Reviews For Dark desires
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Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2009 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Okay, Weary Traveller, I take your point, but the dress code for moslems had long been abandoned because of the change in human relations. Besides, it's all fantasy and not to be taken literally.  Poetic license and all that.

Author's Response:

banfield why are you wasting your time with minor details futures are not  yet written mans reactions not yet known beliefs will change our world has yet to be created let time dictate its direction not the words of others.

Amanda. 

Reviewer: Weary_Traveler Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2009 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Not bad, I like the premise. The whole "Moslems" thing was a bit wierd to throw in there. You do realize the white robes they wear are to deal with the heat?

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2009 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

 Amanda, I was surprised to see 'our' yarn on site so soon!  Are we going to do a further chapter together?

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