[Report This]Date: January 15 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
I know I'm more than 10 years late but damn this story deserves a review, I also love stories of a couple playing with a shrinking city and unfortunately it's not that common to find those kinds of stories
my only dislike is the part where it is said that the insects ate those who escaped from the city, personally I hate that the animals make vore of humans (also it is only a small mention that does not spoil the story at all)
[Report This]Date: December 13 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Super fucking hot story!
Date: September 20 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the creative ideas of this story.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love your story Chozo. I agree that there needs to be more mixed female/male giant stories. Heck, as long as it's tagged appropriately, there shouldn't be a problem; there are certain tags I avoid.
@banfield: haters gonna hate.
Date: November 16 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
There needs to be more giant male stories...
Oh God, this was just about the sexiest thing I've ever read!
Aside from some spelling/grammatical issues and some phrases I wouldn't have used I thought it was flawless writing!
Tim was what actually made it so great for me; he's great to his wife, hardworking, and best of all into giantism! I want a man like Tim!
I totally think you should keep him; I'd love to see this story completed and would love other stories with them even more. Like one where the tinies are a little bigger or evn a story about how Tim discovered Becca's talent.
Good luck with whatever you decide to do, friend!
Date: November 21 2009 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I appreciate you reading my story, and although I am not anxious to get in the middle of this mini-argument, here is what I have to say: I love how you write, but am not a fan of what you write. I think you write good, descriptive stories, and I can truly see what is going on, there is never any lack of visuals. Also, most of your stories use micro/mega, and that is fantastic. I am not a fan of the more sadistic nature of your characters and the inclusion of male characters does not tickle my fancy. Other people appreciate these aspects, and I won't knock it. Personally, I would like to see you delve more into unaware with female characters, but that's my niche, so maybe I'm just projecting. In summation, keep doing what you are doing, you got fans.
Author's Response: Thanks. SafetyPin said I need "more description", which is basically the opposite of what you are saying. I'm not descriptive enough? Apparently some people don't think so. Oh well...
Date: November 17 2009 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK...
Needs more description.
A little large and the tiny people could interact with the giants.
Author's Response: Well, I did my best. I'm sorry I failed you.
[Report This]Date: November 16 2009 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
@banfield: Well then it just seams this Story isn't for you're "kind". I for example really like a male and a female playing with tiny humans in there sexual interaction... and i don't think that i stand alone.
@multiverZ: Me too :)
@chozo: Don't get to upset about it. You just can't please everybody =) Maybe with the next Story/Chapter you win also his side (don't remove the male) ;D
Michael
Date: November 16 2009 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
First, chozo, I'm not sure what a "dude" is. However, altho a shemale is a male - almost, she/he can be a beautiful/sexy creature, and more sexy than a female proper. After all, we are into fantasy, not reality.
Of course I thoroughly enjoyed the yarn, but, as said, was turned off by the intro of that male character. I only hope other members of this site make the same comment. I've read many of your other yarns but can't recall whether I was as critical....but let me assure you, they are constructive criticisms. BTW: I gave 5 not 2.5
[Report This]Date: November 16 2009 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, chozo, this would have been a thrilling yarn if you had not introduced a male to share the gts female's pleasure. I would say that only 0ne per cent of readers would care for a giant male - and you can guess who that 0ne per cent are. My wish was that female predator/gts had a girlfriend, or that her "husband" had been a Shemale in order to make the yarn that more exciting.
I know it's your story, and it was good while it focussed on the female, but bringing a male into it rather puts one off.
Author's Response:
A shemale is a male, dude.
Anyway, I like how you give it 2 and a half stars. That's like punishing an apple for not being an orange.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2009 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is awesome. Please don't tell me this is the end. I've Been waiting for this story for years
[Report This]Date: November 15 2009 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
"Is this the end...?" I certainly hope not :) This is a great Story and it would be great if you expand it.
Michael