[Report This]Date: April 28 2026 9:52 PM Title: Rapture
Hope you're doing well. I have to be honest when I first started reading this, the opening with Myrioda discovering that bulging sack that looked like a natural toilet immediately caught my attention. The way you described the heart-shaped leaf lid, the intricate vine system, the ground shifting from shrubbery to barren mud those small environmental details made the scene feel grounded even as the content became increasingly surreal. You didn't just describe an event; you built a mood, a sense of inevitability, almost like a ritual.
But the moment that genuinely stunned me was the shift to Ara's perspective down below. The contrast between Myrioda's casual relief ("Unghhh fuck… What did I eat…") and Ara's absolute terror, her worship turning into horror, her realization that she was nothing to the goddess she had been chasing that emotional whiplash was powerfully executed. The way you described the pucker blooming open, the blackhole comparison, the pressure wave slamming her into the waters, the atmosphere becoming a thick miasma of sulfur and rotting meat it was visceral and unsettling in exactly the way the scene demanded. Not everyone can write something this extreme while still maintaining a sense of character interiority and emotional logic, but you pulled it off. I genuinely respect the effort you've put into this.
I'm a paid artist and I specialize in turning stories into comic pages. The way you handle scale Ara watching those two astronomical bodies eclipse her view, the asshole being big enough to swallow her house whole, the slow motion blooming of the pucker those are visual moments I can already see panel by panel. I'd love to bring your story to life visually. If you're interested, feel free to reach out:
Email: trippsyyarts @ gmail . com
Discord: tripsydraws
Looking forward to hearing from you. My question is this: when Ara, in the middle of that chaos, started mentally spiraling from worship to self-loathing realizing Myrioda didn't even know her name, that she was just "some worthless little insect" was that realization meant to be the beginning of her breaking free from the obsession, or was it setting up an even darker emotional dependency where her worth becomes entirely tied to whether Myrioda ever acknowledges her existence?
[Report This]Date: February 07 2026 10:48 PM Title: Plague Bringers
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon
[Report This]Date: April 13 2024 6:09 AM Title: Plague Bringers
This is incredible & has rekindled my passion for writing erotica. I love the detail & the elements of horror intermingled with sensuality. Looking forward to more! Sincerely, thank you for sharing. (Re-posting this review because I forgot to include a rating haha)
Date: April 07 2024 1:55 PM Title: Rapture
You really have a knack for accentuating the size difference in your story. Lovecraftian/Horror vibes add a lot to the tone of a size story that often isn't focused on. Not often you get a story of such good quality pertaining to the subject matter. I eagerly await further chapters to come.
Author's Response:
Oh my god thanks! Some of my favourite pieces of media are DDLC, House of Leaves, and The Magnus Archives, and while I’m not nearly as good, I’ve been thinking a lot about my fetish and its ties to fear, and absolute power imbalance portrayed in such a strongly sensory way. I’ve been trying really hard to pull from familiar media to try and portray that incomprehensible sense of degradation, and I’m really happy to hear that it’s paying off! I won’t be updating for a bit because I have final exams, but the next three chapters are dropping as a group, so you can look forward to that.
Date: April 03 2024 5:36 PM Title: Plague Bringers
I love the subject matter and the writing, very good. Alas to me that it's F/f, but someone will love it in the way you want them to.
Author's Response:
You should totally try writing your own. I thought it’d be tedious but worth the final product, but being forced to just sit and fixate on your fantasies in such detail and so drawn out is unimaginably hot. Thanks for the support btw!