Date: April 21 2024 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
That back-and-forth between Mary and Susan before Mary ate her the way she did—was masterful. That "it is what is" type attitude from the giantess was great. I'll be honest, I was enjoying the story a lot until they ate those tanker trucks and got super big. From the point of the story on, it felt rushed. But all those interactions Mary and Alex had with all those tinies they killed and the betrayal the tinies experienced was phenomenal.
Author's Response: I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Author's Response: I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Author's Response: I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings.
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings
Author's Response:
I feel the same way about the ending being rushed, but it was already starting to be a little longer than I really wanted it to be. I probably could've had some more detailed interactions once they got to giga size and beyond. I knew what they were going to do until they got to the city, and I knew what the eventual ending would be, but I didn't really come up with enough to bridge the gap there.
Thank you for your feedback. I've always been a big fan of your stories, particularly the ones in more Swiftian settings
Date: April 19 2024 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
I wish only women grow bigger!
Author's Response:
Sorry that you feel that way. I like giant couples, and I clearly tagged it as a couple story.
Author's Response:
Sorry that you feel that way. I like giant couples, and I clearly tagged it as a couple story.