Date: October 17 2023 4:23 PM Title: Victimless Crime
I apologize it took me so long to review this! I actually read this the first day it was released and wanted to leave a review then.
This story is fantastic, there's so much to love here! I love Naomi as a protagonist (sad to see her go, RIP) I love the scale and nature of the giantess, which you did an excellent job illustrating with descriptions, even if some of the numbers went over my head a few times. I love the giantess is vaguely of Eastern ancestry getting to see more diverse giantess is always a plus in my book. XD
I love the fact that the giantess goes barefoot as well. Oh, apologies, I'm getting off into personal preferences and not giving very much feedback, my mistake X3
Overall, especially for a first story this is written exceptionally well. As mentioned you've done an excellent job here describing the setting and characters and specifically in illustrating the scale of the giantess. I think the characters we got to see were pretty well done, I really empathized with Naomi and felt pretty bad for her, and you definitely get a sense of the direness of the situation. I think my only real complaint would be just to get more descriptions from the perspective of the people on the ground, running from or under the giantess as she moves. Those are the absolute best perspectives to fully paint a picture of how big your giantess is and can help relieve some of the burdens through use of numbers.
All in all an excellent first story and I'm excited to see what more you bring to the table. I will be looking out for your name in the future to read what you put out. Keep it up! XP
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, thank you so much for this review! It just made my day, lmao. I’m really glad you liked Naomi, I put just as much effort into her as I did my giantess, if not more lol. And yes, most of my giantesses will be outright Asian or of vague Eastern ancestry if the story takes place in a made-up location such as this one. For me it’s easier to write them if I can identify with them.
And gotcha, less numbers, more scenes from the perspective of my normal-sized people. I’ve already been working on my next story, so I hope you’ll look forward to seeing it!
[Report This]Date: October 09 2023 6:02 PM Title: Victimless Crime
There are many stories featuring giantess and destruction, and I can say the plot of this one is... oddly specific. As I read through it, I thought it was so surreal that actually turns out quite amusing. I mean, who is the giantess anyway? Why would she wear suit without footwear? How did she get so big in the first place and why on earth would she do that to catch a thief?
All jokes aside, still love the story a lot, it has a *really* big giantess and the destruction scenes is very well written and detailed, showcasing the sheer scale and might of a giga giantess very well. I think it is quite rare among giantess stories so that really hit the spot. Well... I am so degenerate that simply seeing how many lives she ended with just a step is enough to intrigue me.
btw I think there are two typos:
"a young woman of 2 years of age"
"About 5,000 thousand people pushed"
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for leaving this review! I appreciate the comment about my plot being oddly specific. I was searching for a unique motive for my giantess's rampage to set her apart from many others, so I guess I chose right. I went ahead and fixed those typos too—thanks for pointing them out!
Date: October 09 2023 4:03 PM Title: Victimless Crime
Jesus... this was really good. Well written giga stories are hard to come by so this was a nice treat I'm curios what would've happened had she got Naomi lol.
Author's Response:
Hey, maybe in the future I'll write a story in which my giga giantess somehow manages to apprehend a single person, lol. In the meantime, thank you so much for the review and compliment!