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Reviewer: EtGBigRI Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2024 10:03 AM Title: Dante Part 1

When it comes to the usage of time manipulation, your stories are definitely some of the standouts from what I've read. I found the dialogue from Dante in the last few paragraphs to be a bit awkward, but that's just me. 

Nice to see you writing again, and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: Max_4206969 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2024 5:16 AM Title: Dante Part 1

We missed seeing new stories from you too!


May we expect more Personal Goddess-esque stories from you soon?

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