Date: September 23 2024 6:57 AM Title: Kocia Morda
Enjoying this a lot.
I hope Takako and Ewa remain being a thing.
Date: July 11 2024 6:37 PM Title: Kocia Morda
That was a solid start. The premise is fascinating, and i can see that you took your time to develop this post-war world, and that made for a potentially very interesting setting.
The descriptions are in general pretty poignant, and i like the relationship between the two drivers.
If i were to offer a critique, I've seen some grammatical errors here and there, although nothing major, mostly verbs slipping and orthography errors and a couple of periods are written in a confusing way, which made me unable to understand what was happening. I'll give it a 4.5/5 nevertheless cause those are very minor issues in the first two chapters (the ones that i've read).
Looking forward to read the rest!