Reviewer: Onche Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2024 5:57 PM Title: Bath Time

Awesome story so far !
I really liked the powerplay between Jennifer and Natalie !
And the powers Jennifer offer so many possibilities for really big and really small scenarios !
I hope this story get continued soon, I'm eager to know more about our girls !

Reviewer: Glaazius Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2024 8:27 PM Title: Their Appearances

I'm really enjoying this story!
The setup is great and there are so many directions you could take it from here.
You could turn it into an intimate romantic tale where the girls use their powers to explore each other, or you could delve into what happens when one of them becomes corrupted by their abilities and starts manipulating the world around them.
It would be so frightful to live in such a world, knowing that a single woman holds so much power in the palm of her hand.
She can do so much already, and her powers are still evolving.
Freakin terrifying...

Reviewer: DcZ Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2024 4:45 AM Title: Unfathomable Power

Thanks for the chapte! Well they can certainly try a lot with this. 

Wonder if actual material are increased, take a nugget of gold, grow it to 100 or more scale, chips off a bit and dee if it is still the same amount of gold. Do it with the right things and that practically infinite money for a average living. 

Plus, if its seems to be magical, why not some metaphysical bit of concept(could totally just not work period), balance of coin say, shrink is imbalance/instability snd grow it balance. Could do a lot with that, IF it works, and probably doesn’t.

Fun and sexy times nonetheless!

Author's Response:

Hey! Thanks for the reviews, I really appreciate the feedback.

I am actually making up the story as I write it. I only have a few vague ideas of where I want it to go before I start writing a chapter so things could go anywhere! That also means that I could maybe end up incorporating any fun and creative suggestions like yours (:

Can’t wait to see where next chapter goes, since it is nearly as much of a mystery to me as to anyone else lol