Date: February 14 2025 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow love this, again! (Binging on your content btw, you're one of those rare creators who's almost every story is a banger)
This story has such great potential and setup to be taken broader into other scenarios, more students, future events... in my opinion should definitely be continued.
I think the devil thing was bit too much for my taste, I'd keep it mysterious and a low cook personally. But that's just me, the buildup was great.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2025 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow, I like how confident, powerful and mysterious she is! Not only am I curious about how the main character will shrink, but also what she plans on doing with him.
Also, is the main character Bobby or Robby? I see both names quite often.
The shoe worship scene was nice from “Robby’s” perspective. I would have stayed and ask so many questions.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey, thx for the kind words!
Ha! Bobby is a typo. It needs to be Robby
Thx for pointing that out!
I'm afraid this is all I have written of this story as this one received any barely votes to continue it. :(
[Report This]Date: December 30 2023 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more of this fantastic, and very well written story.
Will Robby get to be "punished" by Miss Lacey; or is his penance
not to be shrunken by her while others, less deserving, are?
Is there a follow up on Kennedy's condition and that of his two shrunken friends?
Hopefully the next chapter is coming soon.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late reply.
I sometimes miss it.
Thx for the compliments!
Anyway, here is another chapter.
Unfortunately, its the last chapter I've wrote of this story.