Date: April 25 2024 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Part 2
This is an amazing story and I hope you can continue it
[Report This]Date: March 12 2024 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another amazing chapter here.
Again you're writing the dialogue so 'real' and so realistic along with the interaction, this feels like real people and not just empty fetish-puppets.
Tom's anger, his sadness, his helplessness again is coming across so well here.
And the fact that despite him trying to explain, no one will believe him. Reality itself has been re-written and no one else (so far at least) remembers.
Imagine if you woke up a different ethnicity, or living in a different country, and told people around you, who had no memory/understanding, you would seem crazy or delusional.
And Tom is being honest. But to everyone else around him, they have no memory of this.
It would be infuriating, especially since he was once a big/masucline figure, and now reduced to a doll.
Unable to even pleasure his wife (whoever that may be in each shift) unable to even do day to day things.
Him breaking down and angrily/crying in this chapter was an inevitability, and Jess didn't help.
(but again, imagine her husband just telling her he was a full sized man and getting angry at her for not believing him)
Her playful/sexy teasing was great to read, but also when she genuinely was concerned when he got upset.
(only to of course turned to annoyance/anger when he kept up the pretense, at least to her, of his 'fantasy')
I also love the blowjob scene, and her telling him to hit her and her teasing about 'go easy on me' XD She was really playing up the fantasy she thought he wanted. And you wrote the detailed scene really well.
(Also the scene where he wasn't able to even register to her feeling, until touching her clit)
I wonder, is reality shifting around him, or is Tom being catapulted through realities.
Is his world changing, or is he winding up in Other-Tom's worlds whenever these shifts happen.
Imagine a 4 inch tiny Tom waking up full sized and married to Jane, (or Jess) and trying to tell them he was tiny yesterday.
Is Tom the 'only' Tom to go through this. (and I'm not expecting an answer as that would no doubt spoil things if it were the case XD
I know it might not fit certain scenes/themes, but I couldn't stop imagining Tom being pushed so far, he just jumped onto Jane, kissing her/crawling around her and almost manically yelling that he's 'her husband' only for Jess-World Jane to be freaking out like "Tom what the hell are you doing! Your Jess's husband! Hey! Get out of there you little-Tom!"
Sorry for going on some tangents there.
Really enjoying the interactions and characters here, and you're doing a great job making every chapter a fleshed out (and sexy) read.
Author's Response:
Hi Vegetaboy.
Wow, thank you for the awesome feedback, this story has already surpassed my expectations in terms of views and rating. I'm just glad a few people enjoy my story. So, thank you. More to come soon 😊
[Report This]Date: March 10 2024 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
The reality shifts that happen are interesting. I don’t think I have seen that in a GTS story. I look forward to future chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2024 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I would love to see him end up in one of their butts at some point. Maybe he isn't too small for that
[Report This]Date: February 23 2024 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really liking this so far, and for your first time writing here this is great
[Report This]Date: February 20 2024 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Part 2
The best part was when Jess asked Tom to yell and scream in protest. She wants to dominate him utterly.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2024 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Part 2
It's so difficult to write a good ending. Waking up next to Jess would have made a perfect ending for this story. But, there's more? Bring it on! Love it.
Author's Response:
Hello gtsfan2001! Thank you very much. I have plenty more to come!
Date: February 19 2024 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
As Someone with an imagination that can bring words to life, it is not hard to picture and make this story come to life and plausible. I become more and more interested with Tom, his perspective on what is normal to everyone else and what he remembers his life to be, if he can get to his old life... Does he want his old life back?
I love the descriptions and how you have taken the time to describe and make us feel what Tom is feeling, the Scents and Sensations… The Care and thoughtfulness to describe every feeling, the intense burning of wanting to give in your desire but ignore his Fight or Flight response.
Jane uses Tom as a weapon against himself. The Emasculation, Humiliation and downplay of his feelings. She chose him purely based on the how much control she could have, (from the way she locked him out the room, to making him understand that the Dildo served her better, although he truly loves her and would attempt to give her anything.
Although Jess may have hidden feelings for Tom, she still uses his size against him to have her way. Which would make Tom (although scared in the beginning) more than willing to shed the Emasculation and to prove his strength and Desire, although being tall enough to walk through the heels (adds to the seductiveness of the story, as heels are quite a head turner in general... Well done 😊)
Keep writing, and Im sure we will keep reading.. 😉
Author's Response:
Hello FauxLily, thank you for taking the time to read and review. You hit the nail on the head with Jess especially, but there may be some bombshells! Still alot of writing to go! 😁
[Report This]Date: February 19 2024 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Part 1
Really enjoying this story, and for a first time posting it's great!
The premise here is very interesting, especially since (for now) Tom is the only person who remembers his old life.
The dynamics on display here really hooked me, Jane and Jess both.
As was commented on by another reviewer, the dialogue here feels plausible and real.
And you incorporating more descriptions of the size differences and scale as well as Tom's interaction with such things (fingers, hands, shoes, etc) and the scents/sensations of everything is a great way to get across his predicament, physically and emotionally.
Loved the walking under the heel section (as someone who loves foot/shoe content in size content, that was great)
I also really loved the entire scene of him discovering her dildo and the fact she has to constantly get herself off due to his inability.
The entire scene was crafted so well, how you handled him being curious and climbing up only to discover the truth, the dialogue that followed with Jane and then the cold reality (and well written scene) of him being locked out of the room (It was so easy to visualize it taking place)
And the emasculation effect, Tom's inability even with all his strength/desire/wishfullness, isn't enough to satisfy his wife with his entire body, a single finger from her could no doubt do more.
That scene was just great as was the end section with Jess.
I am hooked on this story now and can't wait to see how this plays out (also agreeing again with the other reviewer, the gaslighting and uncertainty over what is real/what is happening I think adds a layer of intrigue here)
Is Tom dreaming? Was the previous 'life' he had a dream? Will this last? Will Tom begin waking up normal sized and no one remembers him tiny only to wake up again small?
So many questions, and I'm excited to see what happens. (This also has inspired an idea I may write out in future with the idea of someone waking up small and their family not realizing) so I thank you for that.
Author's Response:
Hi Vegetaboy, thank you so much, I read this review with a smile on my face. I appreciate the kind words. I will be posting more soon!
Good luck writing that story. The premise sounds great, I can't wait to read it😀
Thanks for the feedback once again, glad to know I'm doing some things right.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2024 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow so far a great story dude keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Hey J-Vader, thanks for the great feedback, more chapters coming soon.
[Report This]Date: February 18 2024 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
First off, this is wonderfully juicy, and I'm not just saying that because I have a sister-in-law whose panties I want to crawl into. I think keeping Tom and the reader in the dark about whether he's dreaming, being gaslit by his wife and her sister, or really has long-term memory problems has been effective in keeping him off-balance.
I think you have a real talent for plausible dialogue, and I want to know more about all of these characters. One suggestion I would make is to spend some time on physical descriptions of the characters and how big they seem to Tom, how powerful and overwhelming their fingers and other extremities are. Make us inhabit his helplessness.
This is excellent for a first-ever story.
Author's Response:
Hi Olo, thank you so much, I appreciate the feedback and will definitely try and put more effort into describing their size and Tom's helplessness. 😎