[Report This]Date: April 28 2026 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Thomas
Hope you're doing well. I have to be honest when I started reading this, the tension grabbed me immediately. The way you built the scene outside the apartment door, with Thomas noticing the floorboards being familiar from his old workplace, felt like the kind of small detail that most writers would overlook. You didn't just throw him into a chase scene; you let him use his memory and observation skills to find a possible escape route, even if Lisa immediately pointed out the flaws in the plan. That kind of grounded thinking inside a fantastical situation (monster girls, government manhunts, a human suddenly tiny in a world of giants) is what makes a story feel real instead of just spectacle.
The moment Susie punched through the floor and ran with both Thomas and Lisa in her grasp was genuinely surprising. Up until that point, you had established her as timid, nervous, almost childlike in her fear. Seeing her act with that kind of desperate strength made the scene hit harder because it came from character, not just plot convenience. And the quiet moment afterward in the alley, with Thomas sitting in the crook of Lisa's leg, realizing how tired and scared she really is, gave the story emotional weight beyond the action. Not everyone can balance chase sequences with quiet character beats like that without losing momentum. I genuinely respect the effort you've put into this.
I'm a paid artist and I specialize in turning stories into comic pages. The way you describe scale – Susie's fingers somehow slender yet completely wrapping around Thomas, her face looming above him, her breath washing over his entire body – those are visual moments I can already see panel by panel. I'd love to bring your story to life visually. If you're interested, feel free to reach out:
Email: trippsyyarts @ gmail . com
Discord: tripsydraws
Looking forward to hearing from you. My question is this: when Lisa lifted Thomas to her mouth at the end, with all his internal alarm bells ringing but him refusing to doubt her because of what she sacrificed, were you setting up a genuine moment of trust between them, or was that the beginning of something more complicated like her instincts as a wolf-girl starting to conflict with her intentions as an officer?
Date: December 05 2024 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 4.5: Lorelei
This is real interesting it’s checking all the the right boxes for me
I fucking love monsters but I hope the grand conspiracy about humans is super dark and depressing but I do hope that some of the girls can indulge in their urges with the human without killing him
Is Lorelei some type of snake monster since it mentioned cold blood, forked tongue, and tasting the air
Author's Response:
I think you will enjoy where I plan to take this story, it might take a while to get to some of the really good stuff but I think it's in line with what you are hoping for.
And, ding ding ding that's right! Lorelei is a personal favorite type of monster, a lamia/naga.
Date: December 03 2024 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Be Careful What You Wish For
Good to see you again. I remember that I loved your story. I hope there is more to come
Author's Response:
I am honored that you remembered my story. My writing style has definitely changed in the year that passed since I started this, but my vision for it has mostly stayed the same.
Date: November 22 2024 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 4: Lisa
I'm always up for more monster girl content around these parts.
[Report This]Date: December 09 2023 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 3: Emergency Alert
That's off to a great start. Isekai themed stories where the main protagonist ends up in a world with massive big dicked giantesses who abuse him is always a personal favorite and attracts my attention. You have a ten star review from me.
(If you'd like, please add some human futa giantesses in your set up, along with some cruel or humiliating acts. Those fit well with the whole futa/giantess content. Again, this is my humble opinion, you can do whatever you want. One thing's for sure, I can't wait for more!)
Date: December 09 2023 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1: Be Careful What You Wish For
If Thomas was going to get into SUSIE's anus again
[Report This]Date: December 02 2023 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 2: Calm Down, Talk it Out
I'm sorry, is Thomas lying to himself to impress... the audience? We start with him referencing "Infinite Void" only to later suggest that he's too cool to know about anime. Feels like he's going to call me a baka next!
Do love where his head's at by the end of this though. Who wouldn't want to ditch Earth life? And the price is a lifetime as a sex toy for a thicc futa hucow? Sign me up, brother.
Author's Response:
Well, imma be real, the infinite void thing isn't really his internal monologue, its more like me being a silly guy, my bad lol
[Report This]Date: December 01 2023 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: Be Careful What You Wish For
This was fun. The tease for chapter 2 at the beginning had me curious the whole read through. A giantess concerned about the legality of her actions? That's a rarity. Can't wait to see what's next for these two.
Author's Response:
Oh don't worry, there will be plenty of malicious villainesses that would love to have some fun with our friend Thomas. But he needs some people on his side first if he is going to have any chance of surviving.
Date: November 30 2023 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Be Careful What You Wish For
I love this story