Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2023 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like the idea for the story quite a bit - the foreigner getting unawarely tricked and shrunken by the cute and exotic Japanes girl had a lot of erotic appeal to it.

On my nitpicking side - A few small errors/mis-spellings (I think you want masticated, not emaciated, in the next to last paragraph), but not too bad on that front. Also, a bit of an exaggeration on some of the descriptions (at a centimeter tall, the bowl wouldn’t seem like a city block, but rather like a large building to the shrinky.

Still, pretty good.