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Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2024 11:41 AM Title: Sunset With People You Love

Thanks again for doing the story. You did a good job on it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the opportunity, this was a really fun commission!

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2024 11:34 PM Title: Sunset With People You Love

This story is yet another one that is very well written. It's amazing how this universe captures you. You just don't want the story to end. I had tears and a smile of happiness when the end came. I think more stories from this universe are needed. If you have time, Green, dedicate a little more. It's a favor that I think the community will greatly appreciate. Honestly, your stories are captivating in the best way because despite the subject matter, I think they always teach us values ​​that are important. Thank you for this gift, my friend. Keep it up.



Author's Response:

I'm sure we'll be back to the Abduction universe again someday, it's got a lot of tales left to tell. Thanks for reading, see you next time!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2024 11:38 PM Title: Remembering What's Important

Oops I made a small error. They did shrink a Cephalo in the first story! It had just completely slipped my mind. Oh well, still cool to see! 



Author's Response:

They did indeed! Energy shields in this setting block shrink rays and plasma weapons, along with bullets and most other stuff. Cephalos have armor on their ships, but don't use power armor or shields like Zetans and Humans do, largely because their mental powers are usually enough. 

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2024 11:28 PM Title: Remembering What's Important

Woo! Another victory over the squids! Ya know I had thought about using the shrink rays on them in the first story, so it was cool to see it happen in this one. Now the humans and Zetans can begin their better relationship with one another. I suppose it’ll be time for some big celebrations in the next chapter. I look forward to Keva keeping her word on what she said at the end there haha. 


I really hope we might be able to see one of the Zetans in the group shrunken at others feet with Lucas before the end. I get the feeling Elora would be into it lol



Author's Response:

You might say that Zetan women have a weird cultural hangup about letting themselves be shrunk, Nea in the origianl story was probably being very kinky by her own society's standard when she enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2024 6:28 AM Title: Starcrossed

A riveting read! All of the drama made it seem like it went by so fast haha. And it doesn’t seem like the bad times are ending soon. Maybe what is to come will end up bringing Lucas and Keva closer together. Now I’m really wondering what these other two races you mentioned look like? Could they be more large women with vibrantly colored skin? 



Author's Response:

Nope, things are about to get a lot worse. The Zetans at this point are not great people, but the Cephalo are bad enough that they can force even the worst of enemies to work together, especially since humanity has a deep genetic hatred of the Cephalo due to some ancient aliens stuff. 


Regarding the other two alien races? I never really decided, I always kind of imagined a few refugee communities living in the Zetan Empire, with their appearances and mannerisms being something I could fill in at a later date if the universe expanded that way. I'm sure they're improbably sexy too, though they might not have the same obsession with shrinking others, that's very much the Zetan thing since it's kind of their "signature technology" in universe. 

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2024 4:00 AM Title: Starcrossed

And here… we…. go….



Author's Response:

That quote certainly fits the circumstances

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2024 10:48 AM Title: Measures of Worth

Again great job on the chapter. I know there are only a few chapters left, but is there any chance on there being space for Keva and Elora to play with Lucas again? I like seeing them play with him.



Author's Response:

I think we should have some space for that before the end. 

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2024 8:30 AM Title: Measures of Worth

Ah, man. I wondered if the squid’s were going to make an appearance in this. If Keva and Lucas thought Zetan-Human relations were tense, wait until these freaky things come creeping around! Seems like Lucas may end up with a Zetan harem of his own. Some guys have all the luck. Keep up the good work, GA! 



Author's Response:

Yeah he's a lucky guy, not all humans have it as easy as he does after getting nabbed by the Zetans lol. 

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2024 6:28 PM Title: Measures of Worth

Oh, they finally appear. Keva is going to be extra glad she purchased a human soon. I can't wait for Elora to realise that the "primitive monkey" is responsible for keeping her superior mind intact.

Also in the original story it's mentioned that many Zetan soldiers would stomp and eat shrunken humans for fun during the invasion. Would Nalia be aware of these atrocities?



Author's Response:

The atrocities against humans using shrink rays are completely censored from the Zetan populace at large, and even to the lower level security clearances like Nalia has. She has probably read rumors about them happening, and probably suspects they are true, but she wouldn't have seen hard proof of them. In case it's not clear, Nalia has a very negative view of the Zetan government and military, so she would believe just about any terrible rumor on a message board, and probably thinks things are much worse for humans than they actually are. For some perspective, the Zetan government still wants the public to see them as the good guys, even though they're shrinking and enslaving another race. Their narrative is that the humans are dumb and warlike, and they'll all be much happier being tiny pets (obviously some like Lucas will, but most will not lol). While there are definitely atrocities and murders being committed by the Zetan forces, it's not official combat doctrine and probably denied or disavowed by the higher ups, even if they're not doing that much to actually curb it, there are billions more humans to catch after all.

With the Cephalo finally entering the story, yes Keva and everyone else who purchased humans will be very glad they did so. Elora has probably already realized that Lucas is her equal in most ways, even if she can't admit it to herself. An army of zetan-eating space squids can certainly speed up that process though.


Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2024 1:54 AM Title: Off Leash

More great stuff. Excited to see which other Zetans get involved in our trio’s escapades! 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, they'll have plenty of guests, Keva is quite generous after all

Reviewer: greenpeon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2024 12:10 PM Title: Take Me Away

The original story was one of my all-time favourites, I'm glad we got a prequel. As someone who enjoys more unwilling/forced femdom I do hope our little mechanic has a few run-ins with some less pleasant Zetan socialites with a sadistic streak though. Before being rescued by Keva/Nalia, of course...



Author's Response:

Don't worry we'll see some less than kind Zetans over the course of the story. Glad you liked the original!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2024 5:54 AM Title: Breaking in a Pet

Another banger chapter. I really like Keva and Lucas’s dynamic so far. Both already having growing feelings for each other, but also still wondering where this relationship might end up going in the future. Plus they both just can’t get enough of each other despite that haha. 


Also random question. Can’t remember if it was stated in the first chapter. Is Nalia taller than Keva or are they close to the same height? And thanks to angelus for commissioning the story! 





Author's Response:

As a quick rundown of the three main character's heights.

Lucas is a tall guy at 6' 2

Keva is 6' 4

Nalia is 6' 7

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2024 4:45 PM Title: Take Me Away

I love seeing this universe return!   The original story was one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

It's one of mine too, this is going to be about 6 chapters long and should be interesting.

Reviewer: Slaww99 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2024 5:50 PM Title: Take Me Away

You are my favorite artist here. I love this series. I'm glad there will be sequels. Another incredible world to discover through your writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks! The original Abduction story was one of my more ambitious ones, I'm glad people liked it enough to want to see more!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2024 11:58 PM Title: Take Me Away

A very exciting start! It’s cool to see the beginning of the human and Zetan relationship. Really like our new cast. Lucas and Keva seem quite perfect for each other, minus the ya know… abducting. The idea of Nalia getting involved in their shrunken fun times makes me eager for more. Great stuff as always GA! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! The Zetan-Human relationship obviously doesn't start off on a great foot, the Zetans of this time period aren't nearly as nice as the ones we saw in the original story.

Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2024 11:40 PM Title: Take Me Away

Again you did a good job with the first chapter. I wish I could have you do the next one next week, but for now I'll have to keep it biweekly. I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks again! this is a fun world to be writing in.

Reviewer: lightwing Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2024 10:35 PM Title: Take Me Away

Hello! Space elf invasion prequel here we come!



Author's Response:

Yes, by land, sea, or space, they're always out to get us.

Reviewer: UHF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2024 9:51 PM Title: Take Me Away

I haven't even read it yet, but I already want 20 more chapters! No pressure! Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Uh, well I was thinking more like 6-7 for this story lol, still hope you enjoy it!

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