Date: May 28 2024 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Really great story. Can't wait to read more. Very well written and very provocative.
The obviously assumed relationship between shrunken Jeff and full sized Becca the controller of the shrink ray gun is Super Hot and Sexy.
Can't wait to read more about Becca using / abusing her shrunken Jeff.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm sorry to say, however, the story is finished!
Date: May 25 2024 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
Aww that was the end? What a great story, I liked how it all turned out ^-^
I was hoping for some butt stuff especially when he was really small but still it was great!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot :)
Date: May 20 2024 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
A really great story. I love the concept of Becca having a shrink ray gun she uses for innocuous purposes; yet can punish her son Ben in unknown ways with it. Now Jeff has been exposed to coming to Becca knowing that he would be alone with her.
Becca's feet and breasts are obvious objects of lust for Jeff, though let's now forget it was Becca's ass that first attracted Jeff to her. Perhaps Jeff needs to be more closely acquainted with Becca's ass, just as much as he desires her feet and tits.
I really like how Ben will be gone for a period of time, leaving Jeff alone with Becca, and for her to do with Jeff as she pleases without anyone being suspicious.
Can't wait to read what happens next. Terrific story, please keep it going.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. Glad this story has managed to captivate your imagination!
Date: May 19 2024 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 3
That's a really good story i love chapter 1 and he become way better now
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!!
Date: May 18 2024 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Super fun read so far! I hope we have some fun with the remote's limits, like she makes someone smaller than the remote can track and needs to get help or gets into trouble.
Author's Response:
Thank you! These are nice ideas
Date: May 18 2024 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Whoa love the attitude shift from Becca and how she can shrink him even more. Once the shrink ray is working again I'd love to see her go through with that threat and shrink him again instead of growing. Imagine being shrunk 3 times and then being lost to wonder the fabric of her thong ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks! He'd be really microscopic at that point...
Date: May 14 2024 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story has been good so far. Can't wait to see more! Hopefully he gets more up close with Becca's black thong ;)
Author's Response:
That's what our protagonist is wishing for too :')
Date: May 13 2024 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love that Becca really is into the giantess attitude, her comment that she’d stomp all over the two boys was super hot. Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: May 13 2024 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving the story so far! Hoping to see more and maybe some unaware interaction between Jeff and Becca?
Author's Response:
Thank you! There will certainly be an unaware scene later.
Date: May 04 2024 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love this intro hope to see more of this story
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Yes, there will be more