You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2024 3:24 AM Title: Part 1

A nice beginning, and grammatically well written.

This story has a lot of potential; but it seems to be at the very start of the tale.

Looking forward to more of this story and what happens to Harry at the hands of Isabella. 



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks again for your review which is appreciated and thanks for your feedback.

I would be interested to know what you would like to happen to Harry next though...

You must login (register) to review.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.