Date: July 20 2024 3:48 PM Title: Intro
Nice to see you circle back around, definitely would be interested in seeing how his life wound up and if he made it out.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2024 1:42 AM Title: Intro
This story is amazing!
It's rare to find stories with a heavy focus on shoe exploration, and even more uncommon for them to be written so well.
I really hope you continue this one.
Date: March 18 2024 12:38 PM Title: Testing the device
great writing. can't wait for next chapter.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2024 1:14 AM Title: Testing the device
A very nice beginning, with plenty of well described desires and intents. I'm looking forward to more of this story.
There is one question I have, especially considering all the detail you have stated thus far. Chase seems to love and adore his wife Alexis, so why is it that he has an infinity for her sister Delaney's feet rather than Alexis'? As Chase himself states, this could cause him his relationship with Alexis, so why choose Delaney?
[Report This]Date: March 17 2024 11:54 PM Title: Intro
Nice one looking for the next chapter
Date: March 17 2024 1:31 AM Title: Intro
very promising start, you should definitely continue.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2024 1:17 AM Title: Intro
What a nice intro, you really need to continue this story
Date: March 15 2024 6:06 PM Title: Intro
You should definitely continue it-he should be able to shrink down to, imho, half a millimeter and then enter the discarded flat. While her wife is in the toilet or sleeping.