[Report This]Date: March 15 2024 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Discovery
I love the RR story line, but due to my time constraints I can not review the chapters as often as I would like to. The RR story line is one of the best fantasies on this site and is high quality in every way. This is simply a great story line. Absolutely top notch, please continue on.
I really like how Lyndsay, the tiny of herself to Francesca, is the Giantess Goddess to David as a lesson for Nina. Such a great story, please continue it.
Date: March 10 2024 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Discovery
So many writers here could learn from your stories about brevity, succinctness, attention to detail as it relates to a fiction intended as smut, power of implication, etc. This site is inundated with bloated novels. Sooo much fucking story that has nothing to do with affecting or triggering the size fetish category for which the site was established. Worse than that are the bloated novels written by prudes who think this is some sort of YA slush gallery. Who the fuck thinks of this site when wanting to scratch their fiction-reading itch?
Not fucking me.
Anyway.
Excellent, stirring chapter. Incredibly hot. Francesca's moment with David on her fingertip near the end is bonerfide, even for one like me who doesn't care for vore. I admit, though, my imagination created a sub-chapter where she decides to deposit David by his lonesome against her vast asshole, and lie that he has been lost. And the day wears on . . .
Well done.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2023 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Two Participants Meet
Not sure what's up with Italian women with weird surnames (*), but tldr: wow!!!
Imho there's something weird with the way you described her hobbies - last month X, the month __after__ Y, then Z... that or it's an English construction I've never seen before.
(*) Does it even exist? afaik it's a pun on Berlusconi + "burle"/"burlesque"
Author's Response:
Honestly, it was a typo to use "u" instead of "e" but I'd like to think I was subconsciously making that burlesque reference!
Very glad you enjoyed Part 1. Part 2 gets crazy!