaction. Emma's leggings not having pockets was primarily a plot device, as I'm sure you know. Fret not, I think the forthcoming in-office adventures will be to your liking!!
Date: October 12 2024 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Reckless Disregard
Another great chapter, love how Emma has big drama and plot points enough for her to have her own story. Really makes the setting feel real and fleshed out. Breast growth is one of my favorites, so she quickly became my favorite giantess, but excited to see the other characters you bring in next.
Also, do you plan on having more giant male character interactions?
Author's Response:
Thank you!! That was the intent: create stakes by tying the characters to what hopefully feel like real life problems.
And I wasn't planning on having much more in terms of giant men, not really my cup of tea. That said, Steve's law firm partner is one of the listed characters in the intro for a reason.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2024 1:46 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Another great chapter, glad to see you're back.
Your style of writing is very good. I like that we're getting good story and good action at the same time. I like Emma but I'm definitely more a fan of Amy. I hope they don't break up by the end of the story though, I like the back and forth that they have as a couple, it seems very natural.
As for things I'd like to see, I was thinking that you could show some crushing by maybe having Amy crush an ant underfoot? Like he's on the floor just watching her as she moves her foot around and fidgets. Maybe he even drags a half dead ant near her foot to watch her smash it accidentally?
Id still love to see her let him stay inside her flats at work. A good opportunity to show off some other people too, perhaps he falls out of the flats while she's getting really into a discussion or conference call or something. During that time he could end up under someone else's foot at the office, maybe an east asian or indian woman? Something with office footplay in particular that I've always found interesting is that people tend to rub and grind their foot against an object under their desk, would definitely be cool to see him subject to that. I'd love to see him under a bare foot as well since we've mostly been dealing with socks so far.
You brought up the issue of communication with different sizes. The solution I'd like to offer with that is having the change just be temporary. Like he shrinks even smaller while she tries to fix it, but it's only for one or two chapters.
Also, do you have a fan discord?
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm glad to hear you like Amy. You're supposed to. If I'm writing her the way I hope I'm writing her, she should be coming across as likeable and sympathetic.
I'll definitely work in the crush thing. That hadn't even occurred to me and I love the idea. This is why I enjoy comments.
Funny you mention East Asian/Indian. Some of these characters are based on a job I used to have way back, names obviously changed for privacy. There was a super hot Indian attorney and I was going to work her into an office scenario.
And no, I don't have a Discord unfortunately. I'm a lawyer in real life (Steve's basically a self-insert in case you can't tell) who's just writing this for fun. I'm glad you're enjoying it though!
[Report This]Date: October 08 2024 10:21 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
This is maybe the most well written story I've read on this site. I can't wait to see where it goes.
I also miss the days of 2005 before paywall culture. It was good times when people were creating for the sake of creating.
Author's Response:
Wow...that means a lot, because I think I've read everything on this site that appeals to me and there's a LOT of it. Thank you so much!!
And, I know right? It felt like we were on the cusp of something awesome. Mainstream adaptation, better SFX and CGI stuff, etc. And then it just sort of...petered out. Everyone scattered to their various locations and now everything's just piecemeal. No real GTS hub anymore.
Date: October 08 2024 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Negligent Entrustment
Loved this chapter! Definitely the best so far. Was the fact that Emma bra being so small on her a fashion choice or showing how fast her breasts are still growing? I love the idea of her outgrowing her bras so quickly.
And I saw your responses to others saying you werent sure how he can communicate if he shrinks more, but what if you do some multi-size to help with that?
Amy gets a machine that she thinks will reverse it, but it malfunctions and shrinks her while holding Steve.
Emma and others have to now care for both, and Steve has to communicate through Amy.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked this chapter, especially since it's like a self-contained novel. I appreciate you sticking with it. I'm also happy with the way it came out.
You nailed it with the breasts growing quickly. That's why I mentioned she had been goaded into purchasing it over the summer, and it's January and it already is basically like a string. Caught her off guard.
I like the multisize shenanigans idea and was thinking about going that route (if they can't cure Steve, Amy might decide to just join him to be together ultimately), but I hadn't considered it as a means of relaying information.
But, people seem to be very interested in a much smaller experience, so since we've already established that inorganic tech can be shrunken with ease in this universe, I think we're gonna see about getting him a phone, and that phone will reduce with him. For me, the communication is absolutely necessary unless you're writing an unaware scenario, which has its time and its place. It adds so much more for them to be able to talk about it in real time, IMO.
Date: October 04 2024 3:19 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Yeah, I like the development so far. Looks like it's shaping up to be a excellent-quality long story.
Sorry, idk how to offer constructive feedback. 1) I like that you already foreshadowed at future characters, which is what I'm anticipating. Looking forward to Emma; there's a lot of ways you could take her character, but it looks like you already have some ideas in mind. 2) Pre-existing age/height gap with power reversal is nice. 3) Will say that I'm a fan of unaware (esp with further shrinking), as well as a possible ending w/ him being a part of jewelry.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the positive feedback!! It truly means a lot.
Like I mentioned to someone else (and like I mentioned in the beginning of this story when I said it would "culminate in wholly foreseeable tragedy"), the original intent was for a tragic ending. But as I started writing these characters and their dialogue, I'm starting to question that decision. I will probably just do a series of alternate endings, including ones that could be read after earlier chapters. Like a death by vore scenario for the chapter I just wrote.
I will definitely keep the jewelry idea in mind! That's a unique one and I like it. We talking like an ankle bracelet, necklace, any of these?
I'll see what I can do about making him smaller, you're not the first person to suggest that. My concern is that it's already a stretch that everyone can hear him speaking just fine at one inch tall. It would be a serious stretch if he went micro and could continue having unabated dialogue. But maybe with the shrinking tech already established in the story we can see about getting him a tiny phone...
Date: October 01 2024 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Attractive Nuisance
Really enjoying the story, hope everything works out for them in the end and it doesn’t end with a cliche death by giantess wife
Author's Response:
Thank you!! The story synopsis says it all, at least for my initial version before I started to actually like the dynamic these two have. Irreconcilable decline, etc.
The story was intended to have a dark ending, just not involving Amy. But I might write multiple endings since I kinda like these two now.
[Report This]Date: October 01 2024 8:52 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Also glad to see you back! Good stories start and then die. Don't let this die, it's great! Hoping for more unaware interaction, especially with someone who isn't in on it. Love feet so can't ever get enough.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!! That kind of feedback is pure word-fuel. I always intended to return to it, and should get back to a reasonable production time on future installments. One a week was a tad too ambitious. Now that the day job stuff is normalizing though, I've been allotting some time each day for bits and pieces.
Date: October 01 2024 12:53 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Glad to see this back, definitely one of my favorite stories I’ve read on here.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Ask anyone who writes stuff: feedback like this is practically like putting ink in the pen. Or...keys on the keyboard. Fingers on the keys? You get the metaphor.
Date: October 01 2024 9:39 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Great story so far!
As for suggestions, I wouldn't mind seeing some more breast interactions, especially with the bustier members of the cast like Allison. Or maybe Emma if she's a big titty goth girl.
Author's Response:
Ask and you shall receive ;-). Emma is, indeed, rather well-endowed. Spoiler alert: she's the next one to make an appearance. Allison's a bit of a gossip so she's gotta be handled delicately. Emma's a smart, responsible young woman. Most of the time. Panics under pressure, as you'll come to find out.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2024 11:34 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Loving it so far
Author's Response:
Thank you!! The feedback is motivation to keep writing!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2024 1:32 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
The last chapter was excellent. I love just how sweaty and foul her foot got and how close he was to death. I'd love to see some more foot action in the future
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! Worked in some foot action into the latest chapter.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2024 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Assumption of Risk
Great Chapter, next I definitely think she should tease him about the fact he's too small to have sex. Especially if she's physically showing off her body.
Also excited about him getting much smaller.
[Report This]Date: June 07 2024 5:13 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
I'm loving the story so far and this is easily one of my favorite niches. I've never heard the name unwilling pred but I'm familiar familiar the concept and couldn't put a word to it. Your ability to write and describe people is way better than mine and inspirational. I'll definitely be keeping a close eye on this story.
A personal request is some inshoe and odor. Maybe she's very apprehensive because she knows that her feet smell or sweat a lot and she's embarrassed. Maybe she's worried that she'll hurt him too? It would be nice for her gentle shoeplaying to nearly crush him or break his arm or something despite her efforts. Alternatively, some sort of scheme where he cuts out a small body shaped hole in the shoes she wears to work most often. Maybe he's only able to convince her to let him stay taped to the toe section of the shoe because it's safest. After she gets to the office and starts fidgeting around he sneaks to the hole that he cut around where her heel rests. Could introduce some unaware aspects and near death scenes as he underestimates just how much her heel would push down on the insole. It could protect him just enough to meek him alive while lightly crushing him or breaking a bone or two. Maybe she's even putting some extra weight on her heels to avoid hurting him at her toes, where he's supposed to be at. If possible I'd love a bit of dry feet or callouses too, maybe he could ask her to not take care of herself for a week or something?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words!! And those ideas you pitched are right up my alley. Another reviewer requested some in-shoe interaction, so that's definitely going to be what I work on next!
Stay tuned, hoping to have a new chapter up by the end of the week (like sometime on Sunday probably).
Date: June 06 2024 7:18 PM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
A reluctant pred story is a dream come true. Love the direction of the story so far. Would love to see some reluctant pussy/ass interaction.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the feedback! If you wouldn't mind leaving a star rating, it would be much appreciated!
Re: reluctant pred - I know, right??!! Criminally underrepresented subsection of this community.
As for the pussy/ass, worry not my friend: we're getting there. Amy's shy, we gotta give her a minute lol. Like I said, I'm gonna try to scratch ALL itches with this one. I'm primarily an ass guy myself, so you'd better believe I'm gonna be prioritizing these two requests. ;-)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2024 10:45 AM Title: Prologue - The Life-Changing Verdict
Good start to the story, as far as requests, unaware feet interactions, inshoe. Would love to see the remote used to make him much smaller
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback! Unaware in-shoe was probably what was coming next anyway, so that's perfect!
As for getting him a little smaller, I'll see what I can do. The suit is out of commission at the moment, but it'll make a comeback and then some size shenanigans can ensue once more.