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Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2024 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

If I could I'd give this 11/10, simply one of the best I've ever read. Nothing quite quite like some mistaken identity, especially when a malicious third-party is responsible.

I'm definitely left craving more. I imagine he'll have to convince her soon, or face starvation/dehydration. That is if she doesn't just accidentally asphyxiate or break him during a session.



Author's Response:

thank you very much for your kind words. I've had a lot of fun with this story.

I can't promise I will ever get back to our poet in peril, but I generally keep my options open. so, if the mood strikes. I've also thought that the mistaken identity part would have to end pretty soon, because she'll realize he's, in fact, human. Unless you entertain the possibility that he was not just transported, but transformed...

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