Reviewer: DrTritium Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2024 10:38 PM Title: The Lady of the Castle (Halloween 2024)

The 3,000 word limit was an injustice for this story.

I really liked the world building, it was easy to climb into this world after the first few paragraphs. And the idea of a Sara as normal-sized human character added a lot. It's an inroad for betrayal but also the ability to lift someone from slave to master. That could have been a whole extra 3,000 words. But phenomenal all the same.

Author's Response:

Hey, thank you so much! I always struggle beneath a word limit and I definitely had to cut some stuff to accommodate the event. But after listening to story's being read, it makes sense why they need to be kept short! Thanks so much!