Perfect as always 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

We've already talked about this chapter and how much I love it, but I want to make sure you get your proper allotment of stars, so here are a couple more thoughts!

I know I mentioned how much I loved that handheld scene with Evie holding Miguel and Luna while talking with Liam after Sofia went to sleep after the dinner party. But I actually went back and reread that part, and I noticed some details that really made the scene feel special. I love how you highlighted how much Evie was moving her head and other hand when she talked and how steady (even gently rocking) the downsizers in her other hand. It's a small detail, but seeing how much she talks with her hands and body really makes the fact that she is keeping them steady and making sure they're comfortable show how much attention and care she's paying to them. Even though she's talking to her ex who she wants back (and the guilt she's wrestling with about it), she's still making them the priority, balancing those feelings with their safety and comfort. Evie is fucking incredible!

Of course, that it's Miguel in her palm might have helped with that!

As you know, I love Liam, but holy shit was that scene where Miguel and Luna had a lovemaking session rather than just fucking, only for Liam to have been watching and calling it beautiful was next level. He loves his wife so much, and he wants her to be happy, knowing that Miguel can do things for her that he can't. And it feels like he's starting to truly feel the same way about Miguel, not in terms of romantic love but a real connection, as opposed to Liam just being a chill bro who cares. This moment cemented them as a throple for me.

I also really like how this parallels Luna's desire for Liam to get together with Evie. I loved Liam's hesitance to do that, because he knows there's a deep emotional connection between Evie and him, and he doesn't want Luna to feel threatened. But Luna knows this, too, and she doesn't want her husband to have to give up that connection he has with Evie. As long as they play with her, too, of course! But seriously, like Liam feels about Miguel and her, Luna realizes that there are things Evie can do for her husband that she can't.

In both of these cases, it's not a simple case of getting off on being cucked or just allowing their each other to experience normal sex. They want each other to embrace the love they feel for Miguel and Evie, too. They love each other so much that they aren't threatened even by such deep emotional connections coming from outside the marriage. There's something really beautiful about that, and it's no wonder that such a thing could sweep up even someone as traditional and stubborn as Miguel.

Of course, that Evie and Miguel have something brewing between them too only makes the whole thing more interesting! Honestly, I don't know if I've seen a polyamorous relationship covered on such an emotional level in a story before.

Once again, phenomenal work in this chapter! Every chapter has been excellent, but I feel like the emotion in this one reached another level and in so many different ways!

This was honestly my favorite chapter of the story. Lots of development to unpack but gotta say the real mvp of this chapter was Miguel. Dude suffered too much for too long. And I liked that downsizing movie reference but with a twist in the downsizer seeking the divorce rather than the human. 
My favorite line was “he almost felt bad for Sofia and then he remembered all the things she did.” It kinda resonates with the readers when they see her whole world turn upside down and gain a pinch of sympathy until you remember.
Evie is awesome. I loved the twist she has against Sofia. 
Liam is such a chill guy. Their bro talk with Miguel was a highlight. 
Overall excellent chapter. Congrats on a great story. 

I am loving this series. Well done with the writing on this. It keeps a really put together idea and keeps you hooked in. Been a while since I read something that I actually followed the storyline, and not just the fetish parts. You keep a really good balance with both of those. 

I really want everything to turn out a happy ending for all, but I am also very curious about what might happen when the baddies get their way. This last chapter where Liam calls Sofia just a roommate was awesome. Thinking she was in control and hot shit, just to be shot down for once. This is the kind of story that is perfect. Something that you wants to read more to see if Sofia has her way with Luna and Miguel when Liam isn't looking, or will Liam finally step in and help Miguel out. I want to know what will happen next. Plus the build up with what Tricia might do if she gets her way. Chef's kiss with the anticipation. 

All in all, this story has been great. I hope you keep going with it for as long as you can. Keep up the great story telling and amazing work!

Another great chapter. It's nice to see Miguel feeling better. Can't wait for part II!

It must have been a majestic sight when Sofia took a picture of the Lilliputian Lakes, and the little ones were watching her. The dynamic between the pair in this chapter is wonderful, Sofia is so cruel.

Amazing chapter, really showed just how crazy Sofia is becoming. 
Shes basically the personification of "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" 

Great chapter. Go Miguel. Can’t beat her physically, emotionally he got her 

Wow! There's a lot of depth to this chapter. So much going on!

I found it interesting how casual Tricia was when talking about the downsizers she has eaten. I don't think this, or demanding to taste Kamila, was a taunt by Tricia; she thinks Kamila understands that she's safe with the giantess, and also, as I mentioned above, Tricia doesn't really have anybody to talk to about what's truly on her mind. So Kamila gets to hear those thoughts, while Tricia dismisses the downsizer's concerns until they begin to eat at her.

I think that's what led to Tricia putting Kamila in that jar. To Tricia, putting Kamila in her mouth was no big deal; she even offered the tiny a sweet dessert afterward! Seeing how genuinely terrified Kamila was bothered her, and anger is the only outlet Tricia knows. That's why Tricia gradually worked her way up to making the issue about downsizers being spoiled. She used her prejudice to mask her hurt.

And when Kamila asked to go home, that rejection was too much for Tricia in that moment. That's why Kamila ended up in the jar, and that's why Tricia said that she thought Kamila was different. I don't even think she meant different from other downsizers; I think she meant different from all the people who have "rejected" her in her life, even if some of those, like Steve and Mateo, never actually did so. In Tricia's mind, them downsizing was a rejection.

Despite that harshness, Tricia's wordless apology was really sweet. Then when she said, "Don't be mad at me" my heart melted despite everything. As terrible as Tricia has been, I find myself feeling so bad for her. I also love that Tricia is learning Polish for Kamila, and that she understood Kamila's "Fucking hell" and only countered it with a "Don't be afraid" and a playful wiggle of her fingers was a really nice moment, one of the few times Tricia didn't let her anger get the better of her, which I think is significant in terms of how Tricia feels about Kamila.

But we see the real tragedy of Tricia's character in her last segment ending the chapter.

First, we see her infuriated over her jealousy of Beth and Mateo. Rather than being upset simply at them being a mixed-sized couple, however, her jealousy causes her to imagine what things would be like if she had stayed with Mateo after downsizing. This shows her cards and was pretty eye-opening for me. She wants what Beth and Mateo have.

Her first thought in imagining sticking with Mateo wasn't about how good he'd feel in her pussy or tormenting him for having the audacity to downsize when she didn't want him to, but it was about enjoying a heartfelt lunch with him. She thought about introducing him to her dad and how much he would enjoy her company.

Tricia clearly wants a real, loving mix-sized relationship.

But she won't admit that to herself. The way she was raised and the sizist opinions of her clique won't allow her to truly entertain the idea. And if you think about it, Tricia really has nobody as close to her as Beth is to Mateo in her life, so all of this pressure and societal brainwashing has cost her a chance at true happiness and left her miserable, much to the Steve's detriment.

Lin unwittingly offered her a loophole, though. Hearing Lin's explanation of her "relationship" with Brian opened up the possibility of such a relationship to Tricia. I don't think Tricia totally bought into Lin's belief that Beth was using Mateo the same way that Lin was using Brian, as Tricia paid attention to the couple and saw how happy the both were, but what Lin told her lined up with Tricia's beliefs more.

And that leads us to poor Kamila and that heartbreaking ending to the chapter. That first half of Tricia's conversation with the downsized nurse, to me, was her giving one last ditch effort to see if a real mix-sized relationship was possible. I think her soft, almost nervous approach was a clear sign of that. And while I know there was no way Kamila could say yes to that (and I'm certainly not victim-blaming here), but I can't help but wonder how this would have played out if the Polish woman would have agreed to be Tricia's girlfriend right away.

Would Tricia have still been so forceful in shoving Kamila inside her? Would Tricia have not raped her at all? Maybe they would have ended up snuggling instead, with Tricia trying to work Kamila up to the point of consent. Or perhaps things would have turned out exactly the same. It's really tough to say for sure.

That being said, I do Tricia would have handled things differently in that case. Because I feel like that flash of anger that she suppressed was her hope for that relationship that she wanted, the one matching Beth and Mateo's, died in that moment. Rather than listening to Kamila and understanding that, like most of Tricia's other problems, this was an issue of her own making, Tricia instead decided that Lin was right and that using a downsizer as a sex slave is the only way a mix-sized relationship can work. And we saw the results that came with her reaching that conclusion.

The worst part of all this, at least in my view, is that Tricia really does care deeply for Kamila. From preparing that lovely bath for Kamila as a silent apology for sticking her in that jar to Tricia wanting to rush home and comfort Kamila after hearing her story to trying to learn Polish to how nervous then angry Tricia got when asking Kamila out (in a roundabout way), it's clear that Tricia's feelings for Kamila run deep. But now she thinks that this is the only way forward for them and has fully embraced it. I could also see this turning out like Tricia's vore habit, with her doing it because of Lin's influence but becoming addicted to it of her own accord.

The real test for Tricia is how she feels about Kamila going forward (no, I haven't jumped off that redemption train for Tricia yet!). Kamila is likely going to start acting differently now, as it looks like this has traumatized her. Will Tricia notice this (I think she will), and, if so, will she feel regret/try to change the way she treats Kamila (this one I'm not so sure on, but I think we've seen some evidence to suspect that she might)?

I found the Sofia and Miguel stuff in this chapter pretty interesting as well.

As much as I hope Miguel's moving speech at the end of that segment gets through to Sofia, I'm not so sure that it will. It seemed like Sofia understood that she had taken things too far and started to take him seriously when he started that story (another one of those signs I keep blabbering about, I think), and I feel like Miguel's words will carry weight with her. The problem is that they don't address his cheating (obviously, neither of them know that it actually wasn't his fault) at all. I feel like having Sofia recall such a powerful memory might cause her to contrast it with what her husband "did" and make her even more upset, making her feel more justified to stay on the course she has currently set.

Again, I'd love it if this woke Sofia up, but I just don't see it. Of course, when Sofia inevitably learns about pheromones and what they do to downsizers, I could see her looking back on this conversation and Miguel's words hitting her differently.

As for the divorce, I'm curious to see how this plays out. Every time I read Sofia, I feel more and more confident that she's going to have that moment of realization and finally understand the gravity of everything that she's done. Because she really doesn't right now. Hell, it was noted in this chapter that she still doesn't understand the proper way to handle downsizers, let alone the psychological issues that come with being tiny in a giant world, something I believe is covered in that training that she still hasn't received yet. Just how temporary is that permit, anyway?

The big question in my mind now, however, is how Sofia will react once she makes that realization I mentioned above. Personally, I think she'll regret the way she treated the men in her life, even if she still strongly believes in her reasoning that led to that treatment (i.e. she'll still think she was right to try to separate Mateo from other humans but feel like shit once she realizes how much her "spankings" actually hurt him and how grueling the beads punishment really was for him, if that makes sense). She could go the other way, though, and bury her head in the sand. She could refuse to let Miguel leave her yet try to treat him nicer in an effort to win him back (it might be neat to see her try this and how far she gets before she finds herself going back to how she was before).

I could speculate on what's going to happen next here all day, but I've probably done too much of that already, so I'll just move on.

I love that Liam, even in the middle of getting pleasured by Sofia, still tried to make sure Miguel was cool with him fucking Sofia not once but twice! He's such a good dude, and I feel a little bad that I suspected him of shady shit in some of the earlier chapters. Yeah, he could stand to be a little less oblivious, but I can't fault him for assuming the best in people.

I feel bad for Luna. Sofia finally found a way to get to her, and Sofia might not even fully understand what that way is. Yes, Luna is sad that she's being cast aside as Sofia takes Liam on alone (I have a feeling Liam is going to be more vocal about getting Luna involved going forward, which will make it interesting to see how Sofia reacts to that), but there's more bothering her than that. Luna feels terrible that Sofia hates her. It turns out the worst thing Sofia could do to get revenge on Luna was just be honest about her feelings about the downsized girl. I found it adorable that Luna cared that much about Sofia's opinion of her and that Luna blames herself for how Sofia views her (I mean, she's not wrong, either).

I don't know if we'll ever get there, but I'm pulling for a nice, healthy four-way relationship to come out of this eventually. Liam is already starting to be that voice that Miguel used to be to rein Sofia's hot feelings in, and both Luna and Liam want to fuck everybody. And despite everything, I think Sofia and Luna still love each other. Oddly enough, I think the biggest obstacle to this outcome isn't the Latino couple's rocky marriage but Miguel's aversion to Liam's cock!

I could just be pipe-dreaming it, but I've always been a happy endings guy, and this seems like the best outcome to me!

I also love that, throughout this dark, dramatic chapter, you managed to sneak in a little bit of Mateo and Beth goodness. I really appreciated that!

My heart melted when Haze hugged Beth. Beth finally has friends! I like how she tried to play it off, but we got to see just how moving this was for her.

Also, I love Hazel! She didn't do much in the chapter, but I just wanted to get that out there.

Lastly, that "I'm gonna wear my socks even harder" line got me! I loved the banter between Mateo and Beth there as a whole, but that line was so fucking funny! Emma going around stealing the bigs' food was a hilarious visual as well!

Thanks for another great chapter! See you at the next one!

@ jfgts2022 Jesus Christ I would hatif they became Tricia's slaves,if anything I hope Tricia shrinks and gets placed in Beth's custody.

Because I know despite everything Beth probably won't kill her so it would make a Very  interesting dyanmic(Especially if what she does to Camila and her dad get's uncovered) 

Beth would hate her very being but wouldn't kill or even maim or torture her but could still hold her life in her hands and excercise control over every facet of her pathetic worthless life. 

Beth would be in the position to excercise her contorl over Tricia, being the better person that holds dominion over her entire little existance,while fighting the urge not the snuff it out like a tiny glimmering flame on a candle...

Man I would read the shit out of that.