[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love slice-of-life stories. A lot of stories are about the transition caused by growing or shrinking but stories about a couple who have lived this way for a while are always a gem. It makes me think of Scrubbing Bubble by Aborigen.
The other nice touch is a romantic element. It is interesting to add a layer of the satisfaction that the giant gets on an emotional/spiritual level not just the sex/domination/pleasure level. Eleanor as someone with something like ADHD getting help regulating and focusing from her tiny partner was a good way to build that and got the message/feeling across quickly in a short story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sometimes slice-of-life is the way to go. And I'm glad you think I got the emotional aspect of the relationship across, and not just the practical benefits.
[Report This]Date: September 23 2024 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
You know what, I found this to be rather enjoyable. Yes, it's short, but it's sweet and cute. She gives him a place to live, and a purpose in a world which aims to discard him like trash. In return, her life is directly improved by keeping him around as a second viewpoint and a source of comfort. Honestly it would be difficult to accomplish anything on your own as a tiny, so finding someone you can pledge your loyalty to, someone who shares your moral code, seems like a really good second choice option. I'm glad to see they're comfortable with each other and their morning routine. And, yes, while becoming a prison suitcase for a giantess heading to work might be a little boring, I can't help but imagine what that would be like. Utterly helpless to free yourself, assimilated to the whim of your benevolent owner... and yet.. a strange sense of comfort may be found there as well, provided the heat isn't too much, and the air supply isn't too low. But, hey, maybe tinies need less air. I mean, ants can survive underwater for a bit, right?
Anyway, thanks for writing this.
Author's Response:
I'm pleasantly surprised you enjoyed this little story. You seem to have had a lot of the same thoughts while reading it as I had while writing it, so in that regard I suppose my intentions were successful. And yeah, I imagined tinies need less air, otherwise they wouldn't be able to do this on a regular basis.
Thank you for the review, I deeply appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: May 12 2024 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Super! I hope to read your other stories when they appear. I remembered a collage that is quite suitable for illustrating this story.
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[Report This]Date: May 09 2024 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, I'm surprised it's your first! The relationship between Eleanor and her tiny is great and I love their dynamic. I especially like the butt insertion reveal, it came as a bit of a surprise but in the best way. I also liked the choice to keep the tiny nameless, it adds to the dynamic and makes it easier to project onto him.
In short, I loved this one, and I look forward to seeing what you write next. If you're ever looking for a co-worker, feel free to hit me up on the discord.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It means a lot coming from a skilled writer like you. It was difficult deciding whether to keep the tiny nameless or not, so I'm glad that paid off. I know you've been looking for a co-writer, but honestly, with how slow and ineffective I am at writing I don't think I would be a good fit lol
[Report This]Date: May 08 2024 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad for your first story really good job with details and pacing and character and world building like this was really good read hope to see more stories from you soon and also yes love butt insertion content…well butt content in general but overall great story
Author's Response:
Thank you! I also hope I can upload more stories, although the next one probably won't have butt content.