Glad that you enjoyed it! I would definitely understand anyone's desire to distance themselves from Natalie. But maybe she'll wind up doing a bit of self reflection. Only time will tell. 

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You and me both! I was reading a story recently where an overbearing giantess mother was trying to keep her son and husband under her control and it was filling me with so much anxiety. But the payoff for that sort of tension is the huge wave of relief that comes when someone else steps in for the rescue or when the tiny gets some much deserved payback. I’m really glad to hear that I’ve managed to capture a tiny bit of that sensation here in my story.  Ultimately the direction of the story comes down to the commissioner, but I do find myself typically rooting for characters getting their comeuppance in the end. 

I agree about Amanda. I think the guilt is deserved, however well intentioned she might have been in trying to get the family back together, she definitely out Ryan in a touch of “danger.

As far as Natalie goes, I think her ulterior motive comes down to control. Her some fucked up and now in her eyes, he can’t be trusted to make decisions for himself anymore. But if she were to get her way, how would her perception of her tiny some change given the benefit of time. Would she eventually start to treat him like normal, or would she start to see him more as her property? I think that’s the operative question. 

Thank you so much for the kind words. Hearing from the community is what makes writing so much fun for me. So thanks for the review and thanks so much for reading!!

Yeah, Natalie’s a real peach, ain’t she? We’ll have to wait and see what path she winds up taking. The way I see it, she’s got two options. Either she does some self reflection and realizes how useless and harmful her bigotry is, or she remains self centered and becomes somewhat of a villain in her son’s story. I’m in a unique position in that I get to write the words and flesh out the specifics, but I’m just as blind to the future as the reader is. We’ll just have to wait and see where the commissioner takes us next.

And I agree about Amanda. I think there’s good intention there, trying to repair strain in the family. But now that she’s seen first hand the way that her mother’s attitude affects the people that she cares about, Amanda is realizing that she should’ve put a bit more stock in Ryan’s concerns. Question is, did that revelation come too late? Maybe she can co-opt Brooke into playing defense on her behalf. I mean, “pranks” aside, she hasn’t shown any signs of sharing her mother’s cold hearted beliefs. Only time will tell.

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Glad that you're enjoying it, next chapter should be going up on Monday. Thanks so much for reading!!

Brooke I think is just a bit less aware of how serious the situation is for her brother. Naively, she still sees him the same way she did when he was big, only now she's got infinitely more leverage on him and might need to be reigned in a bit. (But you've gotta remember that this is just smut at the end of the day. Sometimes the giantess had to just fart on a tiny guys.)

Natalie, while definitely under the influence of alcohol, is far from a saint in this story. You can only blame so much on the booze, and at some point you've gotta take responsibility for the way you speak and act. Flat out, Natalie is a bigot with some inherent prejudices against shrunken people. Now she has to deal with the fact that someone she loves is tiny and that's causing some serious tension beneath the surface. We'll have to wait and see whether she chooses to reevaluate or double down. 

And I'm definitely looking for both Hailey and Sarah to make a return at some point, but it may be some time before we see that happening. But definitely some more, non-family members coming in the near future. 

All in all, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and I'm grateful for any feedback that the community has to share. Thanks so much for reading!!

I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I definitely agree that staying with Amanda is best case scenario for Ryan, but how well will his sister do in a confrontation with their overbearing mother? Hopefully we'll find out next time!

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I definitely think the alcohol has something to do with it, but there’s certainly an underlying level of disdain in there. But at the end of the day, this is her only son that we’re talking about, so how cold can she really stay?

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I think we’re going to be seeing some more of the Mom before we get too much farther along. And I can definitely imagine Ryan having some similar nightmares about his titanic mother, so hang tight and see what happens.

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I think we’re going to be seeing some more of the Mom before we get too much farther along. And I can definitely imagine Ryan having some similar nightmares about his titanic mother, so hang tight and see what happens.

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Glad to hear it! Thanks for reading!!

Yes, the nightmare visions give me a chance to push boundaries a bit more, but more characters with different thresholds for depravity can keep things interesting as well. Thanks so much for reading!!