Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2024 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying the story so far.   But I would like to point out that there are a lot of repetitive phrases used over and over again such as

"I'm just getting started" or "We're just getting started" , etc.

Just be aware that you should try to think of other ways to express these sorts of repetitive sentiments.