[Report This]Date: January 04 2024 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 3: Panty TF (Contains heavy female and Male)
Mixed feelings about this story.
First, grammatically you have to separate paragraphs properly. It's hard to follow along as you mix individual comments among other individual comments. Who is saying what?
Secondly, the overall concept it great, truly terrific. That said you seem to ignore the fact Cassandra never asked John about her assistant bad mouthing her. Wasn't that the entire point of becoming her shoe flat?
Third, love that John was almost picked up by the hot blonde; though kinda grossed out that he was full of the older woman's boyfriend's cum {YUCK!}.
You have a great story line going on. I just have to wonder who your intended audience is? Is it female dominance and revenge? Is it female feet? Is it some guy's cum? Is it all possibilities? The best meals have just a few ingredients that savor the meal rather than over spice it, sometimes so too do the the best stories.