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Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2024 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks for the chapter, love that this story is back. Can’t wait to see what develops between Katelyn and Jake 

Reviewer: Minerim107 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2024 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoying how your characters interact with each other

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2024 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 19

Glad to see this back. Looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2024 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, wasn't expecting any more with this story, even if the latest chapter is pretty short.

Reviewer: stanleysfan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2024 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

amazing work. hope to see jose bring jake back and come to a deeper relation with dom and love soon

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2024 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am glad to see you back and writing this story. The interesting direction we are going is intriguing and looking forward to more chapters.

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2024 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man I gotta say I absolutely love this story, from the latest chapters i feel like Jake and Kathlyn will have moment to share their traumas in the future which would be cool to see. Absolutely love your storytelling 

Reviewer: Musukaiser Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2024 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Man I gotta say I absolutely love this story, from the latest chapters i feel like Jake and Kathlyn will have moment to share their traumas in the future which would be cool to see. Absolutely love your storytelling 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2024 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

Jakes in for a loooooong night. Really hope to see Katelyn put Jake through the ringer under her foot. Maybe take him on a date to the trampoline park lol, or maybe Naomi turns from the shy quiet girl to the sadistic dom when she gets ahold of Jake. Looking forward to your next chapter! 

Reviewer: bluedefender Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2023 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Your story is awsome.

I’m keeping myself to read more.English is not m’y foreign laguage.But you are easy to read.Thank you for your work.And thank you for sharing your hard work with us.

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2023 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh, the horrors Jakey Poo has encountered. Just hoping the wrath of Josephine when and or if she finds Jake will bring justice to his torment. 

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Tiny but Mighty Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2023 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh boy, with the introduction of a healing factor.  I'm concerned, and interested in the level of new trauma Katelyn is about to introduce to poor Jake.

Reviewer: AnonFH Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2023 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

So happy to see this story return!


Not only is the content excellent but the writing is as well. So often, good smut is ruined by poor writing quality, this is not one of those cases. Writing is at least on par with Kickyou who I deem to be one of the best writers of this category of story on this site.


Looking forward to this story's continuation!

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2023 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG! 

Josephine better hurry as Jake is in for a ride he most certainly will not enjoy. 

This was a very good chapter and keeps the reader engaged with the characters. You feel anxiety for Jacob and Josephine through this hiccup in their relationship. 

It will be interesting to see how Josephine will get Jacob away from Katelyn.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: purplereader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2023 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 14

With the healing factor being official, my image of a punished Jake has gone to dust. Though there is still the mental scars that he will acquire from Katelyn.


Hope it doesn't go too south for him because I'm not ready to read what you have in store for this great story!





Author's Response:

Interesting times in store for Jake that's for sure.

Reviewer: Alpha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2023 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

This is a great chapter and the cliffhanger at the end is tantalizing. I just feel for Josephine when she returns to where she left Jake on the couch. There is a lot of things that will be going through her mind while she tries to figure out where Jake has gone. Until she realizes that  Katelyn has him she will assume he ran off somewhere.  

During this time Jake had better find a nice place to hide or he will endure more trauma living under the overbearing Katelyn.

I am anticipating and intriguing experience our little Jake will encounter. He will learn just how resilient he truly is.

When and or if he is ever reintroduced to Josephine the trauma he would have endured at the hands of Katelyn will be truly epic.

I am looking forward to the next chapter thank you for writing this.   



Author's Response: Appreciate it!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 06 2023 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

How can you leave us with a cliffhanger like that?!? 

Loving the story so far! Can’t wait til the next update. Would give 100/10 if I could



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rusty Shackelford Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2023 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

Another great chapter! Really like that Jake has a quick healing factor, maybe Josephine won’t have to be so careful now.



Author's Response:

Perhaps :) Thank you for the kind words. 

Reviewer: 7inch peepee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2023 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just forgot to rate it so ignore this lol

Reviewer: 7inch peepee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2023 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's been a while since a real high-quality story been posted on this website! 

Your writing is superb and the way you describe scenes is just amazing! Really excited for the future of this story



Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the ride! 

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