Date: October 29 2024 8:15 PM Title: Unintended Consequences
Amazing - so glad you returned with a new update!
I'm glad Kerry is getting her just deserts after all the trouble she cause Sam and Nate. "There's one person [Kerry] I'm glad isn't doing hypnosis." Foreshadowing?
I'm glad Sam (and fam) is back in the picture. Interested to see how much taller than her brother Taylor will become. If she starts on hypnosis, she might even outgrow her sister!
Looking forward to seeing the effect of the new hypnosis on Nate (shrinking) and Hannah (puberty).
Thank you for writing this story - keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's good to be back!
I'm glad you're interested in the future developments. This chapter and the last one wrapped up a bunch of stuff, so I had to bring in new plot threads for the story going forward. Things will definitely progress quickly from here.
Of course, I can't spoil any of it, but big things are coming for several characters (pun intended).
Date: October 11 2024 5:11 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
A very nice entry. Congrats on getting over the hump!
My thoughts
1. Kerry is being humbled, hopefully she has a light at the end of the tunnel
2. I feel like Sam got off easy.
3. Jess got some much needed characterization and development. Going forward I feel like there's going to be a moment where she dwarfs Nate and is going to need to really fight the urge to push him aside out of jealousy.
4. Interesting choice to have Nate go for cunnilingus instead of using his inserting himself.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
1. I'm not sure where Kerry will end up once the story's over, but I do have some fun stuff planned. She's definitely learning from her recent experiences, but the answer she comes up with remains to be seen.
2. Hannah agrees with you, lol. I never really saw her as needing punishment, per se. But I understand the sentiment.
3. I'm glad that part came across well. Her and Nate still have a ways to go (as long as I can hold back the urge to just write everyone getting along, lol).
4. From his point of view, that day was about Hannah's pleasure first, and working things out so Jess could participate too. For me, it means I could save full penetration for a later scene.
Date: June 09 2024 1:21 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
I am sure you’re super busy but this story is sooo good! I was checking in to see a rough estimate of when the next chapter might drop. Hoping soon, love this story !!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Sadly, the next chapter won't be ready for a while yet, and I don't know how much longer it will take.
That said, I do have a side story that I've been working on. I should be able to post the first part of that soon.
Date: May 27 2024 6:12 PM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
I hope he doesn't get too small, because then the growth of other characters loses its meaning, that is, why would a 10-year-old girl become big and muscular if any 10-year-old girl can dominate the main character. And I also want to see more boobs, otherwise the story is a masterpiece, I'm waiting for it to continue. Sorry im very bad speak english and use google translate
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I'm sorry the reply is so late.
There will be more boobs in the future, so I hope you look forward to it.
I have a lot of ideas for Nate and the girls. I will work hard to make the growth meaningful!
Date: May 14 2024 6:50 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Absolutely love the story, one of my all time favourites already!
As for ideas: Maybe Hannah isn't satisfied that her breasts aren't growing fast enough, so she and Jess finds some kind of remedy to speed things up? Thus adding a kind of chemical/non-magic element to the story? This being kept discreetly hidden from the reader of course, but hinted at through clever writing, like you have been really good at so far!
No idea if that is a direction you've thought about exploring, but plot twists are in my opinion always important in expansion stories. Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses, good luck!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for being so slow to respond. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
A whole lot of the story has been based on hints and subtext, so hearing that I did it well means a lot.
Nate (and therefore the audience) will get to be more in the know now that the grand reveal has happened. But there will still be opportunities for twists and surprises!
Date: April 23 2024 4:33 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
One of my favorite active stories!
After the end of chapter 6, I'm curious how much of the dream sequence from the end of chapter 5 will come true...
I love the interactions between Sam and Nate. It seems like Sam is getting a bit disillusioned with her boyfriends, so hopefully they'll be able to make up. And if they do, I wonder if Sam or Sam's sister will have an interest in the hypnosis treatments (a twin sister outgrowing her twin brother is always interesting to me).
I also enjoy Nate and Hannah's relationship. It feels like it has come so far, but yet has oh so far to go!
Awesome writing - keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad you like it.
I plan to keep the character's sizes close to realistic in this story (so Nate will never be held in the palm of someone's hand, for example), but other than that restriction, who knows?
Sam and the twins will return soon, so I hope you look forward to it.
Date: April 18 2024 1:57 PM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
Wow, just wow. Congrats on the first arc completion! I know this is long in the tooth, but you wanted feedback...
First, If I'm giving my thoughts, I'd like to sum up where we are, because for me, that's part of what might come next.
So everything has been building to this point, but there's so much more for the characters to go.
First, now we have Hannah, Nate, Jess in a polyamorous relationship (more on that later). Second we have the growing/puberty/shrinking. Hannah is only 5'3" with her goal to far exceed her brother's projected height of 6'2" and Nate wanting to push down to 3'10". I'd say at least the high school years need coverage! Third, we have seeds for side stories anytime you want to take a break and play in the future. Finally, there is the last pieces from the first arc I'd describe as the five stages of Nate.
As for the first; I'd like to see a similar, slow slice of life second arc. Each of the three partners needs some time to adapt, interact and show off.
First is Hannah. I've loved Hannah, her dominance, dull social ineptness, and cuteness with the exception of she hasn't really gotten reciprocity. Hannah is always pleasuring, never pleasured. The scenes, in the gym with the weights, the thigh lift et al are marvelous; but she is pleasuring Nate and Jess. Which is normal. But now that she's in puberty, I'd like to see her figure grow out (hips, thighs, buttocks, and breasts) as well as a description of say, her first sexual interaction with Nate. My theory is, once she does; Hannah's nature of pleasure seeking, dominance and competitiveness becomes triggered and she is voracious. I have ideas on that, but to me, Hannah's next arc is one of jealousy (ie Sam coming back wanting to be friends) and awakening sexually to Nate.
Nate's arc has come full to acceptance, but his challenge is tied to Jess. He's in a relationship, whether he or she like it or not. I liked how with Jess, she's a little resentful/jealous of him. And why wouldn't she be? She's THE submissive and clearly in love with Hannah. But Hannah clearly loves Nate more, Nate will be far smaller than she can ever be, fulfilling both her and Hannah's fetish fantasies. For Nate's part, he's nervous and uncomfortable that this hyperintelligent girl that doesn't like him is going to be around him and much bigger than him sooner or later as well as her and Hannah having been together romantically longer than him. To me the culmination is Hannah forcing them to confront and resolve their issues and engaging in a threesome where they acknowledge one another/become closer
As for the side characters, some probably need to end their ties a little. Sam is clearly to me on the way out. She can be a source of resentment from Hannah, but that has to work its course, maybe with resolution. Kerry has real potential, with Hannah getting an idea of hooking her with one of the geeks provided she plays nice. Maybe the heavy one? Hypnosis could help him lose weight and her grow?
Anyway, those are my thoughts, hope they were helpful and great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate your detailed and thoughtful reviews.
I don't know exactly when the story will wrap up, but I definitely plan to cover the next few years at least.
Hannah will absolutely start to experience arousal and look to her partners for fulfilment going forward.
As for Jess and Nate, I have some plans for the next chapter. There's going to be a further reveal that will explain some things that were left out of the end of this chapter and result in a confrontation. That won't immediately resolve all the issues, but it will get things out in the open.
You've definitely given me stuff to think about, so thanks again!
P.S. I did get your e-mail from a couple of months ago, but Giantess World kept throwing an error message when I tried to reply so if you didn't get a response (or got 3 of them) that's why.
Date: April 17 2024 2:39 PM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
This chapter gives the whole story more cohesion, amazing work.
Whatever you'll be working on, I'd like to read.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I've got some fun ideas, so if it looks like planning for this story's future is going to take a while, I might be able to post something shorter in the meantime.
Date: April 16 2024 3:46 PM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
I really like where your story is going! Take all the time you need.
I always loved the duo Hannah and Jess and i adore the voyeur chapters where Nate spy on them. I really hope you will keep write them! In fact, since Jess is going to share Hannah with Nate, i would really like to see a change of character in her, like starting to really despise Nate and finding any way possible to push him away from her girlfriend.
Finally, i hope we will get more in touch with Hannah's friends and their growth spurts! Maybe we will also meet their brothers?
I wish you the very best! I'll wait patiently for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
I really enjoy writing Hannah and Jess' interactions too, it's just a matter of working them in without making Nate seem like a total creep, lol. But now that things are more out in the open, I can hopefully reveal more, especially Jess and her feelings and motivations.
I plan to do more with Hannah's friends in the future too, I just have to find ways to make them stand out from all the other tall girls in the story.
Date: April 16 2024 3:19 PM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
Nice chapter!
Now that everything is out in the open and Hannah is officially in puberty, I hope that the heights and growth rates of the girls will start to go through the roof from now on.
I also hope we have not seen the last of Kerry and Alice!
Maybe have Kerry start bullying Nate again after vacation, confident that she is taller than Alice again following a summer growth spurt, only for Alice to reveal that she is now taller than Kerry with heels on without wearing any of her own!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
The changes will definitely accelerate in the following chapters. Kerry and Alice will continue being part of the story for the foreseeable future; there's more I want to do with both of them.
Please look forward to it!
Date: April 16 2024 7:03 AM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
Loved the new update. Worth the wait.
Would love to see Hannah grow passing 6 ft , more than her dad's height and Nate shrink down to 4 ft or less.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Hannah will absolutely keep growing. She has a long way to go before she will be satisfied with her height.
Date: April 15 2024 4:24 PM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
Pretty good story so far. I hope we can get some of the PoV from the other characters, especially Hannah. Hannah seems to be near-obsessed with her brother, and it would interesting to further explore that. She almost reminds me of a yandere (idk if ur familiar with the term, but basically it means crazy obsessive girl; maybe that can give you some inspiration).
I also think it might be interesting to have the girls that are growing taller start to have a thing for shorter boys due to the power they feel over them. Who knows, maybe some of them can try and romantically go after our protagonist. Or maybe have Sam reenter the story and start to view our protagonist as cute.
I’m just throwing our ideas here, but whichever direction you go, I’m sure it’ll be good. Keep up the good work.
Date: April 15 2024 4:24 PM Title: How I Learned to Stop Worrying and Love My Sister
Pretty good story so far. I hope we can get some of the PoV from the other characters, especially Hannah. Hannah seems to be near-obsessed with her brother, and it would interesting to further explore that. She almost reminds me of a yandere (idk if ur familiar with the term, but basically it means crazy obsessive girl; maybe that can give you some inspiration).
I also think it might be interesting to have the girls that are growing taller start to have a thing for shorter boys due to the power they feel over them. Who knows, maybe some of them can try and romantically go after our protagonist. Or maybe have Sam reenter the story and start to view our protagonist as cute.
I’m just throwing our ideas here, but whichever direction you go, I’m sure it’ll be good. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying my story.
I have found Nate's PoV to be somewhat limiting, but it seems like it would be awkward to switch now. That said, I have considered doing some side-stories to show other viewpoints and events that Nate wasn't around for.
I think yandere (at least the usual portrayal with insanity and murdery tendencies) doesn't match Hannah's personality, but it is an interesting comparison. She is pretty obsessed with Nate.
Sam is definitely coming back, though I'm not sure what her and Nate's relationship is going to end up looking like.
Thank you for sharing your ideas with me.
Date: March 17 2024 1:05 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
This story is incredible! Do you have an idea of when you will post the next chapter?
Thanks again I have really enjoyed this !
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far.
Unfortunately, I'm still not sure when I'll be able to update it. I've written about half of it, but the second half should come faster.
Maybe a couple of weeks. Although I've said that before and been wrong, lol.
Date: February 18 2024 2:36 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
First, I'm really liking this story! Big fan of giantess little siscest.
As far as the story goes, SPOILERS
I'm glad Hannah is expressing sexual interest in him/enjoying soft domning him. From how you've written it, the dummy has realized she kinda fucked him for life with her little hypnosis thing. My hope is she started teasing him out of pity/because it was funny and it's evolved into her actually having some feelings toward him. That's me.
I'll be the bad person and say I don't want Sam and Nate to reconcile. I like that downer moment, hopefully with him getting some good closure. I think you did a good job with Kerry, with hopefully a followup on what you put at the end of her section.
That's what I'd recommend, at least. You seemed to imply Kerry was done etc. But if I may, I think that and where I think it may be going might be a mistake? Or at least less ambitious? Kerry basically being ruined for other men by having experienced her fetish with Nate is awesome, as is her having to basically learn to be nice in order to get with him. It'd even be funny for a bigger Hannah to disapprove of her cause she's not good enough for Nate.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
The end of the next chapter will really get into Hannah's feelings and motivations. I've been kinda limited so far due to Nate being the POV character. Hopefully, I'll stick the landing there. 😅
I don't have anything further planned with Kerry, but honestly, I don't have much planned at all past the end of the next chapter, lol. I am definitely going to continue the story, it's not even close to being done, but I don't know what shape it will take yet. That said, Kerry is really fun to write, so giving her more to do in later chapters sounds good to me. 😀👍
Date: February 17 2024 5:58 PM Title: The Bigger They Are, The Harder I Fall
I hope Nate and Sam reconnect!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
It won't be quite yet, but Sam will make a comeback.
Date: February 15 2024 4:40 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Nice story! I like how it is progressing
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll do my best to stick the landing too.
Date: February 15 2024 9:15 AM Title: The Bigger They Are, The Harder I Fall
Thank you for this nice new chapter!
I'm pleased to see the story development is going strong, keep up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. This chapter and the next are going to be important plot wise, so I'll do my best to stay strong. 💪
Date: February 15 2024 3:03 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Personally, I hope that the pacing of the story will increase some more so we can read more about characters growing over the years while Nate stays the same.
I really like Hannah and I want her to grow even faster!
Like, maybe Hannah starts growing like crazy once she hits puberty, so her parents send her to a special clinic for about a year to be studied. However, the doctors do not find any abnormalities and once she comes home Nate is shocked to find that his sister has become the tallest in the family at over 7 feet tall!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Chapters 4 and 5 were supposed to be just one but the basketball/Kerry storyline grew too big. So the pace should be more like 6 months per chapter. But I am getting pretty close to the grand reveal, and things might speed up after that.
Date: January 03 2024 7:26 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
So I just read all three stories. I just see a good young man's wife being destroyed by jealous little sister. I like to think that she tries to fix some of it. But I don't see things turn out well for him. Looks to me like things are going to go down a dark hole for him. it'd be one thing puberty did maybe let them grow in other areas become swimmer fit. and maybe his genital getting bigger so he can satisfy taller girls. I don't know if I'll keep reading this I'm type of guy that likes a happy ending. don't get me wrong I like to see the trials that people have to go through to get to a happy ending but.
But hey this is your story you write the story you want to write you can't make everyone happy.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The end of chapter 3 and the first part of chapter 4 is a pretty low point for the protag. I do plan on a happy ending but I understand if it's not enough/taking too long for you.