[Report This]Date: November 20 2024 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
I reread the chapter while I think it's a great story I think the first time I read the story it didn't click in my head about them drinking whine even the mother which mostly explains why his younger sister and mother are acting a little extra aggressive than I expected. I don't know why I skipped over that detail. Anyway I love the story hopefully we get some mischief with the older sisters neighbor.
Author's Response:
Brooke I think is just a bit less aware of how serious the situation is for her brother. Naively, she still sees him the same way she did when he was big, only now she's got infinitely more leverage on him and might need to be reigned in a bit. (But you've gotta remember that this is just smut at the end of the day. Sometimes the giantess had to just fart on a tiny guys.)
Natalie, while definitely under the influence of alcohol, is far from a saint in this story. You can only blame so much on the booze, and at some point you've gotta take responsibility for the way you speak and act. Flat out, Natalie is a bigot with some inherent prejudices against shrunken people. Now she has to deal with the fact that someone she loves is tiny and that's causing some serious tension beneath the surface. We'll have to wait and see whether she chooses to reevaluate or double down.
And I'm definitely looking for both Hailey and Sarah to make a return at some point, but it may be some time before we see that happening. But definitely some more, non-family members coming in the near future.
All in all, I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and I'm grateful for any feedback that the community has to share. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 20 2024 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
Feel like this chapter isn't getting enough love imo lol. Plot is moving forward monumentally and the new gts are performing wonderfully.
Brooke being playful to the point of Ryan's mental detriment makes perfect sense. She's too playful, which as already established, and she's new to this situation. She can't fathom his mental state unlike Amanda.
Natalie is trying to make up for not having her son believe in her but is still so pissed, and is just a bigot lol, that she can't help but belittle. Even doing the parent thing where she compares her children to make one feel worse. Despite this, she still wanted to get him some kind of help. A bitch, a real bitch, but I like the character so far.
I really like the "Trapped" description btw. Did a good job showing his feelings. It really does feel like he shouldn't have came huh. Not to mention staying here would really suck ass, no Brooke.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
So glad that you enjoyed. There's definitely some tension between Ryan and everyone in his family. Some more so than others, but he's still adjusting to his new reality so he's bound to find a comfortable space to occupy as things move forward. The question is, who's going to be left inside his circle once he finally establishes some firm boundaries. Natalie is a bit of a long shot, and Brooke might be too, though not nearly as much as her mother. But I'd also say that Amanda's done some overstepping too. Knowing the truth about the nature of their mother and still making the unanimous decision to keep Ryan away from the safety of their own homw overnight. Admittedly a pretty dick move.
Time will tell where our characters end up. And I hope that you continue to enjoy the ride. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
This is a great chapter that really raises the stakes. I hope amanda is able to save him from this situation, the clinic sounds bad enough but having to come back to this home, with his RP prejudiced mom and Incorrigibly playful younger sister, I just hope he can make it back to Amanda’s apartment with her in one piece. I’m beginning to agree with him that the motorcycle was not worth it lol. Great content in this one as well, particularly liked the table scene. Can’t wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I definitely agree that staying with Amanda is best case scenario for Ryan, but how well will his sister do in a confrontation with their overbearing mother? Hopefully we'll find out next time!
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
The character dynamics in this story have been a real treat, but boy, are Ryan's worse fears being validated in terms of his mom...I know it's the alcohol talking, but her calling him a 'them' now and taunting him to say if he 'feels' like a grown man is CUTTING to come from his mom.
Really on the edge of my seat to see where the character dynamics play out, but I do hope Amanda finds a way to clock this and earnestly stand up to her mom for her brother, because as much as he wants to, Ryan needs to start learning quickly not to pick fights with the far larger ladies in his life and both him and his mom may do something they both regret.
Then there's the baby of the family Brooke kinda vibing and trying to joke with Ryan even considering his new stature, liking her teasing energy as some levity here.
Looking forward to more, the character drama in this story is *chef's kiss*
Author's Response:
Here’s to hoping that the Miller family finds a way to reconcile their differences and come out the other side closer than ever before! But I suspect the road to that particular destination is going to be a bumpy one :)
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oooohhh, this is interesting. In some ways, seeing Nat's bigotry towards tinies is satisfying and justifys Ryan's worries. I'm looking forward to her dominating attitude, though I wonder how much the alcohol is influencing her.
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
I definitely think the alcohol has something to do with it, but there’s certainly an underlying level of disdain in there. But at the end of the day, this is her only son that we’re talking about, so how cold can she really stay?
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 19 2024 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
And we are back to more abuse. Lovely...
Wish more people stuck to their tags, instead of swinging it around.
Author's Response:
So, similar to what I said last time you left a whining review, just because there’s conflict between characters, doesn’t mean that it’s torture or abuse. But seeing this made me take a look at your profile and go through all of the reviews that you’ve left.
You seem like a miserable little crybaby fuck who does nothing but bitch and complain if a story is nothing but cotton candy and rainbows. I hope that one day someone writes you the dry, bland care bear bullshit story that you’re looking for, but I can promise you that it won’t be me. Feel free to stop reading my stories, because your opinion is of no value to me, or frankly, anyone else.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2024 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bit late of a review, but absolutely love the family dynamic and can't wait to see more of it honestly.
I genuinely enjoy your unaware interactions with the way they come across as believable, they flow naturally and they're not overwhelmed by milking the scenario to an endless degree.
I know it's commissioned, but I hope the commissioner wants to explore more unaware scenarios with the mom, it'd be fantastic to see the almost careless and haughty attitude of the mom resulting in Ryan being sat on or entrapped in her clothes while she's unaware.
Anyway, just wanted to say, you're still killing it as always, genuinely a good read!
Author's Response:
I think we’re going to be seeing some more of the Mom before we get too much farther along. And I can definitely imagine Ryan having some similar nightmares about his titanic mother, so hang tight and see what happens.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Author's Response:
I think we’re going to be seeing some more of the Mom before we get too much farther along. And I can definitely imagine Ryan having some similar nightmares about his titanic mother, so hang tight and see what happens.
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2024 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't believe I have not commented on this story yet! I'm enjoying it very much. Can't say much that others here have not already stated, but I certainly want to encourage you to continue.
Although not resolved, I was worried that Ryan's mother was going to be less accepting of his new status. She is more upset about the lack of communication. Of course the story is not over yet.
Also, I assume Ryan's girlfriend is still in the picture somewhere. I thought that once he got his phone back, he would be all over texting her big time and trying to meet up. Looking forward to their physical encounter and how Amanda will react.
Author's Response:
Well, while Natalie is definitely upset about the lying, there certainly is a reason for the tension between them in the first place. And yes, the plan is for Laura to make a return at some point.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review and thanks so much for reading. New chapter going up soon!
Author's Response:
Well, while Natalie is definitely upset about the lying, there certainly is a reason for the tension between them in the first place. And yes, the plan is for Laura to make a return at some point.
Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review and thanks so much for reading. New chapter going up soon!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter enjoy this story a lot.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
Would love to see Ryan get trapped on an unaware Brooke in the future!!
Author's Response:
That would be fun, wouldn't it? But where would he get stuck? That's the million dollar question. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
This is a great story. Can't wait to see where this is going to go. Hopefully the nightmare/daydreaming lets you go more X rated. Either way, looking forward to the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Yes, the nightmare visions give me a chance to push boundaries a bit more, but more characters with different thresholds for depravity can keep things interesting as well. Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is such a fun story with great dynamics. I can't wait to see where it develops. ^w^ Thank you for sharing this with us all!
Author's Response:
So glad that you've enjoyed it! I'm very excited for this next chapter, as I think its going to be a great one. Stay tuned and thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Another great chapter! The daydream/night mare scene was fantastic, combined with Brookes confusion. Such believable personalities and reactions. I actually feel bad for Ryan lol, hopefully his little big sis will forgive him!
Author's Response:
So glad that you liked it! The nightmare was intended to inject a bit of the cruel giantess motif that I believe I'm better at, without impacting the true nature of the characters. Gotta be able to serve the plot AND keep things horny.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: October 28 2024 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! Cant wait for more.
Any chance of more bad luck for Ryan and him ending up shrinking even smaller?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. While I cannot say for certain that there won't be any further shrinking, I'm fairly confident that Ryan is now at his permanent size. I've not heard anything from the commissioner regarding smaller sizes and personally Ryan is already on the very lowest rung of the size ladder for what I normally work with. Anything smaller of the tiny or bigger for the giantess and I just don't feel like I can sufficiently capture the interaction between them. It's just not my style.
That being said, I do have a series up on my DeviantArt page called HNTR. It contains giga/micro interaction. Personally I don't believe it's my best work, but the commissioner was always happy with them and it is at the scale your talking about. (Its futanari content though)
Either way, I hope you continue to enjoy Ryan at his current pipsqueak status. Thanks for reading!!
Date: October 28 2024 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is a good series for a drama. I wish there was more (adult) romance but sense it is mostly about the bio family that can be a little hard. I feel bad for Ryan. He was just trying to help and be with his sister and now Brooke is mad at him because of her own carelessness. I do hope she winds up apologizing. Please keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I do believe that we'll get into a bit more romance once we bring a few more characters in. Ryan does have an impending confrontation with his ex on the horizon so we'll see how that turns out. And Ryan definitely caught a raw deal with Brooke there, but like Amanda said time will heal all wounds. She'll be back to her playful teasing in no time.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: October 28 2024 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Another amazing chapter. Loved the reactions between the mom and younger sister. The boob trap was exactly what I was hoping for. Hopefully, there will be more awkward boob situations with her. I like the idea of her thinking Ryan is perving on her.
Cant wait to see how those two treat him going forward.
Author's Response:
Glad to know that you enjoyed it!! The intention was for each of the family members to be noticeably different in their interactions with their brother. One thing I really loathe in my own writing is to feel like I'm being repetitive just for the sake of hitting the fetish milestones. So the hope is that the smut chapters will feel fresh each time.
Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing. More of Natalie please!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed her. Don't worry, she'll continue to be more involved in the story from here on out. But only time will tell what kind of person she turns out to be.
Thanks so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: October 28 2024 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hooray! Another sister joined in! I love Brooke already. She sounds kinda fun. I really thought for a second she's going to be actually cruel. That would be really cool too
I wonder if we're going to get another feet scenario with both Amanda and Brooke
Author's Response:
WHat's better than one giant sister? TWO giant sisters!! Glad that you're enjoying. The little daydream sequences are there to fit in some of my more outright cruel content without impacting the actual characters. Can't say for certain if we'll see some joint foot action, but anything is possible.
Thanks so much for reading!!
Date: October 21 2024 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
You paint such a vivid picture, it's outstanding. Loved loved loved him falling asleep on Amanda's ass cheek, hot yet sweet lol
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Glad that you've enjoyed it so far! Next chapter should be going up very soon.
Thanks for reading!
Date: October 07 2024 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Longtime lurker, finally bit the bullet of creating an account. Wanted to thank you for many a good read.
Author's Response:
Thanks for making the effort! I'm glad you decided to make the leap and start posting your own stories. I saw the two that you posted the other day and I've added them to my list to read. Based on the tags, they look to be right up my alley.
Thanks so much for reading!!