[Report This]Date: May 17 2024 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Tiny dom? YES PLEASE!
I'm so glad I made time to read this. I love your writing style, your gentle tendencies, and the relationship dynamics of your characters. Still, as much as I'm invested in Finding What's Lost (I really want to get to the latest chapter), this may be my favorite story of yours.
I have nothing against your more commonly flustered or unsettled protagonists - I do thoroughly enjoy their dynamic with the powerful or dangerous women in their lives - but Andre's confidence and air of command is a thrilling and refreshing change of pace. Not only does he arrive with his ducks chained in a row, but he's ready to pluck a few feathers as he binds some new ducks. Right off the bat he's establishing dominance, and putting the dark elves on the back foot, forcing them to react to him.
On top of his bold nature, it's encouraging to see a male protagonist who is not only intelligent, but wise enough to prepare for obvious moves by the dark elves in the best way – beating them at their own game. The willingness of Dhela to participate, then play into the situation, and eventually submit in full made this a fun, easy, and enjoyable read.
The Pen of the Dread Lich Literoticus is an inspired idea. Of all the magic items I've seen proposed to impart power to words, this is my favorite, skirts down. There might be a bit of a plot hole here, as any one of the suddenly horny dark elves could have picked up our devious diplomat and used him for their pleasure, but given the tone and theme I'm all too happy to overlook it and just enjoy the story. "I'm doing it anyway" is very much the tone and soul of this story, and I absolutely love it.
Taking down the actual high-elf assassin while the dark elven spies and diplomat are incapacitated was an absolute flex, and I'm so glad you added it in there. And then that ending with Carter was an absolute "chef's kiss" moment. All of your stories are wonderful, but this definitely takes the cake for my favorite one-shot.
As for a few other standout notes:
* I cracked up at the Mario reference "the unshrinking spell is in another castle" - that's a cruel idea for a shrinking victim, but doubly-so for your readers.
*I 1000% agree that Turnabout is Fair Play!
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch, this one is definitely throwing the whole idea of the usual greenanon (or giantessworld) story on its head, with a brash and bold tiny protag who is not intending to give up the dom role just because he's small. I'm glad someone appreciated the pen of Literoticus, I might have to reuse that particular artifact one day. I suppose if the elves had gotten too horny on our protagonist he could have simply upped the spice in his description until they were incapacitated by lust, I mean he brought them to orgasm talking about trade tariffs after all.Our protagonist is obviously very genre savvy from the beginning to the end, who's to say he wouldn't have turned it to his favor?
Anyways tiny or even male dom isn't something I write a ton of, but it's always fun to branch out.
[Report This]Date: May 10 2024 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love me some tiny dom. It was cool seeing all the different ways Andre pulled one over on the elves, even defeating an actual high elf assassin while shrunk. His confidence was admirable, and his wit was almost as impressive as the dark elves' acting. Seriously, "I'll keep you safe between my boobs," immediately into "Give me a foot massage," was a Broadway worthy performance, just as compelling as Dret's stealthy assassin. I did find the dark elves as endearing as ever, especially Dhela with how her eagerness made that mind control necklace much more effective than it actually was. Another great elf story, I will always look forward to more.
Author's Response:
After Triumph of the Elves humans needed a win lol. A tiny almost always has to have a 10 in charisma and luck to take charge like this, Andre and his bag of magic sex toys managed to pull it off. The Dark Elves are a silly and sex obsessed bunch, at the end of the day so long as they're kind of accomplishing their mission of improving relations with the humans, I don't think Syleth, Dhela, and Dret are going to get in too much trouble for this one.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2024 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was an amusing little read. It is rare to see a tiny taking command of a situation with such consummate flair. The story title is definitely an apt descriptor in this case, that's for sure. Nice stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Andre pushed every advantage he had to wrangle those elves haha.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2024 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This certainly was a juicy story. Kinda makes me wonder how the situation would differ if the roles were reversed. Elves shrunk and humans big. That would be interesting twist.
Author's Response:
I think elves would make a good pet for a bratty witch who wants to learn magic
Date: May 08 2024 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This certainly was a juicy story. Kinda makes me wonder how the situation would differ if the roles were reversed. Elves shrunk and humans big. That would be interesting twist.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2024 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh I’m loving these elves stories first with triumphs and now this and it’s dark Elves my favorite kind of elves lol
Author's Response:
After Triumph of the Elves humanity needed a win lol
[Report This]Date: May 08 2024 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh I’m loving these elves stories first with triumphs and now this and it’s dark Elves my favorite kind of elves lol
Date: May 08 2024 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice. So glad to see another dark elf story. I would have preferred if Andre was dommed, but tinydom is different and interesting to see.
Author's Response:
I do love the dark elves, they're a silly bunch.