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Reviewer: slogro Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2024 2:02 AM Title: I Love You, Tiny Skeleton!

Such an adorable little story ^^ I love how the skeleton was basically candy because of the ingredients she chose. That was a lovely touch, along with all of the details of how things happened differently to a skeleton. Those depictions of how his little body was indeed different was a wonderful take in this cute story. Great little comedic elements made this a fantastic Halloween story, thank you ^^ 

Author's Response:

Thank you! Writing about a tiny skeleton was a lot of fun, especially coming up with unique interactions I wouldn't normally have with a regular tiny. Maybe I'll write more skeleton stories in the future? Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2023 5:06 AM Title: I Love You, Tiny Skeleton!

What a rather sexy, yet really cute story.  It has humor, such as the ingredients used to cast the spell, human tenderness as in the interactions between Monica and Zeke, all while an easy to read story flow.  Very well written, kudos to you.

The hanging skeleton necklace is hot, would love to be one for the blond in "yoga pants and a pink crop top" as much as one for Gina.

You wrote this as a one off story, and it should probably remain as such; but you left it as a story many of us would love to continue reading.

WELL DONE!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Humor and tenderness are both high on the list of things I like to include in my writing, and I'm happy to hear I pulled that off here. 

I've seen the idea of necklaces with clasps to hold tinies in pop up a lot recently, so this is kinda my spin on that. I think the noose and skeleton imagery go hand in hand and also ends up being pretty hot here.

When it comes to one-offs, I take the feedback of that feeling of wanting more as high praise. Means it was good enough to leave an impact in spite of its brevity, so thank you!

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