Reviewer: web100 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2024 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting story. 

But is this a first-person story? It’s not look so. Usually in first-person story main character described as “I” not “You”.

Also, most of the dialogues are presented in the form of a retelling of the content, which spoils the impression of the story.

Author's Response:

I wasn't thinking 1st person but more so narrated to so I said your point of view not knowing what to call this style. This story was an experimentn in approach kind of how very old RPGs or table DMs would narrate.