Reviewer: rghud945 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2024 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

It's been a while and I’m really glad to see the story keeps going!

Actually, I find it is quite funny that in Chapter 5 the girl managed to precisely crushed the lower half of that guy despite their extreme size difference, just remind me of the phrase “Fuck this guy in particular”.

The latest chapter is action-packed and I absolutely love it. The destruction scenes are simply top-notch and some of the best I have ever seen!

There is another sudden transition at the end, similar to Chapter 4 where the Lillis passengers somehow got teleported and leading up to the unaware scene. Is the cause behind all these incidents ever going to be revealed? I think the story is already very enjoyable but I just want to know it out of curiosity. Now that Ava has had her fun and it seems the suffering of Lilliputians is close to its conclusion, or maybe it is just the start of something even bigger?

Reviewer: Socalspeck Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2024 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love lilli-brobi interaction, love micro stories. The smaller the better! 

Author's Response:

Glad you like it! 

Reviewer: klinza Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04 2024 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4

He says he doesn't want to be in the same building as Jake for obvious reasons, he is super tired of having to take shit for spammers, he is also getting wound up with the nose piercing gang loosing on purpose when he is around and throwing fights they should win on purpose. Just so everyone has to sit though another trip to the toilets. Let's be real the guys made a mess in traffic and assault and the girls slammed everyone's brakes to pick them up you can't put a halo back from trafficking women in women's month... At that point you just have... zero honour...  Now they are all trying to fix the room. God knows why the girls would want this site to continue it's like a broken dominoes table

Now that you broke into his account phone etc and added a h that does not make sense.... What do you want to say to him? Your limited knowledge of church related violence in history is... impressive. Your either too hyped, rich, drunk, high or English to care

He has been exposed to lesbian content for ages... you split Luke's head open before so again... It's high school related... Clearly there was a god given reason to skip prom.. comically it was a Catholic school cultists spawned from. (Good job Mr Ryan teaching teens there's no god, good job Mr Jackson with segregation class and can I say nigger if I'm white, I want to lynch Jonny for fighting Mr simms for water in a heat wave he really did want to incinerate himself after giving everything from a wheelchair like Jude law In gattaca after that, because he's had the shit born gene chip from that school ever since he wanted to take a rocket out of there to the blackness of space were playing chicken and jHonny won't stop swimming I'm getting kinda worried that guy might die, can we skip the wall clock forward Mr Ryan we are all fish so it doesn't matter so we can leave to a livable life yeah oh god 3 pages of there's no god kill Mrs Lawrence already showed him the other side.  Nah Mr maggot he didn't make your french teacher cry OK THEN he won't stop saying it he got predicted an f in french so he quit trying try the big white boy forcing her to suck his cock, and laughing at her tears he gets a free pass don't worry the nigger will take the wrap he will learn to rap better In jail, by the time he's out the world will have lynched itself crying shame he was really starting to like Europe why did the graphics teacher spend 90% of his time with the girls, he's half depressed now he don't want to go skating HN, fuck maybe we need to teach him about eye contact, no he don't have to come to school when he's already boycotting the busses with Rosa, park it a sec are you kidding me they sketched a cock and the art teacher thinks it's him now he has to stay back and talk to her about hormones the most emotionally strangled boy in the school. The head teacher running around JoHnny's got detention I thought that bridge had more suspension, off steads here jHonny so what anything to say get him to the next part of his life asap can't believe that teacher for media was on plenty of fish can't imagine the humiliation of teaching the class full suicidal but he doesn't know that word yet emotionally stunted no emotional stunts)  As you are writing your own stalker diary right now publicly and brazenly... what is it you want out of this honestly. Never seen the bear trap trespassing on others property? He does not know anyone in their early twenties who should be writing a public stalker diary about him. Who the fuckkk are you and why are you obsessed with ruining his half life? While it's still radio active 

Let's just fast forward to the teeth in the issue the bit that made everyone grab a tissue. Let's see if he's got the message alright but your still looking for a fight now your on my account with my name shouting out for the whole world to hear. What is the message now because it's getting obscure. Not to mention repetitive and convictible.  

Reviewer: rghud945 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2024 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very nice! Clear and solid worldbuilding in just a few paragraphs then straight to action, with vivid descriptions of the massive size of giantess and the impacts of each of her subtle movements. Most importantly, the personality of Ava seems  very likeable from a reader’s perspective: confident and mischievous, which could usually lead to some intriguing scenes as she interacting with the tinies, if you know what I mean, haha!

Definitely look forward to seeing how the story goes!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Ava is a fun character to write, even when seen from other perspectives. Will definitely be more interaction going forward. 

Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 22 2024 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Story immediately caught my interest with this premise. I LOVE to see Swiftverse tales (Gulliver's Travels) and this one has all the makings of an excellent one.

Your use of descriptive language to paint the scene of what was happening was on point. I love you using the POV of the tiny people to get a sense, not just of scale but the devastation being wrought, and I hope to see that continue as the story progresses.And the worldbuilding introduction to set things up had just enough detail to let you know what was going on.

Also, double plus on having an auburn giantess instead of a blond one! XD

All in all, a solid start and I can't wait to see how Ava's journey in this small new world will progress. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words! Glad you liked the story so far. 

I am also looking forward to telling more of Ava's adventures in Lilliput. And will make sure to label as Swiftverse going forward (although I kind of think Gulliverse rolls off the tongue as well :-))