Date: February 08 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 5
Rats! I was sure this chapter would show the Johnsons being overwhelmed and teleported to Sizeloa! Well; maybe in the next sequel.
Date: February 08 2010 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
So, let me get this straight. Mega-world is a parallel-Earth where the giant inhabitants consider anyone taller than themselves _abnormal?_
Hence, the slang term "Norm" that they've adopted with such perverse pride? A brilliantly intricate cosmology you've created, here.
Date: February 08 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
You know, for some reason, I picture Stanley Charm as one of those sidewalk vendors they used to call "pitch-men," back in the Edwardian Age. With a purple vest (occasionally worn beneath a light-weight blazer); bow tie; and a round-brimmed straw hat or "skimmer."
Date: February 08 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
A very, very interesting sequel, so far.
Kind of similar in theme to that pastiche of the Ah-nuld movie "Recall," over @ Giantess City. Except, of course, for the setting being on a parallel-Earth, rather than an alternate-future Mars!
Now, I'm off to the next chapter, to see if the Masterchemii rescue the Johnsons, and bring them to Sizeloa.
Date: December 11 2009 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
I feel sorry for Brandon. All he wants is to to be with his wife but with all the trubble that seems to be following them its not ease for him. His wife Rachel is a gts goddess and can't die but its still dangerous for him, i think they need put the rule on hold and make him a god so he cam be with his wife and not worrying about being killed.
They make men sound so bad, but not all men are bad. Most of the killing that goes on is done by women and not by men.