[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, chapter 5 was just fantastic! I love how Brooke was showing off for James the entire time. She was so good at the game that it was almost an afterthought for her. It was simply the medium she used to seduce James even more. l love her dedication to him, and I can't wait until James becomes dildo sized for her. I want to see how she takes advantage of that situation! Love it. Great commission.
Author's Response: Thanks breastclimber! So glad you're enjoying it! <3
[Report This]Date: August 27 2024 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow wow wow.. Shaping up to be an awesome story! I'm so invested :3
The last paragraph litteraly gave me chills ~ ;
"Mmmm it’s you,” Brooke grinned, tickling the underside of the “man’s” feet with her fingers, making him bounce around in midair, before straightening back up to her full height, still palming the ball. “Get comfortable, James. I’m gonna put on a show for you.”
(I wonder if James enjoys hanging from high places :p)
I hope he doesn't fall off the deep end too soon though, it's nice to see him have a semblance of controle :p
Great stuff!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review! I'm really happy you're enjoying the story so far! <3
[Report This]Date: August 26 2024 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
So it looks like he is shrinking little fast. 1" in 24 hours. I hope he doesn't get much shorter then around 4' ish. So he could still work. I would like to see her have a growth spurt push her up to about 7' ish. And she would just dominate in the game.
Just my thought
Keep going please
Author's Response: Remember, this is a commissioned story, so what the commissioner wants will be written. James is going to get a LOT smaller, waaaay under 4'0.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2024 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Not bad looking forward for the next chapter.
Date: June 10 2024 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying this so far. I like how reluctant therapist is drawn in by her sexiness as he gets smaller, and finally gives in!
[Report This]Date: May 09 2024 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
This story is good. I just hope you don't shrink him down to nothingness. Maybe he tries to treatment to stop his shrinking but doesn't work. But makes his body a little more denser as he shrinks down to about 4 ft ish. So he can handle being with taller girls. and maybe make it so he's packing a little more. to satisfy the taller girls. lol just idea.
Look forward to seeing the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2024 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
This story is good. I just hope you don't shrink him down to nothingness. Maybe he tries to treatment to stop his shrinking but doesn't work. But makes his body a little more denser as he shrinks down to about 4 ft ish. So he can handle being with taller girls. and maybe make it so he's packing a little more. to satisfy the taller girls. lol just idea.
Look forward to seeing the next chapter.