[Report This]Date: January 17 2025 11:38 PM Title: Unforeseen Side Effects
Always glad to see an update on this story!
We got so much growth this chapter (and even a little shrinking).
Very surprised Michelle grew so much, but I guess someone 1. from a tall family, 2. in puberty and 3. on hypnosis is bound to grow grow grow.
Very interested to see what exactly Kerry and her minions have planned. Jess said in chapter 7 that the recordings were only used to maintain an active hypnosis setting, and couldn't start something on their own. Maybe Jess was wrong, or did she give Kerry hypnosis when she was mad at Nate, or maybe one of Kerry's minions has been doing her own research?
Looking forward to the next update
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
The girls are getting big! Michelle in particular got so tall for the reasons you mentioned, and the fact that she was already pretty tall. She was 5'6" when she was introduced in chapter 5.
As far as Kerry is concerned, I can't elaborate due to spoilers, but those are all good guesses.
[Report This]Date: January 16 2025 4:40 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Nice chapter, I did miss the story
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm trying to be more consistent when it comes to putting aside time to write, so maybe I can upload more in the future. No promises, though. XD
[Report This]Date: January 15 2025 2:32 AM Title: Unforeseen Side Effects
Yes! So happy to see more of this story! I know I'd love to get new chapters more frequently, but I also see how much work you put into it and applaud your skills.
I was practically yelling at the words about how Kerry clearly stole a hypnosis recording from Alice. I have to admit that I find it surprising no one suspects that's what happened. Pretty reckless of Jess to have created those in the first place, but it should be interesting to see how it all gets fixed.
I especially love seeing the moments Hannah truly comforts Nate with her larger size, being the ultimate protector in the relationship. She's normally always sporting the dom attitude, but seeing her gentle side adds so much more!
It's also crazy how fast she's growing! One can only imagine how big she'll be by the time she's Nate's current age
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'd love to be able to upload more often. :) I'm trying to get faster/more consistent with my writing. It's hard but fingers crossed for at least a little improvement there.
I can neither confirm or deny anything about Kerry's plan, lol, but that is a very good guess. I will say that everyone involved in the hypnosis stuff is pretty lax when it comes to operational security, not just Jess.
I'm glad you're enjoying Hannah's various sides. I really got to explore her personality this chapter. And, yeah, she really is sprouting up now, lol. She's going to get so tall!
Date: January 14 2025 4:11 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Well worth the wait.
1. Kerry is a nice foil and plot device. Hope she comes back bigger and better. It'd be nice if she wasn't something Hannah could just brute force her way around.
2. Loved hannah's personality, going between huffy and petulant to dominant and fun.
3. Glad Hannah's getting curves. I half expected as you mentioned the Zero Suit and Sam spilling out that'd cause Hannah to fixate on getting HUGE up top given her competitive and jealous nature.
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Kerry's also really fun to write, lol. I'm excited to get to her return. I don't know how the resulting showdown will go, though. Hopefully, I can come up with something epic.
I love writing Hannah as confident, competent, and sexy, but I also like it when her more childish side comes through too.
Hannah will definitely end up curvy (even if she never did hypnosis, lol), I just wanted to take it slow since she's just entering puberty. Her getting competitive and jealous about it is something that would match her personality though. I might have to steal that idea, lol.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2024 11:37 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Really great series, can’t wait for the heights to become a lot bigger and the comparisons that follow. Hope the next chapter is coming smoothly and that we will get some big progress!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Faster growth is on the way!
I'm aiming to post the next chapter before the end of this month. It might end up being early January but I'm going to try to avoid that.
[Report This]Date: October 29 2024 8:15 PM Title: Unintended Consequences
Amazing - so glad you returned with a new update!
I'm glad Kerry is getting her just deserts after all the trouble she cause Sam and Nate. "There's one person [Kerry] I'm glad isn't doing hypnosis." Foreshadowing?
I'm glad Sam (and fam) is back in the picture. Interested to see how much taller than her brother Taylor will become. If she starts on hypnosis, she might even outgrow her sister!
Looking forward to seeing the effect of the new hypnosis on Nate (shrinking) and Hannah (puberty).
Thank you for writing this story - keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's good to be back!
I'm glad you're interested in the future developments. This chapter and the last one wrapped up a bunch of stuff, so I had to bring in new plot threads for the story going forward. Things will definitely progress quickly from here.
Of course, I can't spoil any of it, but big things are coming for several characters (pun intended).
Date: October 11 2024 5:11 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
A very nice entry. Congrats on getting over the hump!
My thoughts
1. Kerry is being humbled, hopefully she has a light at the end of the tunnel
2. I feel like Sam got off easy.
3. Jess got some much needed characterization and development. Going forward I feel like there's going to be a moment where she dwarfs Nate and is going to need to really fight the urge to push him aside out of jealousy.
4. Interesting choice to have Nate go for cunnilingus instead of using his inserting himself.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
1. I'm not sure where Kerry will end up once the story's over, but I do have some fun stuff planned. She's definitely learning from her recent experiences, but the answer she comes up with remains to be seen.
2. Hannah agrees with you, lol. I never really saw her as needing punishment, per se. But I understand the sentiment.
3. I'm glad that part came across well. Her and Nate still have a ways to go (as long as I can hold back the urge to just write everyone getting along, lol).
4. From his point of view, that day was about Hannah's pleasure first, and working things out so Jess could participate too. For me, it means I could save full penetration for a later scene.
Date: June 09 2024 1:21 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
I am sure you’re super busy but this story is sooo good! I was checking in to see a rough estimate of when the next chapter might drop. Hoping soon, love this story !!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Sadly, the next chapter won't be ready for a while yet, and I don't know how much longer it will take.
That said, I do have a side story that I've been working on. I should be able to post the first part of that soon.
[Report This]Date: May 14 2024 6:50 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Absolutely love the story, one of my all time favourites already!
As for ideas: Maybe Hannah isn't satisfied that her breasts aren't growing fast enough, so she and Jess finds some kind of remedy to speed things up? Thus adding a kind of chemical/non-magic element to the story? This being kept discreetly hidden from the reader of course, but hinted at through clever writing, like you have been really good at so far!
No idea if that is a direction you've thought about exploring, but plot twists are in my opinion always important in expansion stories. Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses, good luck!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for being so slow to respond. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
A whole lot of the story has been based on hints and subtext, so hearing that I did it well means a lot.
Nate (and therefore the audience) will get to be more in the know now that the grand reveal has happened. But there will still be opportunities for twists and surprises!
[Report This]Date: April 23 2024 4:33 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
One of my favorite active stories!
After the end of chapter 6, I'm curious how much of the dream sequence from the end of chapter 5 will come true...
I love the interactions between Sam and Nate. It seems like Sam is getting a bit disillusioned with her boyfriends, so hopefully they'll be able to make up. And if they do, I wonder if Sam or Sam's sister will have an interest in the hypnosis treatments (a twin sister outgrowing her twin brother is always interesting to me).
I also enjoy Nate and Hannah's relationship. It feels like it has come so far, but yet has oh so far to go!
Awesome writing - keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm so glad you like it.
I plan to keep the character's sizes close to realistic in this story (so Nate will never be held in the palm of someone's hand, for example), but other than that restriction, who knows?
Sam and the twins will return soon, so I hope you look forward to it.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2024 1:05 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
This story is incredible! Do you have an idea of when you will post the next chapter?
Thanks again I have really enjoyed this !
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that you've enjoyed it so far.
Unfortunately, I'm still not sure when I'll be able to update it. I've written about half of it, but the second half should come faster.
Maybe a couple of weeks. Although I've said that before and been wrong, lol.
Date: February 18 2024 2:36 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
First, I'm really liking this story! Big fan of giantess little siscest.
As far as the story goes, SPOILERS
I'm glad Hannah is expressing sexual interest in him/enjoying soft domning him. From how you've written it, the dummy has realized she kinda fucked him for life with her little hypnosis thing. My hope is she started teasing him out of pity/because it was funny and it's evolved into her actually having some feelings toward him. That's me.
I'll be the bad person and say I don't want Sam and Nate to reconcile. I like that downer moment, hopefully with him getting some good closure. I think you did a good job with Kerry, with hopefully a followup on what you put at the end of her section.
That's what I'd recommend, at least. You seemed to imply Kerry was done etc. But if I may, I think that and where I think it may be going might be a mistake? Or at least less ambitious? Kerry basically being ruined for other men by having experienced her fetish with Nate is awesome, as is her having to basically learn to be nice in order to get with him. It'd even be funny for a bigger Hannah to disapprove of her cause she's not good enough for Nate.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
The end of the next chapter will really get into Hannah's feelings and motivations. I've been kinda limited so far due to Nate being the POV character. Hopefully, I'll stick the landing there. 😅
I don't have anything further planned with Kerry, but honestly, I don't have much planned at all past the end of the next chapter, lol. I am definitely going to continue the story, it's not even close to being done, but I don't know what shape it will take yet. That said, Kerry is really fun to write, so giving her more to do in later chapters sounds good to me. 😀👍
[Report This]Date: February 17 2024 5:58 PM Title: The Bigger They Are, The Harder I Fall
I hope Nate and Sam reconnect!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
It won't be quite yet, but Sam will make a comeback.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 4:40 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Nice story! I like how it is progressing
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll do my best to stick the landing too.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2024 9:15 AM Title: The Bigger They Are, The Harder I Fall
Thank you for this nice new chapter!
I'm pleased to see the story development is going strong, keep up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. This chapter and the next are going to be important plot wise, so I'll do my best to stay strong. 💪
Date: February 15 2024 3:03 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Personally, I hope that the pacing of the story will increase some more so we can read more about characters growing over the years while Nate stays the same.
I really like Hannah and I want her to grow even faster!
Like, maybe Hannah starts growing like crazy once she hits puberty, so her parents send her to a special clinic for about a year to be studied. However, the doctors do not find any abnormalities and once she comes home Nate is shocked to find that his sister has become the tallest in the family at over 7 feet tall!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Chapters 4 and 5 were supposed to be just one but the basketball/Kerry storyline grew too big. So the pace should be more like 6 months per chapter. But I am getting pretty close to the grand reveal, and things might speed up after that.
Date: January 03 2024 7:26 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
So I just read all three stories. I just see a good young man's wife being destroyed by jealous little sister. I like to think that she tries to fix some of it. But I don't see things turn out well for him. Looks to me like things are going to go down a dark hole for him. it'd be one thing puberty did maybe let them grow in other areas become swimmer fit. and maybe his genital getting bigger so he can satisfy taller girls. I don't know if I'll keep reading this I'm type of guy that likes a happy ending. don't get me wrong I like to see the trials that people have to go through to get to a happy ending but.
But hey this is your story you write the story you want to write you can't make everyone happy.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. The end of chapter 3 and the first part of chapter 4 is a pretty low point for the protag. I do plan on a happy ending but I understand if it's not enough/taking too long for you.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2024 5:38 PM Title: Coach can we get a Sub(stitution)?
Great story so far, hope you'll continue it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm committed to this story. The updates might not be fast now that we've gotten through my backlog, but they will keep coming.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2023 6:51 AM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
Love it. definitely will keep my eye out for updates
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have one more chapter in my backlog that will be posted on Jan. 2nd. After that updates will slow down, but they will keep coming.
Date: December 20 2023 1:38 PM Title: Introduction or The Tall and Short of it
I read all three chapters on your AO3. And man, I really like your story! Chapter 2 is my absolute favorite right now, and that ending still give me shivers. This first attempt of yours is incredible in my opinion! Don't lose ispiration 'cause this is really intriguing. The couple Hannah and Jess are my favorites hands down. Please keep it up! It's been awhile since i read something like this, and i missed it so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the kind words. Wow! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I'll keep writing the best story I can. New chapters won't come very quickly, but I promise I won't stop until the story is done.