Reviews For Dr. Hanna
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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 11 2023 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice start, and a very promising story.  I especially like the "sycophantic puppy dog" description of the "male sex" she treats.

There are a few grammatical errors; but nothing confusing or distracting from the story flow.  Beyond that, your writing style is easy to read and follow along, leading to a most enjoyable story.

I love the plot and am looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: cloakanddirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2023 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice

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