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Reviewer: Avenia Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2026 9:06 PM Title: The Shrinking Rapture

As I read your story, I could visualize every scene and emotion so clearly it felt cinematic. That inspired me to ask: what if we turned it into a comic? I'm a professional digital artist and I take commissions. If you're interested in collaborating, feel free to contact me on Discord: avenia_draws

Reviewer: ap13rocks Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2024 7:37 AM Title: The Shrinking Rapture

Hey, I just want to say wow, this story so far has been fantastic, and I wanted to spread the praise!  Question though, I was wondering if their will ever be the addition  of unaware full your vore, something I feel is never really around in a lot of stories nowadays. I absolutely understand if you don’t prefer vore, but man a situation like that would be so great in your story.  Keep up the awesome work! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

As far as vore is concerned, I have no problem writing it and have been pondering about featuring it in one of my stories. Foodplay is certainly one of my favorite mouthplay/vore situations. As for this story specifically I cannot confirm if it will be featured but I know at some point in my stories I do want to do interactions with it. Once again, I appreciate the review and the idea as it does make me think about future scenarios!

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2024 5:20 PM Title: Smelly Confrontation

Wow this story got me hooked I’m excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Glad to hear you're enjoying so far! I will be working working on the next chapter in the near future! 

Reviewer: Storyviewer221 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2023 2:13 AM Title: The New Perspective

This is great! I love the sense of scale in this and the descriptions of the smells, this has a lot of potential places it could go. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

I'll be adding more to this story and revise the beginning how the shrinking events occurred so I can fit this story in my The Shrinking Rapture series!

But everything else will stay the same, so not to worry!

- Biggie

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