[Report This]Date: August 22 2024 8:48 PM Title: Checking Out
Stupidly amazing just like all you work! Please keep up this amazing work.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2024 6:45 AM Title: Checking Out
This honestly is one of my most favourite ones I have read so far. The bath scene with Victoria like a sea monster extending on forever in the vast abyss of the bath ocean and the main character trying to swim away and her and devouring him from beneath the waves was so good!!
On the other hand, it is cool to see a cameo appearance sort of with Hannah on video call. However, I must say that seeing her taunt the main character with her eating the tiny people in her cereal when her sister isn’t looking is a bit alarming as it shows she has transformed into a full-blown sadist which in my opinion is even worse than Tanja.
The guy who helped the main character try to escape was very nice for someone who was a complete stranger. I wonder what his motivation was for helping him?
On a final note, after publishing and writing my own vore and graphic digestion scenes, it remains in my opinion one of the hardest macro interactions to write. Kudos to you for being able to do it so well and with second-person perspective nevertheless.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your lovely review and the five stars! It always makes my day to read these. Yeah, I had been meaning to write a bathtub vore scene for a while now and this one offered itself up to the scenario. It's a bit of a hommage to 'Bathtime Treats' by girlfood/Marius-the-Mage, one of my favourite vore stories ever.
Hannah is undergoing a bit of a transformation indeed. I would almost say she "tasted blood" if she wouldn't prefer to swallow her shrinkies whole ;) But there definitely are some parallels between her and Tanja in that regard, even though they have diametrically opposed personalities otherwise.
I totally agree with you on the writing of graphic vore and digestion scenes. It does feel kind of repetitive and like I've written it all before to me as well. But the readers don't seem to mind. And I guess it's just the nature of these kinds of stories, there's only so much variation you can manage to achieve in describing the process!