[Report This]Date: February 14 2024 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 3 - All for What?
That was so cool! I loved the battle between Maggie and the navy ships with her simultaneously using her upper body and legs to kick and crush the ships while treading water, she must be far from shore for the water to be that deep.
It is good that you showed her gradually getting injured by the frequent weapon fire since it shows that while she is colossal she is not invincible.
I liked how she returned back to normal size and reduced her status to the same level of inferiority as the people she killed earlier. Seeing the blood guts and carnage close up is what I think caused her to feel guilt as she didn't really understand the full gravity of what she did when she was titanic.
Also describing the feeling of bodies popping under her bare feet was the icing on the cake...
Author's Response:
Thank you LittleBigPlanet! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter specifically. Yeah, she would have to be pretty far out in the water. I don't know the exact math of how far she could swim, but I tried to make it entertaining at least.
Yeah, I didn't want an invincible giantess, honestly, a couple more successful hits from the missiles and she probably would have died in my mind, but of course, I have to write the ending I planned.
Thank you for your support and reviews on this story, I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2024 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Loose Leash
I have a lot to catch up on this story but I like the way you have made Maggie's character as an enraged heartbroken person who wants revenge for her own misery rather than a purely sadistic giantess.
Her completely disregarding everyone else's well-being, hating society, and hunting down the 3 police officers throughout the city in a thirst for revenge gave off massive Joker vibes 🤡. After all, she has nothing left to lose since she thinks Gracie is dead and hates society since she thinks they are partly responsible for Gracie's death. At least she spared Zach for giving Gracie a treat, though, his kindness probably saved his life kind of like Gary in The Joker.
Her destroying the sports stadium really shows how irrational someone's actions can be when they are completely consumed by hatred, anger, and revenge. Nice to see her start to regret her actions once she comes to her senses. Although given how many people she killed I think it's too late for that now....
Author's Response:
Take your time! Yeah, I at least wanted to give Maggie a motive, having the only thing she cares about in the world gone. It is a violent rampage story, but only kind of in my opinion. Her disregard for everyone else and hating society is purely because she valued her dogs life over everything around her which does happen with some people in the real world so I just wanted to show that. I didn't even think of Joker when I wrote this, but I could see it. Yeah, the cops are just her scapegoat. I don't know who Gary is, but now I should probably look that up.
Yeah, she's still a person at the end of the day, intelligent or not, she started to question her choices and her humanity came out a little bit. Her emotions are complex but blinded by losing her one thing...
Date: February 03 2024 7:04 AM Title: Epilogue
I really liked this epilogue chapter. It's a neat kind of aftermath thing we don't ever really see in these types of stories and I feel it's pretty close to reality. It was a dynamic look into the actual world Maggie was destroying and how they dealt with what she left behind.
Very much also enjoyed getting to see you write at a smaller size and hope to see it again sometime in the future.
Also, might only be me, but it's kind of refreshing to actually see for once comeuppance befall a giantess who engaged in mindless wanton murder and indiscriminate slaughter. Kind of ties everything together. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I actually almost didn't add an epilogue chapter, it was a super last minute idea I had and I'm glad I did because it really became my favorite part of writing this whole story. It's how I think something like this type of disaster would be remembered in real life, or as close to possible as it could be, I suppose.
I will continue to write shorter stories here and there. I have tons and tons of ideas that I need to get out of my head and I hope to keep sharing them with everyone. Glad you liked how it ended!
Date: February 02 2024 12:27 AM Title: Epilogue
This is such an interesting idea and very good story telling. Probably the first ever giantess story I have no intention on fapping to (due to the violence, blood and gorwe) but still keep on reading! Never thought that would be possible!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you were able to continue reading despite the violence. I appreciate your support!
[Report This]Date: February 01 2024 8:13 AM Title: Epilogue
Relatively short and not-so-sweet, but another good one to add to your library nonetheless.
I think maybe one of your biggest strengths as a writer is how "realistic" and believable you write your stories, from how your characters act and think to the way that the world would react to something like this. At least as much as it can be done in stories of this nature. The series of emotions and thoughts going through Maggie's head, the various survivors' accounts of the disaster, the mother defending her character, the people seeking to profit from turning it into an inaccurate movie and the ones selling merchandise, the attitudes of the students that were more interested in lunch than this world-changing historical event. All the stuff like this really brings it all together and makes it stand above the rest to me (this comment applies to the Incident stories, too). Really well done. The main chapters were good, don't get me wrong, but I may have enjoyed the epilogue the most.
I enjoyed the little surprise at the end. And I liked the bit with Zach's theory on why it all happened. I'm not sure if it was intentional but personally his answer is enough to satisfy my headcanon regarding the same topic in this story as well as your others.
The "playful-and-destructive untouchable goddess who is actually a regular person" theme that I consider to be kind of a signature thing of yours is the best genre there is (my opinion of course, lol), but it's nice to see you venture into other territory while still maintaining the writing quality you're known for.
While maybe I'm in the minority when I say that her size in relation to the rest of the world is actually "too small" for my tastes, haha, you continue again to keep me drawn to the stories you're creating. Real good job, my guy 👍
Author's Response:
Short and not so sweet is right lol
Thank you so much for saying that. One of my biggest goals when I'm writing is that I want at least some relevancy to my characters or the world having an element of being realistic. Or rather, as realistic you can have in this type of fantasy. I want to write how I think someone would actually react. That's why writing this ending was one of my favorite things because I think this is how a "disaster" like this would actually be remembered, much like in the real world.
Yeah, Zach's take on it largely represents my own thought of "shit happens" and that's just how it is.
My favorite type of character to write is that regular person gets a bunch of power. I would really hope it would kind of end up as my signature in a way, but I know so many other writers who are doing it well too! I appreciate the faith in me to keep it up.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2024 5:23 AM Title: Epilogue
Just finished this tonight. Boy, what a fun read this was. Did not expect the ending! Well done, my friend. And the violence was *chefs kiss* You should write more short stories like this when you're taking breaks from your big epics.
Author's Response:
Thank you carnage! I'm a big fan of your writing so I always love when you approve of my violence. I was really hoping this ending would do well, ending stories is the hardest thing I've had to do when writing.
[Report This]Date: February 01 2024 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
I don't expect this ending that was amazing thank you for that story. Can't wait to read an anorther masterpiece from you
Author's Response:
You're welcome and thank you for the praise! I was really hoping this ending would be at least an interesting one for people.
Date: February 01 2024 1:46 AM Title: Epilogue
hooray, I really liked how things ended in a fatal way for Meggie since you did justice with her dying in the end, and I don't feel any sympathy for her, I say the damn thing. She deserved it and I loved the tragic ending she had after meeting her dog, since it would be an injustice if she had escaped after everything she did, thank goodness it didn't happen like that,Her mistake was leaving that soldier who betrayed her alive. Well, they should thank him and give him an award because he did what needed to be done, so that the long-awaited justice and death for Maggie I fell on her hehe yesss very good
Author's Response:
Hooray indeed. I don't think anyone should feel sympathy for her. This was my plan before I even wrote the story. Thank you for enjoying it!
Date: January 18 2024 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Loose Leash
I wouldn't mind if Maggie got to die since she more than deserves it and it would be interesting if it is one of the few giantess stories where the giantess is punished and has a Sad and tragic bad ending, rarely happens
Date: January 18 2024 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
Among this Type of Stories you would be able to make a story of a Giantess of a little girl of no more than three or four years old, in this story due to an accident the little girl grows up to Reaching gigantic proportions, first two meters, then 25 feet, then 55 feet and finally 112 feet tall, it should be noted that another side effect is that the girl is out of her mind, and in her Fun and children's games cause chaos and destruction, not to mention that it also opens up a lot of vore when the Giant girl eats people whether on purpose or unconsciously, think about this Story How a dark version of affection enlarges the child, only it would be a girl and opens death and destruction PS if I ask for this Story it would be as a request and I repeat not as a commission
Date: January 17 2024 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Loose Leash
Love it really not an usual giantess story but the idea is amazing
Author's Response:
Thank you, I tried to be a little different with this story, as much as I could...
[Report This]Date: January 05 2024 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
I have always loved the relationship between a girl and her dog in a very close sense and the relationship portrayed between Maggie and Gracie perfectly encompasses that. I have legit some girls treat their dogs in the exact same way they would with their own human child like a parent so kudos for the creative title 'The Dog Mom'. 😄
As for Maggie not giving a shit and killing multiple innocent people in her mad scramble to find Gracie I completely agree with Zaximus that there are some people who would value the lives of their own pet over multiple human strangers. Not that there is anything wrong with that but here is portrayed in the most extreme way imaginable.
As for the end, I hope Gracie isn't actually dead otherwise the entire city is completely fucked. Never get between a girl and her precious dog...….😖
Author's Response:
I'm glad you see that their relationship perfectly encompasses that type of love. Exactly, I've seen people treat their dogs almost better than their children lol. This is what I would think would happen if a young woman like that was put into this scenario, nothing else matters expect finding and being with her baby.
All these people she is crushing are completely dehumanized to her, ironically... This is portrayed in the most extreme way possible on purpose because I would "hope" that someone wouldn't actually act like this for real, but I wouldn't put it totally behind based on some people I have met before.
Definitely not gonna give anything away tho! New chapter is coming soon!
Date: January 04 2024 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
I don't want to drag my feet on these reviews anymore so let's get down to brass tacks. I'm very interested in this story and it's progress. You are an amazingly talented writer with very great descriptive prowess. A classic giantess rampage tale from you is a great way to start the new year.
Maggie's character is very interesting at this point in the story. Personally I feel she embodies all the worst traits of people with pets or who love animals, in the aspect of caring about animals more than or at the expense of the lives of their fellow man. It's certainly an interesting trait, one I think works well to differentiate her from other giantess characters, both of your own and other works.
Now personally I would love to see her take her shoes and socks off and stomp around barefoot buuuuut whether that is in the cards or not will wait to be seen! I don't wish to influence your story with my wants. ;P
As for now, an intriguing premise one I'm excited to see the direction you take with. Your stories are always a delight. X)
Author's Response:
Please! I encourage reviews and I really appreciate you taking the time to drop one off here. I think you might have given me another review or two in the past so I'm happy you stopped back to check this out.
Thank you for the kind words!
So, to your point, exactly. Maggie is embodies all the worst traits which is funny because I love animals myself, but in this aspect, the care of her own animal verses the lack of care for other people and theirs is what I wanted to get across. Maggie is selfish and I think it gives her a reason to squish a bunch of people as we see the only thing that matters to her.
As far as her taking her shoes and socks off, let's just see what happens.
[Report This]Date: January 03 2024 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
Masterfully done. The sheer carelessness of her towards the tiny people is just amazing and so well written. Different scale than I'm used to from you, but you do it so well. Keep it up, cant wait for more. Also, is it just me, or is the gore factor ramped up in this story? Either way, I freaking love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Good to hear from you. The carelessness is hard to nail for me, and exactly, at a size I'm not particularly used to writing. The gore factor is definitely amped up and will only get more violent. Which I know is not for everyone, but hey...
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
This is a fun concept. I like the idea of a giantess not being cruel per se, just single minded on something unrelated to the people beneath her.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, she's definitely uncaring of the world around her, it's a difficult mentality to write about in a way.
Date: December 27 2023 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
Man, what a creative idea for a giantess to go on a rampage. I love it when giantesses cause destruction but it's not out of maliciousness or unawareness, just uncaring
You're also a fantastic writer, you get really detailed with your writing without just bringing the pacing to a halt. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Exactly, I really wanted to go for the uncaring approach with this one. Thank you for the compliment! I want to balance detail and action as much as possible so that means a lot.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Let's Go for a Walk
Nice, a new story even if the start is weird lol but i trust you it's gonna be an incredible story, has always.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope it's not too weird though lol.