Reviews For The Girl Next Door
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Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2024 11:55 PM Title: The Girl

I enjoyed the story. However, I would have liked to see the time with her teasing him after shrinking last a little longer. In particular more actual mouth play rather than the immediate swallow. 


Still enjoyed it, but I think that's my biggest criticism of your stories in general. The actual vore parts frequently seem a bit fast and rushed. 

But still enjoyed it 



Author's Response:

Thanks Cameron. Glad you enjoyed it.

Your critique is valid - many of the vorings in my stories are often rushed or quick, which is purposeful in many cases. It's supposed to lend to the casual nature and callousness of the act from the viewpoint of the giantess as well as the suddeness of the act from the viewpoint of the victim. Having said that, there are instances where the voring is more elaborate and discriptive (BJ's voring in Nibs Adventures as an example).

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2024 12:35 AM Title: The Girl

Very interesting story I like the concept and looking forward to the journey to take us on with these characters. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Alpha. Thoughts on the journey now that it is complete?

Reviewer: Rosboch Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2024 10:10 PM Title: The Girl

This looks very promising. You are very productive!



Author's Response:

Thanks Rosboch. :)

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