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Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2024 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Very well written. Excellent descriptive language and visual imagery. Great characterization. You did a great job. :3

Reviewer: Xiao-renzhe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2024 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Most engagingly fun and fleshed out story I’ve stumbled upon in a while. I especially loved the implication in the ending. I read this last night and that ending, as well as several other scenes, looped in my head all day. Good work!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2024 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was extremely well done. Great dialogue and very sexy. But I'm most intrigued by what's left unexplained. Like where Kurt was really from, what Marcus was trying to buy from him, and how much he knew about what happened. Fascinating story.

Reviewer: I for incredible Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2024 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bro, this is hands down one of the best stories on this website! I can't wait to read more of your writing!

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