Very fun story! I enjoyed reading it and thankyou for writing it!

I won't lie though, I'm a little disappointed that she never realised who it was during the show, or discovered who and what happened to her family after it. To me it kinda makes the fact that she wiped out her loved ones all at once in the last chapter a little pointless? To me it's a bit of a waste having the setup be 'She doesn't know she just killed her family on live television while acting like a horny slut' and then just having no payoff or scene where she finds out. Although if we're keeping it unaware then it has to be that way I suppose.

But it's your story and if this is how you wanted it to go, then that's fine by me. I'm not going to act like I could have done it better or anything like that. And it's not fair to you to judge for what I wanted instead of what was written.

Again, thankyou for writing!

Fantastic. You've surpassed yourself with this one. Kelsey is just absolutely delightful 

Love that Kelsey is so into the domination! Maybe the normal sized cohost can join in the fun? Looking forward to more!

Amazing start to the story dude. Great pacing and setting the scene with the information about the entertainment industry managing to use shrinking tech to do shows like this. Also something I don't think gets mentioned enough is how organic your dialogue always feels. Jeff and Andrew's interation especially feels very realistic and incredibly easy to picture.

Awesome work as usual.