Date: May 26 2024 11:45 AM Title: Treatment CH 3
When I saw the premise of the story, I thought you were going to do something where you keep changing the physical attributes of some specific women or all women, or that you would do something that changes social norms, like normalizing polyamory or something. I did not expect this direction, which I’m not opposed to I guess, but personally would have preferred stuff like what I wrote above. Thats the kind of stuff you typically see with this kind of story. But I guess im interested to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2024 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Actually wondering what happened to the ring. I assume he didn't lose or forget about it if he wants to reverse his situation.
Author's Response:
He still has the ring for sure, but wants to be dominated and controlled which is why he created the reality so he wouldn't immediately try to leave it
[Report This]Date: May 10 2024 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can’t wait for more! But in the cave you said the sisters were Delaney and Zoey, and in the house they’re Delaney and Piper.
Date: May 10 2024 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Glad to see Delaney didn’t get you yet, stoked your back always awesome great stuff